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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from merpirate

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Please let there be more of this!

Review By [merpirate] • Date [28 Mar 13] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LMiC

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Ohhh... he just had to say it... *groan*. Oh well at least that means it promises more interesting things to come. Quite possibly Wash "interesting."

Review By [LMiC] • Date [28 Feb 13] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DrDamage

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This is good fic.

Review By [DrDamage] • Date [27 Feb 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from OlBear

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This looks to be interesting and I hope that you continue it.

Review By [OlBear] • Date [27 Feb 13] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TurfSurfer

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Haha, Xander and River just seem to work.

Also, Willow seems to need to be on a planet (or moon or "natural" locale) in order to access her magic. Is this just her wiccan-style magic or all of her magic (invocation, summoning, personal, etc.), because if it's all of it, she'll be largely useless during any time that they are in space, which is for a lot of Firefly? Also, I laughed at the idea of Willow as the Golden Goose. Economy = broken.

Review By [TurfSurfer] • Date [26 Feb 13] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LFW

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Not a fan of Jayne and Willow, but maybe you can change my mind.
I am very amused at how many got married
Thanks

Review By [LFW] • Date [26 Feb 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Selias

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Interesting.

Review By [Selias] • Date [26 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Runewolf

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Interesting start. The crossover plot line flows into the canon extremely smoothly. I'm curious as to how it goes from here.

Review By [Runewolf] • Date [26 Feb 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from murdock

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Please keep this up so few of these xovers are good that to see another is great please keep it up

Review By [murdock] • Date [26 Feb 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)

dogbertcarroll

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The rape accusations should be cut. Really they ruin the tone and make their actions seem OOC.

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dogbertcarroll] • Date [26 Feb 13] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon

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An extra couple of funny marriages are always good :)

Review By [Gideon] • Date [26 Feb 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AnimeRonin

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Please, get a beta. Aside from that, I'm interested where this could go.

Review By [AnimeRonin] • Date [26 Feb 13] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from alynambered

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Nice bit of humor to begin with and a mysterious stranger at the end. Hmmm!!

Continued a common error when you pluraled Xander's eye.
And wounds don't stick out of a body.

Review By [alynambered] • Date [26 Feb 13] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid

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Odd but quite fun. Looking forward to more.

Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Feb 13] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from EroSlackerMicha

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please continue this. Willow and Jayne could end up with some interesting conversations as he tries to reason with his wife who is levels of scary and confusing.
Xan and River have me chuckling at all the exchanges.

so please continue and keep up this good work

Review By [EroSlackerMicha] • Date [26 Feb 13] • Not Rated