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Review of chapter "The Dagnir Journeys" from Traveler
Review:
Another well written story. Please continue.
Review By [Traveler] • Date [29 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Dagnir Journeys" from MarieKnight
Review:
I love it!!! I really really hope you decide to continue this story!
Review By [MarieKnight] • Date [19 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Problem Is Solved" from bookworm
Review:
Intriguing. I shall have to read the rest of this and see what happens. One minor nitpick - the phrase near the end is "for all intents and purposes", not "intensive purposes". It's easy to miss if you haven't seen it written before though.
Comments from author:
I believe I addressed your issue. I know it's not intensive purposes but I keep messing it up when I type.
Review By [bookworm] • Date [27 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Dagnir Journeys" from FireFlash
Review:
And a return to Return. :) Neat little chapter. Although I do agree /somewhat/ with another reviewer vis-à-vis the relationship between Ariel and Arwen. There was a lot of potential there, if you had built it up slowly "on screen" instead of going from "just met" to total intimacy in the space of a couple thousand words or so. I realize that the friend(+)ship has had a decade to develop; I'm not debating whether or not the speed of their romance is realistic, just the loss of dramatic potential. Humans can develop intimate relationships in the span of months or or even weeks, so why not elves in a decade? It just would have been neat to actually watch them grow closer, instead of taking it on faith.

On a related note, you may want to consider upping the rating on this story. I'm not sure of the demarcation between FR18 and FR21, and I personally don't mind, but just to be on the safe side? :)

Anyway, there's my tuppence and some concrit. I look forward to the next installment.
Comments from author:
I'm sure this still fits in FR18, I'll up it if I get a message but I doubt I will.

I wouldn't say the dramatic potential is gone...
Review By [FireFlash] • Date [24 Aug 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Dagnir Journeys" from randyzoopurple
Review:
yum ;)
Review By [randyzoopurple] • Date [24 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Dagnir Journeys" from RandomSelection
Review:
Hey,

I really like your story so far, and especially the pairing Buffy/Arwen is interesting an has a lot of potential. But as much as I like it, I do not understand why, after taking so much time to develope their friendship, you had to rush into the relationship like that! It's OOC both for Buffy and the way elves are generally described! Why didn't you just have them kiss a little, starting to slowly explore their relationship emotionally as well as sexually? Instead, you have them eating each other out on the first night, wasting a lot of potential in my opinion!

But still: I like your story!

RandomSelection
Comments from author:
... Did you see the ten year timeskip? Lots of things happen in ten years, especially for a brand-new immortal. It might not have happened had Ariel always been of the eldar but she wasn't.
Review By [RandomSelection] • Date [24 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Dagnir Explains" from (Current Donor)BaronScrewtape
Review:
Been enjoying this read. Your having the Powers basically 'twin' Buffy (perhaps like what happened in the wishverse?) works out better in my mind than most of the convoluted methods used by other authors.
Don't be discouraged by people not liking the femslash. Frankly, there are plenty of het pairings of Buffy with Lego and Haldy out there for the tolkeinverse. However there are almost no non-het pairings out there for middle earth so it is a nice change. I hope you are able to stick with this.
Comments from author:
I have MOST of the next chapter done up, and in fact the wordcount is probably higher in the next chapter than in the chapters previous to it, but I can't find a good ending point for it or it'd be up already.
Review By [(Current Donor)BaronScrewtape] • Date [17 May 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Dagnir Awakens" from Lirana
Review:
There are Vampires in Arda. Were-wolves too I think. Thuringwethil(?) was the most famous, killed by Luthlien(?) and her skin used to infiltrate Angband(?) during the whole steal the Silmaril quest Beren was on.
Comments from author:
Yet, other than during the Simarillion they never come up, thus are unimportant.
Review By [Lirana] • Date [5 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Dagnir Explains" from bradsan
Review:
Oh love it so far. Must confess that a few sentence's are a little difficult to read but then I read them again. No problem.

I can't wait what will happen next and hope you'll be a fast updater because I'm curious and have this story on tracking so I won't miss a thing.

My hope is pairing between elves and hopefully Haldir or Legolas. There ain't much good stories where she ends with those two. Legolas has more stories but mostly unfinished ones and Haldir I only found two I believe.

Well keep writing the good stuff and I will keep reading and waiting for updates.

edit: Oh darn it's gone be femslahs. Buffy is becoming gay isn't she. I can still don't see her as a gay person even after season 8 that's more a Willow thing. Darn
Comments from author:
The pairing should be mostly revealed next chapter if I don't rewrite it. It isn't Haldir or Legolas however, those are actual pairing choices and I would have selected it if it applied. Won't say who it is though.

Edit: Bi not gay but either way I hope it doesn't drive you away from my fic.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [24 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Dagnir Explains" from (Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle
Review:
More, please! Sorry. I got your name nixed up (was seeing you in every category I went to) and I transposed one story with another author. Apologies. Still, I love this so far.

CT.
Comments from author:
It's ok. Should clarify something though, Buffy is not going to remember anything of Miriel's life, or connections to anyone the last queen of numemor might have loved.
Review By [(Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle] • Date [15 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Dagnir Explains" from deathgeonous
Review:
Nice update. Thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [12 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Evenstar Approaches" from BarbarossaRotbart
Review:
Interesting! This story looks like an answer to my "Arwen's Lover"-challenge (6851).
Comments from author:
Except for a few of the requirements, it's similar enough.
Review By [BarbarossaRotbart] • Date [11 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Evenstar Approaches" from ZippySaboteur
Review:
Interesting. I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes.
Review By [ZippySaboteur] • Date [10 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Evenstar Approaches" from deathgeonous
Review:
Interesting. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [10 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Problem Is Solved" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
Interesting - although I do hate the Whistler trope in fanfiction and the Powers interceding. But whatever it takes to get her to ME.

And I wonder who she will be paired with. You marked as "other pairing", so I suppose not Aragorn, Boromir, and Legolas...for what it is worth, I LOVE Elladan or Elrohir pairings ;)
Comments from author:
Alas, Elladan and Elrohir are both not in her cards. Feel free to keep guessing though.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [10 Feb 13] • Not Rated
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