Review of chapter "Three Crater Circus" from AllenPitt
Review:
Interesting. Glad to see Kendra surviving, she's not in many fanfics, everybody finds Faith more interesting. I think Kendra could have grown into the role if she had a different watcher than Zabuto. maybe even end up with TWO shirts! Three slayers this early on in the storyline, very unusual. Could get weird. And Joyce will be having words with Giles AND Angel... Poor Spike.
Comments from author:
I find Kendra a sad creature and think she deserves better. Diana has made sure she has rather more than two shirts already. ;-)
It will certainly get weird... Words? They should be so lucky. Spike? Spike will have to grovel like anything if he wants to live after what he did to Dawn.
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Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [22 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Three Crater Circus" from JediKnight
Review:
Very nice job on the update, I hope to be reading more soon.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I shall do my best.
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Review By [JediKnight] • Date [17 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Three Crater Circus" from TroyGuffey
Review:
Loving this story.
I didn't get the D&D cartoon reference till halfway through Diana's fight.
WTF didn't DM designate Eric as a paladin is a mystery.... Nice to see he grew out of cowardice.
Not quite getting why Faith became a Slayer, though. Kendra didn't die, AFaIK.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Eric's shield was the first hint, but I wanted to keep it slightly mysterious where his power came from. Cavalier was a type of Paladin in AD&D (1st edition). Eric always jumped between his friends and danger. He just complained about it.
Kendra suffocated in the fumes from the chasm. (As was the intent) Diana had to resuscitate her, aided by a touch of magic.
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Review By [TroyGuffey] • Date [16 Feb 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Three Crater Circus" from OtteryLexa
Review:
I thought the fight with Dr. Diane and Kendra against Brigham was awesome. One of the better written fight scenes I've seen, I was really drawn into the action.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I tend to feel unsure about my fight scenes, so I'm glad it worked.
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Review By [OtteryLexa] • Date [16 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Three Crater Circus" from trongod
Review:
OK, the way I read this, Faith was Called before Kendra was revived by Dr. Carrington in Hawaii, so now there are three - count'em, 3!!! - Slayers in existence... and two /seem/ to be located in Massachusetts... Cambridge and Boston, respectively...
Given the shown magical knowledge of Dr. Diane, I would /think/ that she did some warding of her place when she came back to the mainland with her new ward Kendra, so maybe the Watcher doesn't know of her. Then again, it'd be pretty neat if the newly arrived Slayer and the recently Called Slayer were to be thrown together soon after Kendra's arrival, perhaps by dormant spells set to alert the Watcher of the presence of a Slayer in her area? Then you get two fairly practiced magic users with little need of the set-in-stone-traditions training and educating the Slayers and thereby eliminating Kakistos faster...
And what about the Sunnydale Scoobies and the remnants of the Chaos Spell? How much stuck with them? Did Buffy get over her necrophilia, does Dawn retain some of Lucy; does Xander retain some of Chief - and I'm thinking SEAL Guy vice Soldier Guy here!! - and how will it affect them all???
And just how bad will Joyce stomp Rupert and Angel's butts for their actions and inactions later on?
Like Eric Chase and the fact he knows about magic and Dr. Diane is /very/ interesting indeed...
Comments from author:
Yup, pretty close to each other. Diana didn't. Someone else did...
Next chapter will hopefully answer your questions, at least partly. Chapters after that will most likely answer the rest.
Butts? They should be so lucky...
Eric and Diana are old friends.
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Review By [trongod] • Date [16 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Three Crater Circus" from Bobboky
Review:
very good
Comments from author:
Thank you.
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Review By [Bobboky] • Date [16 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Three Crater Circus" from Genuka
Review:
Wow. You clearly know what you're doing. More please!
3 slayers that will come in handy I bet. With Faith getting her powers I wonder if the Council will even try to find out what happened with Kendra and her watcher.
Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Comments from author:
Yup. But it might also upset the 'Balance' (Which I never got). They definetely want to know. They aren't stupid and if something killed the Slayer and her Watcher, that might be a major threat.
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Review By [war] • Date [16 Feb 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Three Crater Circus" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written development of Joyce's learning of what her family is involved in as well as the insights into Kendra's fate.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Joyce will get more insight as the series continues.
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Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [16 Feb 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Knight in shining armour" from JediKnight
Review:
Very nice work on the start of the story, I hope you'll be adding more soon.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I shall see what I can do.
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Review By [JediKnight] • Date [12 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Knight in shining armour" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written reworking of the Halloween episode.
Comments from author:
Thank you. It's actually just the lead in to a longer story.
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Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [28 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Knight in shining armour" from grd
Review:
This is separate from your stray series, right? Love that and enjoyed this one. Eager to see what Joyce does with her new found skills and knowledge. Bet Hank will get new insults thrown his way too from Eowyn's view of a knave cheating and deserting his family. Wonder what Dawn will do with her skills?
Comments from author:
Indeed it is. One of the things that has been keeping me from writing as much on that one as I'd want. And apparently the only D&D cartoon cross on the site...
Joyce no doubt has many ideas. Dawn? Well, she might try and start farming under the Sunnydale hills...;-)
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Review By [grd] • Date [28 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Knight in shining armour" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good
Comments from author:
Thank you and thanks for reviewing
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [27 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Knight in shining armour" from Genuka
Review:
Can't wait to see what else you make of this. *squeel!*
Comments from author:
Well, I'm busily at work on chapter 3... ;-)
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Review By [Genuka] • Date [27 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]