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Review of chapter "Vacation Time (The Vacation Begins)" from immortalsilence
Review:
loving the fic more pretty please
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [22 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Vacation Time (The Vacation Begins)" from deathgeonous
Review:
Just one question, why did you end it here? Ah well, fun fic, thanks for writing it, and bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [8 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vacation Time (The Vacation Begins)" from deathgeonous
Review:
This deserves a sequel. Just saying. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [2 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vacation Time (The Vacation Begins)" from SSanchez
Review:
So that's why she can't drive, makes perfect sense to me. Good story thanks.
Review By [SSanchez] • Date [14 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vacation Time (The Vacation Begins)" from Oxnate
Review:
Loved the first chapter. Didn't like the second chapter. Too much 'Let me tell you our life story even though we've just met'. Also you used 'Yea' incorrectly a lot, which bugged me.

Third chapter was good. You used 'Yea' incorrectly once, but she could have been saying 'Yay!' which is at least pronounced the same.
Comments from author:
The second chapter was all leik that because it was either there or at the shwarma joint down the street. They had to spill eventually and Buffy figured that since she barely knows them that sooner is better than later, when any bad reactions would hurt more.
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [28 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vacation Time (The Vacation Begins)" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
Review:
I think this is awesome. Love the pairings. And I think that the couples would have a lot to teach each other - and can keep up unlike Riley.
Comments from author:
Riley's problem wasn't so much that he couldn't keep up, lets face it... Natasha and Clint still can't, his problem was his inferiority complex which neither of the agents would have.
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [1 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vacation Time (The Vacation Begins)" from Okami
Review:
this chapter was great and amusing
Review By [Okami] • Date [8 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vacation Time (The Vacation Begins)" from GundumM
Review:
very nice and amusing fic
Review By [GundumM] • Date [6 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Slayers in New York" from (Moderator)JoeHundredaire
Review:
At least two things that jump out at me? "Nock" arrows. I had to give that lecture to a half-dozen "Rule 63 Clint" cosplayers at the last comic convention I staffed. Also, calling Buffy a "blond"? It implies she's hiding a penis between her legs. "Blond" is the color and the male term, while "blonde" is the female term. Like "brunet"/"brunette", and "fiancé"/"fiancée". It's not a US/UK/CA/AU spelling thing so much as words that we've taken from the French and so we're stuck with their peculiarities.
Comments from author:
Nvm, I used the wrong word. Damnit.
Review By [(Moderator)JoeHundredaire] • Date [27 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vacation Time (The Vacation Begins)" from SamDragon
Review:
Go Buffy. :)
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [21 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Vacation Time (The Vacation Begins)" from serenityselena
Review:
wonderful chapter... and amusing too...
eagerly awaiting for the next one ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [20 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vacation Time (The Vacation Begins)" from ThePureOne
Review:
Fury said that they could bench press cars and that he actually saw them take out 7 of those things with one
Comments from author:
A slayer being capable of bench-pressing a mediumsized car is the most often used way to say how strong a slayer is actually, Glory could bench a bus prolly. They took out 7 by tossing the car.
Review By [ThePureOne] • Date [19 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vacation Time (The Vacation Begins)" from deathgeonous
Review:
Yeah, and it'd ruin the Ferrari too. Well, thanks for the update, bye for now.
Comments from author:
So does making them a convertible but that doesn't stop that either.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [19 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Slayers in New York" from ThePureOne
Review:
Hope u continue, but when did faith or Buffy get glory like strength?
Comments from author:
... whut?
Review By [ThePureOne] • Date [19 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vacation Time (The Vacation Begins)" from WolfWriter
Review:
If you really want to punish Loki, put him in the backseat while Buffy is driving.....whilst he's tied up and gagged, unable to do anything except freak out.
Comments from author:
Not sure he WOULD freak out, he has similar reflexes to Buffy afterall. Buffy's driving is only "Bad" when her car can't react to her actions fast enough.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [19 Apr 13] • Not Rated
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