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Review of chapter "Birth of the Hyena" from Morgomir
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Great story. Keep up the good work. (Sorry for the late review. Internship)
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Birth of the Hyena" from slmncpm
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well now i want to know the willow mutation!
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [29 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Birth of the Hyena" from mountainelements
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Hmm. Loads of mysteries in this chapter. Did Jesse really run away and if so, is it because he's a mutant? That would be ironic. Why did Buffy shiver when she entered the shop? Is she developing a mutant sense instead of a Slayer sense? Why did Xander lie about not being good with puzzles? Who let the hyenas loose? Is Xander an empath? So many questions. Thank for the update!
Review By [mountainelements] • Date [25 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Birth of the Hyena" from TheTurnCoat
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It's interesting to see how you've managed to keep a lot of the main points of BtVS the same without the Vamps. Most of the stories I've read that try to do that usually end up making it way over the top, either with major changes in personalities or over the top powers or... blah blah blah, but so far you've managed to convert buffy into Marvel without any of those oh so, SO annoying things. So thank you. My hat's off and all that. Looking forward to the next update.
Review By [TheTurnCoat] • Date [24 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Birth of the Hyena" from lordamnesia
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Nice! I like how this series is going, so keep up the great work!
Review By [lordamnesia] • Date [23 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Birth of the Hyena" from ShalaDakiri
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So, I take it Buffy's dream in the first story was about Xander and Willow getting their powers?

Anyway, about another reviewer's comments about Nightcrawler being half demon? That was a retcon and I'm not sure what the writer was smoking for that one.
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [23 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Birth of the Hyena" from Valandar
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I have never heard it called "Candyfloss" anywhere in the US ... usually we call it "Cotton Candy"
Review By [Valandar] • Date [23 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Birth of the Hyena" from possom
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This is a non-vampire & demon AU.....

You do know that the Marvelverse DOES have vamps and demons, right? No vamps, no Blade. No demons, no Nightcrawler whose father was a demon according to the wiki.
Review By [possom] • Date [23 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Birth of the Hyena" from Klimmatt
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Awesome story and a great continuation. I have to ask, though, what exactly are Xander's powers?
Review By [Klimmatt] • Date [23 Jan 13] • Not Rated
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