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Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapters. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [9 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from TrevaRea
Review:
I really enjoyed this well-written fic. It's interesting and I would love to see you continue it. She dies soon, so how would that affect Daniel? Also, what would happen if he found out she died late, came to see Dawn months later, only to find his other niece alive again?

Would be quite interesting!

Hope you'll consider continuing it.

Treva Rea
Review By [TrevaRea] • Date [4 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from yuiop
Review:
Nice
Review By [yuiop] • Date [3 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from veneno
Review:
amazing start, can't wait to read more :)
Review By [veneno] • Date [3 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from serenityselena
Review:
nicely done....
can't wait to read more ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [3 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Starfox
Review:
Great scene at the end, touching, fitting lines.
Review By [Starfox] • Date [3 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Senko
Review:
Nice that they're giving each other a chance.

With regards to AllenPitts review about the Buffy bot I always figured Warren got ahold of Ted's remains and copied the technology. Afterall if its weird for he Buffy/April bots to be build in the 90's he's even weirder in the 40's?
Review By [Senko] • Date [3 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Yep, Jack's definitely got that 'the hardest thing in this world is to live in it' knowledge down pat, having learned it painfully and messily many years earlier, and it's nice to see him actually connecting with Buffy (and helping Buffy to connect with the already-too-often-abandoned Daniel) through that hard-won wisdom. :)
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [2 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from (Current Donor)ConstanceTruggle
Review:
Getting into the meat of it now. Loved the update, wish it was longer. Waiting for more!

CT.
Review By [(Current Donor)ConstanceTruggle] • Date [2 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Cool. Lots going on in the subtext, even if the plot is sparse/brief. Thanks for continuing.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [2 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from AllenPitt
Review:
Spike and the Buffy-bot, unleashed on an unsuspecting world. Could be interesting. Meanwhile, Daniel J.is going to find the Summers sisters very very interesting. Wait until he meets up with Giles. They can have a geek-fest on ancient languages. And each thinks they have a secret the other Must Not Be Told.
Dawn... kind of seems like a de-Ascended Ancient, if you care to explore that. Any chance Clem will be seen?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [2 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
yay Jack. He is a good man to have in your corner.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [2 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Toniboo
Review:
hey just wanted to drop you a line to let you know that i'm enjoying this fic so far.

looking forward to more
toniboo
xox
Review By [Toniboo] • Date [2 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from (Current Donor)vidicon
Review:
It lacks the heavy breathing and the loss of a hand. Heh. A neat way to deal with Spike. I wonder how long it will take him to get very bored with his robotic companion.

Thanks for writing
Comments from author:
Thank you for reading!
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [30 Apr 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from bradsan
Review:
This update was great. Spike can be so stupid sometimes. She trusted him even more than the Scoobies and he built a robot because Buffy don't love him. I always thought it was the stupids thing he ever did beside telling her he loved her when she was still depressed. Building a robot showed more obsession then love is my opinion.

Buffy was stupid saying to tell him that he was beneath her that was a cruel thing to say.

again great update.
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying the story thus far. We'll see some Spike/Buffy-bot again in future chapters. :)
Review By [bradsan] • Date [29 Apr 13] • Not Rated
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