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Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Kindleflame
Review:
Oh Dean is a asshole! Why does he have to be so damn stubborn! Please let Sam bitch smack some sense into him! It's time Dean learn that he does not control his brother's life and that he can let a girl into his heart and love him! Enough said! :)
Review By [Kindleflame] • Date [8 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Kindleflame
Review:
Please update soon! It's been 3 months! I am sad. :(
Comments from author:
I have the next chapter of this ready to go but as it is a non-cross I have to update one of my cross-overs first. I am currently waiting on my beta to get back to me. In the mean time, I will work on a new story in hopes of getting this updated today! ;) And sorry for the wait, I lost my flash-drive AND computer in the same week to malfunctions and just didn't have it in me rewrite all the chapters that I already had on there until recently. I have two flash-drives now. :p
Review By [Kindleflame] • Date [6 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from isolda
Review:
"Avery needs to get her eyes checked if she thinks Dean is 5'6" - 5'8". Jensen Ackles (Dean) is 6'1" in real life and the mug shot from 'Folsom Prison Blues" lists Dean's height as 6'3". Dean looks short next to Sam because Jared Padalecki is 6'4" in real life. (Sam is listed as 6'6" in his Folsom mug shot.) I see Dean described as short so often in fics that it has become a bit of a pet peeve.

Great start to the story, and I look forward to reading the rest.
Comments from author:
Hey thanks for the info. I usually do research for these things but I have been watching Supernatural so much lately that I didn't feel the need to. I've edited it to 5'8-5'10 to bridge the gap a little without having to change that whole section.

Why on earth would they make Dean taller on the show when one of their running jokes is how tall Sam is? Seems a little counter-intuitive. But that's just me.

Thanks for your interest and the awesome review.:)
Review By [isolda] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Kindleflame
Review:
I am so happy Sam and Avery kissed! They belong together. I know she will be the one to bring light to Sam's dark world after Jessica's death. Now all we need is to get Leila and Dean together and then we are set! That yellow eyed demon's days are numbered!
Update soon and stay awesome! :D

P.S. Your welcome and it was my pleasure kissrocks! :)
Review By [Kindleflame] • Date [20 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Kindleflame
Review:
I like this story! I had a question. Will there be any romance between the sisters and the boys? Please let me know. Cheers! :D
Comments from author:
Oh yes! Stay tuned. And thanks so much for the review!
Review By [Kindleflame] • Date [19 Feb 13] • Not Rated
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