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Review of chapter "The Wee Lass" from (Current Donor)NekoHibiki
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Best universe for them to wind up in... ours.^_^
Review By [(Current Donor)NekoHibiki] • Date [10 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Wee Lass" from Morgomir
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Great story so far. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [13 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Wee Lass" from Gideon
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Perhaps whatever Sinyea did to stop the ship disappearing on them also changed them too! Otherwise they would probably come up as three different types on those scanners. One Slayer, one witch and one Xander. If they were all changed by Sinyea then they could all be the same type of magically affected human :)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [3 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Wee Lass" from EricJablow
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I'm surprised that Buffy hasn't made any remarks about missing a finger. James Doohan, as you may know, had one shot off at Normandy on D-Day or soon afterwards.
Review By [EricJablow] • Date [3 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Wee Lass" from djhardim
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Hopefully not the Torchwood universe - not a very nice place. The Torchwood group was the last group you would want to have contact with at this point.

As for what happened to the three of them, I would say that Buffy herself was responsible for their condition.

'"After we enter the rift, the ship began fading around us--But so did you! You were screaming, you were screaming like you were being torn to pieces and fading--And expanding too. The change got to the point that you suddenly became this thick, black fog-like thing. And then, you shot out black, smoky tendrils in every direction--At that point, the ship began solidifying again. '

Buffy wished for her friends to be safe, not only in the present situation, but from what they faced on the Hellmouth in general. "Cloud Buffy" responded by modifying her friends. The blackness had to do with the remnents of the Slayer Essence.

Buffy herself is probably no longer a Slayer.

As a suggestion for their power levels, use the description of the Nietzscheans from "Andromeda" for a guide (leave out the bone blades).

http://andromeda.wikia.com/wiki/Nietzschean

According to this, a Netzschean is five times stronger than a base-line human - not Slayer level, but still pretty good.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [3 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Wee Lass" from kyro
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Go with Doctor who or mass effect maybe Farscape before John went through wormhole so the get sent to Moya with him
Review By [kyro] • Date [3 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Wee Lass" from Zyanadryn
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Ooohhh!!! I hope you are continuing!!!

Hmmm? Maybe the Universe where Dr. Who resides...maybe Torchwood can help get the, somewhat unlost? And you know have the Dr. pop in!
Review By [Zyanadryn] • Date [1 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Wee Lass" from Runewolf
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Interesting start.

Though I understand why Buffy's not baseline human, and possibly Willow (her magical appitude), I don't get why Xander isn't baseline human. Baseline humans can be exceptional, Batman is the classic example, so the fact he's not average doesn't quite account for it... but that can come in time. Just curious.
Review By [Runewolf] • Date [31 Jan 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Wee Lass" from AbscondingCascade
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*Laughs uncontrollably* This. Is BRILLIANT! *wipes tear of amusement from eye* Please, please, please continue this. PLEASE. And so in thanks http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iMrbMPSMmzs
Review By [AbscondingCascade] • Date [31 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Wee Lass" from Genuka
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PleasePleasePleasePlease continue this!!!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [31 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Wee Lass" from Vianca
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Farescape, Stargate, Starcraft, Above&Beyond, TOS-BSG, new-BSG, Back-to-the-future, Doctor Who, X-com, Anno 2070 (good game, those floating bases would work well with Atlantis, now there is a idea), Red Alert, Iron Man, Mass Effect, ect, ect.

Just pick something and see if you can steal or adapt something from other sources, for their needs.
They have right now, one spaceship with a load of anti-matter and no hope to get a easy refill.
Same thing for spareparts.
Looks like they are going to have to find some way to get themself a base of operation, one in which they could park their ship without it getting noticed.
One way of getting easy money, would be to use the transporteurs for space-mining.
Review By [Vianca] • Date [31 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Wee Lass" from Bobboky
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nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [31 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Wee Lass" from Toraneko
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Love it, hope to see more soon. hmm, some suggestions for where they ended up, Stargate universe, Empire From Ashes universe (the planetoid class starship dahak which was posing as the earth's moon, and it's captain Colin McIntyre), X-com universe, or another sci-fi 'verse. i'd suggest World of Darkness and Vampire the Masquerade, but having the Star Trek stuff in that world would be overkill...
Review By [Toraneko] • Date [31 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Wee Lass" from CPTSkip
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Lovely, and logical, setup. Now please continue writing as your story has a lot of potential for hilarity and/or wierdness. Depending on which universe they ended up in, of course. I think I just dangled a participle.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [31 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Wee Lass" from Gideon
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Oh dear. That is just what I was thinking just as soon as they started talking about backstory. Oh well at least they aren't in the 23rd century star trek universe. But wait, that would probably be better for them, since they would have friendly high tech people to help them get home again. Here they are entirely reliant on what BuffScotty can come up with. For Xander sake I truly hope she hasn't still got the beer belly and facial hair!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [30 Jan 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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