Review of chapter "Chapter One" from normanK
Thanks, now this is the way the war should have gone....
Review By [normanK
] • Date [3 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Cateagle
*whistles* Hoo-boy, that's an interesting kick in the head for the wizarding world. It should be rather interesting to see what grows from this well fertilized ground and new thoughts. I'm certain the Council will enjoy picking up some capable recruits and it sounds like Harry and Xander have become quite a pair of friends once they got Harry properly oriented and trained up.
Review By [Cateagle
] • Date [24 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Starfox
Great Story - short, but covering all the bases, and with logical consequences and twists.
Review By [Starfox
] • Date [20 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Raziel
Fantastic short story always like to see Harry getting his head in the game the shovel part was especially funny because you can see him doing that in a heart beat.
Review By [Raziel
] • Date [11 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ChiVayne
I enjoyed reading this. The trouble with Dumbledore's approach, as I see it, is that redemption cannot occur without the people being redeemed actually believing they were wrong. And Dumbledore, aside from looking at them with disappointment, does nothing to change their views. Not that I'm sure anything could be done in that regard, but just giving them a second chance is definitely not going to convince them to change, or be 'redeemed'.
Review By [ChiVayne
] • Date [4 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from deamon
i would love either a sequel or a side story to this revolving round xander/tonks. maybe making tonks the liason from the dme to the council.
Review By [deamon
] • Date [5 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kffs
Review By [kffs
] • Date [4 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from meteoricshipyards
That was good. And Dumble's death at the end was a nice cleanup.
Review By [meteoricshipyards
] • Date [23 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from greysh
I liked it :) very different, but it worked. don't think they will have a dark lord problem for a while.
Review By [greysh
] • Date [14 Sep 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Oakheart
Tastes Great, Quite Fitting.
Nice touch with the Marakov, available the world over and tough as nails. Low mag
capacity is its major drawback, as the wizarding world can easily compensate for
the pistol's weight and recoil.
Review By [Oakheart
] • Date [4 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from twlight
Interesting, although I do have to say that Harry's attitude at the start of this story seemed a bit wrong simply because Harry grew up in the non magical world so he would know that the non magical world could and would do a whole lot of damage to the magical world if push came to shove so Harry's attitude just seems a bit wrong in the start of what the council could do to help. I do love this wonderful story though.
Review By [twlight
] • Date [5 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Genuka
Well thought out and viciously effective.
Review By [Genuka
] • Date [22 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Skyefather
interesting idea, pretty good story line and good character development. had some trouble following along at some part cause it seemed rushed and it might have been better to slow down a little. all in all not a bad read. I'll be checking out any other stories you've written.
Review By [Skyefather
] • Date [8 Apr 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LFW
The only bit I would think to change is to have Minerva have Albus show his arm or maybe she show her arm and then tell him to show his arm before checking the students.
And that is a minor change in a great read
Review By [LFW
] • Date [25 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from gaulty
interesting story, byes
Review By [gaulty
] • Date [22 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]