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Demonic Complications

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Review of chapter "Not Quite Dead Deadman" from mithrilandtj
Review:
I love it so far.
Do more!
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [22 Feb 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not Quite Dead Deadman" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written and intriguing opening chapter.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not Quite Dead Deadman" from serenityselena
Review:
love this story... I follow it on FF.net too...
looking forward to your next post ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not Quite Dead Deadman" from Studyofchaos
Review:
Well, let's see where this goes. I'm not going to check the original until much later in the story just to keep an unbiased view, but so far, so good.
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not Quite Dead Deadman" from ivanjedi
Review:
Gibbs and Buffy in the same place, at the same time? What are you, planning to add a 'character death' note in the summary or something?
Review By [ivanjedi] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not Quite Dead Deadman" from Narf
Review:
A nice start keep up the good work thanks and bye.
Review By [Narf] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not Quite Dead Deadman" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Good cliffhanger and fair characterization. My constructive crit: the narrative part works when you're talking about the last few years. It is a bit chunky to read in the beginning parts when you're talking about the present, the last few minutes or the last few hours. Take some time to dramatize it with dialog, body language and reactions.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [20 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not Quite Dead Deadman" from Shinkan
Review:
I like it so far, I think the story has a lot of promise...
Review By [Shinkan] • Date [20 Feb 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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