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Review of chapter "Chapter 4 in Which I Drop Some Eaves" from JediKnight
Review:
Very nice job on the story so far, I hope to read more soon.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [9 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue (Not pronounced Pro-log-we)" from kelvin
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very iinteresting story, keep up the good work
Review By [kelvin] • Date [8 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4 in Which I Drop Some Eaves" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
Nice to see this back.

D.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [8 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 in Which I Have an Interesting Lunch" from CubsKing
Review:
Interesting story. Can't wait to see where you take it!

So, Cordy as a stand-in 09-er and not a dead ringer for Kendall Casablancas? Of course, if this is pre Season 2 of VM, I guess she might not have met Kendall yet...
Review By [CubsKing] • Date [4 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 in Which I Have an Interesting Lunch" from (Past Donor)Cheese
Review:
Good story so far, it makes me miss Veronica Mars :p I look forward to more
Review By [(Past Donor)Cheese] • Date [23 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 in Which I Have an Interesting Lunch" from CPTSkip
Review:
Nice update. You are doing a nice job with the snappy VM/Buffy style dialog. I was glad to see that Keith just might be making time with Joyce, being right next door and all. Hint, hint. Will a young Dawn be showing up in this timeline? I actually like the idea of Dawn messing up Buffy's life for real and not just in everyones memories. Plus points to you for not making any 'short' jokes about either Buffy or Veronica.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [20 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 in Which I Have an Interesting Lunch" from (Recent Donor)betascud
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I sense with my third eye a becoming-sisters-by-parents-getting-together plot. I'm surprisingly OK with it...
Review By [(Recent Donor)betascud] • Date [20 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 in Which I Have an Interesting Lunch" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
This sounds very good and I hope you write it to a conclusion.

I'm putting this on track so I don't miss any of it.

VM was a great show, such a pity they didn't get to do series four+.

Good work,
D.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [20 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 in Which I Have an Interesting Lunch" from Tempi
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An interesting crossover combining two of my all-time favorite TV shows. I look forward to reading more.
Review By [Tempi] • Date [20 Feb 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 in Which I Have an Interesting Lunch" from Oxnate
Review:
Intriguing. And very well written as well.
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [19 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 in Which I Have an Interesting Lunch" from AllenPitt
Review:
There'll certainly be a lot of work for Mr. Mars. Lots of missing students; vanish & are never found. His problem will be in solving any of the cases. Still...there's so much mayhem in SunnyD, there's bound to be a few mundane cases for him.
Meanwhile. Coffee, the beverage of something or other. Can't you just picture him & Joyce becoming friends? Heh.... and it's never too late for Trina Echolls, Willow's identical twin separated at birth, to show up. Well, I can hope.
Have to admit, Veronica would make a great researcher in the scoobies. Though I just can't picture her learning magic.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [19 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 in Which I Have an Interesting Lunch" from alynambered
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I've read several VM/Buffy crosses here. This has potential. I'm curious to see where you take it.
Review By [alynambered] • Date [19 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 in Which I Am Mistaken For A Buffy" from Gideon
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Fun times, thinking all the way back to the beginning. I hope Buffy still gets a chance to befriend Willow and Xander too!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [14 Feb 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 in Which I Am Mistaken For A Buffy" from AllenPitt
Review:
And next to Buffy, Veronica's record seems absolutely bland. Which it kind of is, transcript wise. No burning gyms or explosions... Too bad she hasn't met Kendall (the Charisma Carpenter character on VM) yet, she'd wonder if she had a kid sister here in Sunnydale.
And wow, Willow looks just like Logan's sister Trina! Adopted. Maybe Willow is adopted also, and they're twins.
I have mixed feelings on Mr. Mars (private eye or new SD police guy). Either way could be fun. The mayor may not want them to hire anyone who is competent, and he looks very competent right now... so private eye is more likely. Maybe he can have an office next to Joyce's art gallery? Or the Magic Shoppe.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [14 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue (Not pronounced Pro-log-we)" from PATM
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I see that your average word count with six stories is 860 words. Will each chapter be around 800 words? I actually prefer the longer ones, but no pressure. He he. The scene you set was as strong as the first episode was up until Buffy stepped out of her Moms Jeep. I suppose my viewing of those first scenes is what fills in what you intend to do. I wasn't a viewer of the Veronica Mars series so there will be no expectation of her behavior but her appearance is not unknown to me. Is Flutie still the administer she will report to? I expect that Cordy will one of her main protagonists, and Willow be her IT support? Are time lines going to be adjusted or synched? I go on a bit here so thanks for this match up.
Comments from author:
I try to write as much as I can, when I get the chance. I have lots of distractions though. And I don't want to be one of those people that start a story and then leave their readers hanging so I mostly finish them in one sitting. The ones I'm really passionate about go on longer though. And, yes, Flutie and all Buffy characters are still in place. Mostly, I'm plucking Veronica from her universe and thrusting her into Buffy's. We'll see how the stories change with the addition of Veronica or if they'll exist at all. And maybe some new ones will arise.
Review By [PATM] • Date [12 Feb 13] • Not Rated
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