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Review of chapter "Don't Hurt My Girl" from (Current Donor)Truthmaker
Review:
Xander as Methos, yeah I could see it. Not the other way around though, you're right it only makes sense as a YAHF.

Still fun to think about though.
Review By [(Current Donor)Truthmaker] • Date [24 Dec 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Don't Hurt My Girl" from BDK
Review:
I really hope you will flesh out this story because the idea is awesome!
Review By [BDK] • Date [17 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Don't Hurt My Girl" from draconis
Review:
I'm in general agreement with "vladt".

However, I think Methos would not have identified his 'Xander' incarnation in the phone call as he has always endeavoured to keep any current or past IDs unknown by just about anyone.

Methos would instead have used something with blackmail quality relevant to Travers, based on Methos (assumed) deep and historical knowledge of the Council and/or his ability to hack into Travers personal information and financial systems.


Edit: response to author
Perhaps a trick could be used to get around readers' mis-ID if Xander's name isn't used explicity. He could close-out the phone call something like this: "I'm 'The One who sees', Travers, and I've seen enough to take your Council down." Assuming Travers doesn't know that Xander is also called 'The One who sees' it could be attributed by the reader to both Xander (canon) and Methos (Methos having seen most of human history).
Comments from author:
I know. If it weren't a one shot I would have done that, but in order to avoid confusion, I had to have Xander announce himself because a few people thought it was Giles. However Oxnate has taken the basic premise of this and has written a full length fic that I think you would enjoy.
Review By [draconis] • Date [8 Sep 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Don't Hurt My Girl" from desartartt
Review:
Interesting Idea, Xander is Methos. I would like to see this expanded, but do not have a writing talent to do it.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Oxnate actually has a story inspired by this, it's good you should check it out.
Review By [desartartt] • Date [4 Apr 13] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Don't Hurt My Girl" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
fantastic read, thank you. just wish it was anyone but xander. still a very good read.
Comments from author:
Thanks. :D
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [14 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Don't Hurt My Girl" from djhardim
Review:
A few interesting things about Peter Wingfield.

In 1982, he began medical training at the prestigious St Bartholomew's Hospital in London.

Shortly before completing his fifth and final year at St Bartholomew’s in 1987, he realized that the practice of modern medicine was not for him. One month before he was due to graduate, he made the decision to leave medical school and pursue acting as a full-time career.

Starting in 2011, Wingfield significantly reduced his acting career responsibilities. Returning full circle to his earlier interest in a career in medicine, he entered medical school at the University of Vermont as part of the class of 2015. He received his white coat as part of the UVM Medical School White Coat Ceremony in January of 2012.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Peter_Wingfield


AnimeRonin wrote a story about Xander going as a "Watcher" at Halloween (Warning: it's a bashing fic).

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1796491/1/Pale-Horse-Series

I hope that you expand your story.

EDIT: If you expand your story, please age him a few years to around twenty five. The brain reaches maturity around that age. It will also make it easier for him to get around.
Comments from author:
That is interesting. I never knew that about Peter Wingfield. Though I wish that he was more in shows, can't blame a man for wanting to help people. lol

Thank you. I've read it and I love it. IT's one of my favs.

Well, if I don't expand, then I'm sure someone else will. Thanks.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [6 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Don't Hurt My Girl" from Toraneko
Review:
Hmm, actually i think this would make a good full length story. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks. It might end up as one. :D
Review By [Toraneko] • Date [6 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Don't Hurt My Girl" from CrazyCamera
Review:
Oh I really hope your muse helps you keep this going!!!
Comments from author:
I might, if I don't I think someone else is going to, thanks for review.
Review By [CrazyCamera] • Date [4 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Don't Hurt My Girl" from hpssslashfan
Review:
Fuckin' awesome! I can so see Xander accidentally carrying one of Methos' journals during Halloween, how would Methos have reacted to the 18th century scaredy cat and the prostitute ghost! LOL!!!! I can't wait to see if this is taken forward!
Comments from author:
Thanks. That would be a hilarious thing to see. He would probably snark at Buffy and Angel, then hit on Willow. If I do or anyone else expands on it, I'll let you know.
Review By [hpssslashfan] • Date [2 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Don't Hurt My Girl" from auramoon
Review:
Nice! Having Xander be Methos.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [auramoon] • Date [2 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Don't Hurt My Girl" from auramoon
Review:
Nice! Having Xander be Methos.
Review By [auramoon] • Date [2 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Don't Hurt My Girl" from locard
Review:
Pretty damn cool, great twist on the storyline of Xander.
Comments from author:
Thank you. :D
Review By [locard] • Date [1 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Don't Hurt My Girl" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
So, what happened, was he carrying one of Methos' Watcher journals that Halloween? You cited him as "a Watcher, but not the one you'd think".

This definitely needs expanding on, but I lack the talent. (One does feel sorry for Caleb, almost.. I'm lying, I want to see that shizzle go down.)
Comments from author:
Possibly. If I ever do a full length story, I will go further into detail. I will possibly expand on it, because the idea keeps coming back to me, so you never know. :D
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [1 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Don't Hurt My Girl" from djhardim
Review:
From the third line from the top - "This is Yet Another Halloween Fic. Or it's implied."

Xander was NOT Methos before Halloween.
Comments from author:
No, Xander was not. I have admit, the idea was slightly tempting, but I couldn't see Methos use Xander as a cover. So I knew it had to be halloween thing.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [1 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Don't Hurt My Girl" from WhiteWolf
Review:
Not realistic. I can't see Methos use a personality like Xander as one of his covers ID.

So, I don't like it.
Comments from author:
Xander isn't Methos. Halloween, Xander accidently became Methos. Disclaimer has YAHF on it.
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [1 Feb 13] • Not Rated
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