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Review of chapter "THE REBEL FORCES" from Stationary
Review:
it feels like you still have another story to write continuing this or a few more chapters, at the least.
Review By [Stationary] • Date [2 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "THE REBEL FORCES" from bradsan
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Alright. I read a lot off stories but I never find a story with a writer this mean. You are worse than the FIRST.

Stopping right here after telling the Scoobies end up in the Naruto universe having a lot of adventures and not writing about is just mean.

You, you evil writer.

Good writing and easy reading. loved it except the last part. Aaargh
Review By [bradsan] • Date [28 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "THE REBEL FORCES" from darkwoofe
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You're an evil evil person! Just so that know that. Getting my hopes up like that! Anyway, I really enjoy this and would have loved to read more. Thanks.

"The Scoobies et al end up in the Naruto Universe, where they have lots, and lots, of adventures--THE END.

Yep, THE END. And good-bye!"
Review By [darkwoofe] • Date [25 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "THE REBEL FORCES" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [24 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "THE REBEL FORCES" from Genuka
Review:
Okay stopping there is just plain mean. A great cliffy but if you don't intend to finish it ... can we say cruel and unusual?

I vote that you either re-open this and continue it or make it a sequel! Its a really good story so far. I would hate to see it fall by the wayside.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "THE REBEL FORCES" from CrystalBlaze
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You forgot to leave this up for adoption and for others to carry on if they so wish.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "THE REBEL FORCES" from Selias
Review:
THE END!? That's not THE END! That's TO BE CONTINUTED!
Review By [Selias] • Date [20 Feb 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "THE REBEL FORCES" from sunraye
Review:
the concept is brilliant and the story was really good though i have to agree with one reviewer the uzumaki clan with their longevity, chakra, and sealing would have been really cool. this was very awesome i hope you decide to do a sequel or maybe just short oneshots to continue cause i would love to see what happens in the naruto verse.
Review By [sunraye] • Date [20 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "THE REBEL FORCES" from ReflectionsOfReality
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Personally, I considered an Uzumaki clan when you mentioned Naruto... just think of one based on fanfiction versions picked and chosen... seal masters descendants of the 3rd son of the 6 path sage whom gained his understanding of the universe and might all contain a spark of mad science creation (girl genius)... no the elemental countries would not survive current forms intact...
Review By [ReflectionsOfReality] • Date [20 Feb 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "THE REBEL FORCES" from Riniko
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Enjoyed the story, but can't help thinking that Xander and clone will soon be a crying mess when they realize that there will be no more Twinkies.
Review By [Riniko] • Date [20 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "THE REBEL FORCES" from Hecatonchires
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I would have enjoyed more of that
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [20 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "THE REBEL FORCES" from willboon
Review:
great story please continue
Review By [willboon] • Date [19 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "THE REBEL FORCES" from Sevae
Review:
Could you do a version where they go as clan senju? Or at least Xander as harishima?
Comments from author:
I've already have an incomplete fic with only Buffy going as Senju Hashirama on my hard drive.

In fact, it's what inspired my Uchiha story. To be honest, I don't think I'll be posting it any time soon. I've already torn it apart, and revised it twice already, 'cause parts of it still don't work!
Review By [Sevae] • Date [19 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "THE REBEL FORCES" from (Current Donor)drdeth
Review:
Great story, I would love to see a sequel covering the adventures of Buffy and the others in the Naruto universe. It would be great if they landed early enough to do something about Naruto's up bringing.
Comments from author:
Thanks.

I'm thinking about doing a sequel of some kind, but I think I'll open it up to other writers after puting down the first chapter. Although, I've got to warn you, it may not appear for quite some time.
Review By [(Current Donor)drdeth] • Date [19 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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