Whew, and, Oh...my. I don't know why you held back this story for so long. You have hinted at pairings involving some these friends but now you just throw this little gem to cool us out until the next installment of Faith in the army. Also it is better to let it out than to lose it to computer crashes.
Comments from author:
Like I say I wasn't too happy about the end...obviously I was wrong.
Wow. Not what I always tend to read of course but pretty damn awesome all the same. I did not see that xan/other pairing coming. But this is all pretty awesome still and I like Joyce's reaction. Any chance for another chapter? Maybe one which has Giles rubbing his glasses alot?
Comments from author:
Funny you should say that...
For a while I did think of a sort of Giles/Xander interlude but it didn't really work very well so I scrubbed it.
Xander/Harmony...its been suggested that Amy might have worked better, but I really wanted that sense of betrayal for Cordy and to a lesser degree for Buffy and Willow.
Also Xander is so often portrayed as a 'super nice guy' I just had to restore the balance a little! He was a nice guy (generally speaking) but he had his faults just like everyone else.
Cheers, D. D.
Review By [Goddessa] • Date [30 Jan 13] • Not Rated
The punchline is imagining all those readers out there with a dreamy smile on their face, a faraway look in their eyes... and at least one hand out of sight. Personally, I'll be in my bunk.
Comments from author:
Made me chuckle, thanks. D.
Review By [Tjack] • Date [30 Jan 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
I thought it was funny, it was so out of character for all of them it made it kinda hilarious. And ... well, I think about things like that all the time. Short but it is OK in my book.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked.
D.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [30 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
It's cute and funny. Xander and Harmony though? At least cheating with Willow was believable. Maybe Amy would have been a better choice, at least he knew / liked her somewhat.
Comments from author:
Yep, damn-it-all didn't think of that! Mind you with Harmony there's more of a sense of betrayal.
Cheers, D.
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [30 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Hah! It is always good to see youngsters enjoying themselves :) When Buffy, Faith and Willow confronted Cordelia I thought that maybe Xander's love spell had gone in a totally different direction. Hmm, maybe it really did, but this time it stuck! I just hope Buffy doesn't blame her bed on smoking mice this time!
Comments from author:
One excuse I didn't think of!
Cheers, D.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [30 Jan 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Oi, this tale is to be read with a snifter of brandy, a monocle and two boxes of chocolate cookies. It is to be enjoyed like a awesomely awesome fanfic... Oi!. Cool fic, see ya!!!!.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked.
D.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [30 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Ah... Well... I mean to say... Now that was a bit different from your usual stories. But you did make me laugh, so good on you. Now I'm going to my bunk.
Comments from author:
Well it was just one of those things that popped up...if you know what I mean.
I'm off to the bank now.
Cheers, D.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [30 Jan 13] • Not Rated