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Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four" from DieselDriver
Review:
You do know about using this:

de·us ex ma·chi·na
[dey-uhs eks mah-kuh-nuh, dee-uhs eks mak-uh-nuh] Show IPA
noun
1. (in ancient Greek and Roman drama) a god introduced into a play to resolve the entanglements of the plot.
2. any artificial or improbable device resolving the difficulties of a plot.

To end a story, right?
Comments from author:
I do. However, gods (or Ancients) were involved in the story from the beginning. After all, what do you call the sudden appearance of a brilliant geneticist just when you need one to solve an unsolvable problem? It's not so much deus ex machina in this chapter as it is explaining why the earlier chapter had it at all.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [18 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four" from EasterCat
Review:
Some parts of the story were a little slow going, but I appreciated the effort. I think the ending was stand alone-ish, but it's got room for a sequel.

Thanks again.
Comments from author:
Yeah, this wasn't my best story. But there'll be a sequel, which will hopefully be better.
Review By [EasterCat] • Date [7 Nov 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four" from CageFire
Review:
Nice chapter. Good job. :)
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [6 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from DieselDriver
Review:
It would be mighty nice if Dru could be saved. Brought back to sanity and even maybe given her humanity back. It's not her fault that she was driven insane and made a vampire. Blaming her would be like blaming a baby born of incest or rape for the father's crimes.
Comments from author:
Well, she's now less insane than she was, at least when Cole's around. But yes, I do have great plans for Dru, but it'll take me quite a while to get around to them.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [4 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from DieselDriver
Review:
Heh! Deceiving the family might be difficult if Spike was able to hear enough of what they said. And if he tells them. He's a strange character, no telling what he might decide to do.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [4 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from DieselDriver
Review:
Makes just as much sense as other stories that describe where the Key came from. And I can see how it would be to use it to reopen the doorway to all dimensions as needed by the first.

Good story.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [4 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Three" from CageFire
Review:
Nice new chapter, keep up the great work. :)
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [29 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Three" from bookworm
Review:
Dun dun dahhh...

Dear me, they are in pickle this time.
Comments from author:
Oh yeah, we have plenty of pickles. Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [bookworm] • Date [28 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Two" from CageFire
Review:
Great new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [24 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-One" from Tir
Review:
Good to see you've got Sam and Spike still going. I like that pairing, I haven't seen it before.
Comments from author:
Thank you. It was just a spur of the moment thing when I came up with it.
Review By [Tir] • Date [21 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from Tir
Review:
Why does Martouf speak Ancient? As far as I remember, none of the Tok'ra do.
Comments from author:
Because it explains how he translated Erus Caelum in "The rings of Hell".
Review By [Tir] • Date [8 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from CageFire
Review:
Great new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [22 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from Cutiepie
Review:
Why is it that the chapters of this story never seem long enough to me? Oh, yeah. It's because I am enjoying this story and want MORE, MORE, MORE, MORE, MORE. And at risk of sounding like a spoiled child (which I have three of, so I know what I'm talking about), I want more! I don't want to put pressure on you, so I will back off and be happy with what I get, but know that I really do like the story and want to see what happens next (and the next after that, and the next after that . . . you see where I'm going with this.) Thanks for the update.
Comments from author:
Thank you very, very much for saying this. Fortunately for you, this story is just one of several that I have planned in this series, so you'll have your MORE, MORE, MORE, MORE, MORE.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [18 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from Genuka
Review:
*wince* Yeah, the temporary life situation isn't nice and Joyce reeeealllly needs to be healed. Stupid monks.
Comments from author:
Quite right. Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [17 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from CageFire
Review:
Great new chapter, keep up the good work. :)
Comments from author:
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [17 Jul 13] • Not Rated
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