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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Starfox
Review:
Great Story - short, but covering all the bases, and with logical consequences and twists.
Review By [Starfox] • Date [20 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Raziel
Review:
Fantastic short story always like to see Harry getting his head in the game the shovel part was especially funny because you can see him doing that in a heart beat.
Review By [Raziel] • Date [11 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ChiVayne
Review:
I enjoyed reading this. The trouble with Dumbledore's approach, as I see it, is that redemption cannot occur without the people being redeemed actually believing they were wrong. And Dumbledore, aside from looking at them with disappointment, does nothing to change their views. Not that I'm sure anything could be done in that regard, but just giving them a second chance is definitely not going to convince them to change, or be 'redeemed'.
Review By [ChiVayne] • Date [4 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from deamon
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i would love either a sequel or a side story to this revolving round xander/tonks. maybe making tonks the liason from the dme to the council.
Review By [deamon] • Date [5 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kffs
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Fun!!
Review By [kffs] • Date [4 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from meteoricshipyards
Review:
That was good. And Dumble's death at the end was a nice cleanup.

Thank you.

Tom A.
Review By [meteoricshipyards] • Date [23 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from greysh
Review:
I liked it :) very different, but it worked. don't think they will have a dark lord problem for a while.
Review By [greysh] • Date [14 Sep 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Oakheart
Review:
Tastes Great, Quite Fitting.

Nice touch with the Marakov, available the world over and tough as nails. Low mag
capacity is its major drawback, as the wizarding world can easily compensate for
the pistol's weight and recoil.

SD
Review By [Oakheart] • Date [4 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from twlight
Review:
Interesting, although I do have to say that Harry's attitude at the start of this story seemed a bit wrong simply because Harry grew up in the non magical world so he would know that the non magical world could and would do a whole lot of damage to the magical world if push came to shove so Harry's attitude just seems a bit wrong in the start of what the council could do to help. I do love this wonderful story though.
Review By [twlight] • Date [5 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Genuka
Review:
Well thought out and viciously effective.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [22 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)Skyefather
Review:
interesting idea, pretty good story line and good character development. had some trouble following along at some part cause it seemed rushed and it might have been better to slow down a little. all in all not a bad read. I'll be checking out any other stories you've written.
Review By [(Past Donor)Skyefather] • Date [8 Apr 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LFW
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Great read
The only bit I would think to change is to have Minerva have Albus show his arm or maybe she show her arm and then tell him to show his arm before checking the students.
And that is a minor change in a great read
Thanks
Review By [LFW] • Date [25 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from gaulty
Review:
interesting story, byes
Review By [gaulty] • Date [22 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from APS
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Great story, and the end of the "dork lord"!(dumbledore), love it. keep up the good work.
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Opinions are like assholes.
Everyone has one - but some just smell worse than others.
Review By [APS] • Date [17 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)drdeth
Review:
Great story, loved the ending and that Harry got both the Light Lord and the Dark Lord.
Review By [(Recent Donor)drdeth] • Date [7 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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