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Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from kffs
Review:
Awesome idea and execution - would love to see where this goes!

Thanks for writing!
Review By [kffs] • Date [10 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from Zephal
Review:
Just reread the story(any idea on when your muse will come back?;) ) and I noticed something odd, Buffy threatened Travers with this:

[“You know what would solve my problems?” Buffy asked in a saccharine tone.

“Please, tell me,” Travers replied, with a sneer.

“Buffy, please,” Giles was getting to the limit of his tolerance, and having Buffy fuel these self-righteous, fools’ egos was not going to help the progress.

She decided to ignore the caution. “I’ll drop one of these on the Council, and I’ll happily do it for free.”

Travers perked up at that. It was clear to Buffy and Giles that Travers was already expecting to walk away from the table a very rich man. “You will?”

“Calm yourself Travers. She’s planning on dropping it from space,” one of the other Council members interrupted. Mr. Wyndam-Price if she recalled.

It took a few moments, but the look on Travers’ face when he finally managed to connect the dots, was priceless. Almost.

“They... You can do that?” he asked Buffy after having regained his composure.]

Yet when they are talking to Lord Sherbourne she says that Travers don't know about the shuttle even though Sherbourne says this:
Do you have any idea of the amount of ruckus you’ve been causing back in London, with that contraption?

So I'm a bit confused, do Travers know they are space capable or not?
Review By [Zephal] • Date [25 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from SlayingDan
Review:
Really interesting story. I like how everything has been blended together, and they work together quite nicely, at least how you've written them. And the character behaviour seem quite realistic based on the shows.
Review By [SlayingDan] • Date [18 Feb 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from HMaxMarius
Review:
*Sends Feynor's muse Chocolates, Twinkies and a Crate of Jolt Cola... (Jolt- All the sugar and twice the caffeine!)

Here's hoping she perks up and lets you continue with this.
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [17 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from agnar
Review:
This has, mostly, been a very good fic, the best of the ship of the lines I've read so far.

But honestly, the last 2 chapters have made me call bullshit. I don't CARE how many spies the NID had inside the SGC. It is completely and utterly bullshit that they'd bring in this shipment of 50 guns and 10k rounds of ammo then just apparently leave lying around so ANYONE can fucking walk off with 10 guns and half the fucking ammo.

Not to mention it then going right the fuck to Sunnydale, and the SGC not even bothering to have checked around there to be sure the NID was really gone.

Sorry but it's just too much carelessness and stupidity to believe.
Review By [agnar] • Date [6 Feb 14] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from Mnemorath
Review:
It was thanks to this story that I got back into EVE Online and picked up DUST514. I blame you for the new addiction. I went from one account that I reactivated to 3 total.

Also the Algos is a NICE ship. good for lots of things.

I also blame you for the $150 purchase of the CE. The Rifter hub sits on my desk.

Now...Where are the updates? Rubicon and Odyssey taking up too much of your time?
Review By [Mnemorath] • Date [9 Dec 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from SpacedCadet
Review:
Eight months and still waiting for more.

Please UPDATE!!!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [6 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from Robby
Review:
Interesting story!

I look forward to seeing where this goes.
Review By [Robby] • Date [24 Nov 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
I just re-read this from the start, what a great story!
I really wish you would continue it...please.

Tom.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [20 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from Traveler
Review:
This is a good story and thank you for sharing with us. I know of EVE but only in passing, but you make the back story easy to understand. Please continue.
Review By [Traveler] • Date [20 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from AlecMcDowell
Review:
Re-reading this from the start really gives me an appreciation on just how much the New Eden technology can do for Earth. Yes, it's FTL capabilities are not good for military applications, but for civilian use? And of course as they've said, the industrial abilities are amazing; they could build space/defense stations and colonies on multiple points all throughout the solar system in what, a year? And that's not even taking into account the already apparently very large Aura Prime station (Does this actually exist in game? I'm hoping for a picture in the future, or at least a description). That looks to me like it's set up to be hub and headquarters for the defense of the entire system- to me it seems like a good place to eventually relocate the Stargate, once Earth has better access to ships; they can get to and from Earth in under an hour and it's well hidden from enemies, the sections can be spaced if a foothold occurs... ton of possibilities. And as soon as they are able to manufacture their warp gates and get a tow they can set up access to nearby systems like Proxima and Alpha Centuri for added manufacturing and hidden areas from the goa'uld.

On a more story note, I do like that the Rosenberg's are going to be involved here a lot. I've seen a few stories where one or both of Xander's parents are redeemed a bit so it's nice to see Willow's get a chance here. And it's great seeing the SGC learning from their mistakes here, as well. In the show we saw them screw up and nothing being done to mitigate that happening again- the fact that at least 3 of Earth's ships were stolen at some point (Prometheus, Odyssey, Daedalus) shows that. Finally in this last chapter I quite like the Earl. He's fun so far and I wouldn't be surprised if the British PM gave the President a very pointed phone call in the near future.

I think I've gotten out all I wanted to on this- hope that your muse returns soon!
Comments from author:
Thanks for a lengthy review. Those are always appreciated :)

"Aura Prime" doesn't exist in the game, and I don't think it ever will, considering the latest trailers from CCP.
It was my take on explaining the need for Pilot licences and what happens to peoples bodies when they become pilots.

I too hope my muse returns. It went so well when she was here... :P
Review By [AlecMcDowell] • Date [30 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from darkenedstar
Review:
great story, i am wondering if/when you get back to it will you be adding in eve: valkerie?
Comments from author:
Valkyrie is a new development, but definitely one that I'm interested in adding. EVE's fighter and bomber drones would be a good replacement for the X302's, or against death gliders.
Review By [darkenedstar] • Date [27 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from reddaeth
Review:
when will you be continuing?///
Comments from author:
As soon as I can get my life back on track. (and stop reading so many other books).

It is not dead. I'm just a bit stuck.
Sorry.
Review By [reddaeth] • Date [24 Sep 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from greysh
Review:
very interesting :)
I like the ships.
Review By [greysh] • Date [8 Sep 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from SpacedCadet
Review:
Months since the last update.

Please don't let it die here.

MOREMOREMORE!!!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [2 Sep 13] • Not Rated
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