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Review of chapter "Chosen" from WhippingDawn
Review:
At least it's an original take on Buffy/SW.

I don't like it, BUT I appreciate the effort to do something unique. Most Buffy/SW stories I've read (many of them being absolutely wonderful) go the "foster sister of Anakin's" way. Yours is the first I read that goes the "screw Anakin, let's have Buffy be Shmi's kid" instead.

Nice try, but for me it doesn't work. Still, 6/10 for the effort to be original, and I hope to read more of you.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review!

I'm not sure if I love or hate this story myself, but I wanted to post it because, as you said, there aren't many other stories like it. I just wanted to try something different and I think I succeeded in that goal.
Review By [WhippingDawn] • Date [6 Apr 13] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chosen" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
I find it very, VERY hard to believe that a Buffy-informed Anakin would have fallen for Palpatine's song and dance.
Comments from author:
Palpatine was very good at manipulating people, and Buffy and Anakin are still people with their own needs and desires. But it was never my intention to change Anakin's story, but to explain it.
But maybe you're right, and the whole premises is completely implausible, but isn't that what fanfiction is for, explore other ideas?

In any case, thank you very much for reviewing!
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [16 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chosen" from WolfWriter
Review:
So very, very sad.

And it makes an eerie kind of sense.
Comments from author:
It does, doesn't it? Thank you for reviewing.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [15 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chosen" from SAK
Review:
A bit depressing, but not bad, however I cannot see Buffy falling for the emperors lies as easily as Anakin did.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Anakin tried very hard to be different from Buffy, and push her away, since he felt he deserved a reward. Also, Buffy was not immune to manipulation (think the Yoko factor), and Palpatine was a master manipulator.
Still, it's possible that somebody with Buffy in his head would indeed have been more immune to manipulation.
Thank you very much for reviewing!
Review By [SAK] • Date [15 Feb 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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