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Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Kindleflame
Review:
Is this story dead?
Review By [Kindleflame] • Date [7 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from twlight
Review:
Wonderful. I love how you explained the new magical bloodlines, very cool. I do look forward to learning the reasons that TPTB have for not informing the right people about Willows abilities. I am eagerly awaiting the next installment to this wonderful wonderful story.
Review By [twlight] • Date [29 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from WCSII
Review:
*Finishes reading On Angels Wings too... looks at late update dates. Reaches up and pulls rope (seemingly dangling from thin air) wash pan drops on author's head (it's empty, no need to brake the snoozer's neck, we want a completed story after all)*

Did that wake you? If so, how soon before we get a new update, on either of these two interesting stories?
Review By [WCSII] • Date [10 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Hmm, interesting start to the story. I was a bit worried when it started with a time travel bit but it picked right up and I really enjoyed the story and characterization.

I will be interested to see where you go with this.

Tom.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [10 Jul 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Narf
Review:
Nice update, keep up the good work thanks and bye.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.
Review By [Narf] • Date [20 Mar 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from moringstar
Review:
Another great chapter. I understood what you were saying about willow, so good job there.
Comments from author:
Thanks.

As I said in another reply I was a bit worried that people wouldn't understand what I meant as it was the one section of the chapter that gave me two ton of trouble.
Review By [moringstar] • Date [17 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Recent Donor)faithfan
Review:
I agree with SnakeFox's review. The idea of saving Prue has to be dealt with as either possible or not. If Prue cannot be saved, why can Xander?

Also as seen in Chap 4 if Willow's magic training prevents her addiction, the will be no reason for the break up with Tara, will that maybe change her (tara) fated death?
Comments from author:
I have plans for Prue as I never liked how the character was killed off.

True it will prevent her break up with Tara whether that changes Tara's fate I haven't decided yet. Though if Tara does end up getting shot and Willow keeps her wits about her enough she could call Andy and he could heal her.
Review By [(Recent Donor)faithfan] • Date [17 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from SnakeFox
Review:
It's a good story, a little heavy on the verbose language and light on the punctuation at times, but a good story nonetheless.

One question though: if Paige has gone back in time with the intent of saving someone who died - why has no one, not Paige herself, or her sisters in the present before she left considered that she could also save Prue, as her death is still a year into the future?
Comments from author:
The reason Paige's sisters never went back in time to save Prue is basically they didn't know the time travel spell was there as the Book of Shadows still holds alot of mysteries for the sisters and it would take years to understand and learn every single spell and potion written within and what said spells and potions do.

Chris of course knew about the spell as it was the same one he used to travel back in time from the future to save/stop evil Wyatt.

As for Prue I do have plans for her as I never liked how she was killed off.
Review By [SnakeFox] • Date [17 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Studyofchaos
Review:
Your explanation was good. Born with magic, some potential and learned (practitioner), lots of potentia l/ power leading to children who are born with magic (practitioner / progenitor). Looking forward to the next chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks I was a bit worried that it might come across as quite convoluted and hard to understand. I'm glad to see that it is not.
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [17 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from willie
Review:
Loved this. Can't wait to read more. Please continue soon
Comments from author:
Thanks.

I'll have the next chapter ready soon.
Review By [willie] • Date [6 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Bobboky
Review:
very good work
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [24 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from brokenangel
Review:
Nice chapter addition. I'm trying to determine where in the BTVS timeline this is taking place. Is this during the whole Adam episodes or pre-Glory storyline? Also, is there any chance Spike will be dusty in your story. Frankly, I'm not a fan of any of the whiny,emo, egomaniac pretty boy vampires that are Angel and Spike so anytime they are dusted I get happy.
Comments from author:
In the BTVS timeline these events are taking place just prior to the start of the whole thing with Adam. Maggie Walsh is still fully in charge of the Initiative and still building the Frankenstein-esque monster that will ultimately kill her.

I do have some plans for Spike that involve Anyanka. What exactly they are you will find out soon enough. Though at some point he will get dusted/vanquished but when and by who I'll keep that card close to my chest for the time being.
Review By [brokenangel] • Date [22 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Alestar
Review:
I am going to guess Andy. =D

Great story so far, by the way. Looking forward to reading more of this in the future.
Comments from author:
Yup it is him.

Thanks I'm glad you like it.
Review By [Alestar] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Eureka
Review:
Few spelling mistakes, but pretty good.
Is the new Whitelighter by any chance Andy or Prue?
Comments from author:
Thanks.

The new whitelighter is Andy. At this point in the timeline Prue is still alive and well.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from SpacedCadet
Review:
her mom Ira

Her mom **and** Ira ?
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Not Rated
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