very nice and amusing fic

At least two things that jump out at me? "Nock" arrows. I had to give that lecture to a half-dozen "Rule 63 Clint" cosplayers at the last comic convention I staffed. Also, calling Buffy a "blond"? It implies she's hiding a penis between her legs. "Blond" is the color and the male term, while "blonde" is the female term. Like "brunet"/"brunette", and "fiancé"/"fiancée". It's not a US/UK/CA/AU spelling thing so much as words that we've taken from the French and so we're stuck with their peculiarities.

Nvm, I used the wrong word. Damnit.

Go Buffy. :)

wonderful chapter... and amusing too...
eagerly awaiting for the next one ^_^

Fury said that they could bench press cars and that he actually saw them take out 7 of those things with one

A slayer being capable of bench-pressing a mediumsized car is the most often used way to say how strong a slayer is actually, Glory could bench a bus prolly. They took out 7 by tossing the car.

Yeah, and it'd ruin the Ferrari too. Well, thanks for the update, bye for now.

So does making them a convertible but that doesn't stop that either.

Hope u continue, but when did faith or Buffy get glory like strength?

... whut?

If you really want to punish Loki, put him in the backseat while Buffy is driving.....whilst he's tied up and gagged, unable to do anything except freak out.

Not sure he WOULD freak out, he has similar reflexes to Buffy afterall. Buffy's driving is only "Bad" when her car can't react to her actions fast enough.

Just had to reread this one again. Still cute. So, thanks for writing this, bye for now.

Part 3 is on it's way.

You really need to keep this story going, you open a whole can of worms with chapter two.

Poor Loki,smashed then threatened with a god killer weapon.Just not his day.

oh give me a break about this 'obvious' bi sexuality. Those that see that do so because they WANT to see it not because it was 'obvious'

Buffy was ALWAYS het.

But of course in Hollywood that is suspect anymore and probably part of the reason Joss did it. It is frowned on in his circles.

Buffy is straight and those that think otherwise frankly have their own agenda

Darn I was gone track this story but I really don't like Buffy Bi sexual. Don't get me wrong I don't care if somebody likes boy's or girl's or both. As long as they are happy I don't mind. But Buffy I still can read it. I know she is in the comics but I can get over it. I really don't care if the others are but Buffy a so big No on my side.

Still think it's very well written and very promising story. So keep up with the good work and make other readers happy with this story.

Happy writing.

Interesting so far. Can't wait to see what's going on with them being there. Looking forward to seeing the buffy/natasha thing develop. I was reading reviews and got annoyed at the guy upset about the "gay buffy' in the comics. The comics didn't make her gay. They revealed a bisexual side that she almost immediately went into denial about. And for a pretty large portion of the btvs fandom that bisexuality has been extremely obvious from the early times of the show, whether it's people who saw subtext with willow or if they only saw it with Faith. But anyways...sorry for the rant.

I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes.

I'm wondering when they get over the shock of somebody getting pulled out of Heaven and start asking when, how, and where the two Slayers got yanked into their present Reality. Given how heavily armed they were, figure they were going to a fight; given they didn't seem upset to be there or urgently wanting to be sent back, maybe a demonstration patrol - where they demonstrate to the area's monsters /why/ ticking off Slayers for /any/ reason is a VERY bad idea.

Also, they didn't seem shocked at who they saw, so I think they've been there for a little while...

So writes somemore sos I can see if I was right on any of my guesses... besides, this is excellent work!

Well, since you don't want me to just tell you... lol.