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The Shadows Of Another Life

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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from AnFan
Review:
Your story still has my attention. I'm curious about who the two mentioned are that are greatly changed, but suspect it's Cordy and Xander. If this is the case, the mayor isn't the only one who will be upset by changes, the PTB who has plans for her might be also. If it's Willow and Oz (less likely pair) then goes into dark areas that wouldn't interest me as much.

I look forward to your next chapter.
Review By [AnFan] • Date [19 Feb 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Bobboky
Review:
good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [18 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Genuka
Review:
well that's a right mess. I wonder what will happen next?
Review By [Genuka] • Date [18 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Orchamus
Review:
Not bad, bot bad at all, good choices for the group, other than Buffy obviously, and after this they'll all be on another level from the Slayer, more than able to take care of themselves.
Review By [Orchamus] • Date [18 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Studyofchaos
Review:
Still going good. Please keep it coming....
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [18 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Bobboky
Review:
awesome
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [10 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Genuka
Review:
Wow! Burn. Harmony so deserved that.

Yay! Cordeila!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [7 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from banditdoz
Review:
awwwww so cute
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [6 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Drake
Review:
The idea seems okay, but there's a major continuity error. The gang did not know Oz at this time, and Oz first saw Willow the night of Halloween, or at least first took notice of her that night. Also, the interaction between Xander and Cordelia seems to be far more inspired by what it is like in later episodes that what it was at this point in time.
Comments from author:
I think you are missing what I said in the notes, this takes place in season 3 with the events of Halloween not happening in season 2 due to Ethan been delayed from coming to Sunnydale, as for Xander and Cordelia they have been dating a year by this point which it states in this chapter but have not sorted out where they stand relationship wise. (razial)
Review By [Drake] • Date [5 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from banditdoz
Review:
wonderful start I wonder how OZ´s lycanthropy will react to this different strain?
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [4 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Genuka
Review:
Good start.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [3 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Studyofchaos
Review:
Great start. Looks like this could be another great story. Looking forward to more.
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [30 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good work.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [30 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from cloudleonsgurl
Review:
Love the beginning. :D
Review By [cloudleonsgurl] • Date [30 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Raider
Review:
nicely done.
Review By [Raider] • Date [30 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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