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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Harry
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Neil always had good taste in art. And the friendship he struck up with Joyce would influence him a great deal years later.
Review By [Harry] • Date [10 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bugeyedmonster
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Interesting little snippet. Wonder if he ever heard of Joyce's death? Or how he felt when he heard about the sinking of Sunnydale.
Review By [Bugeyedmonster] • Date [28 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Elleria
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Very good.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [28 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SlowMercury
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This does ring very true to the characters, and it's a solid, believable start as Neal. However, *ouch*, Neal, stealing that painting from Joyce after she helped him out and flat out told him it was on loan because a friend had entrusted it to her while the museum was getting repaired. The fact that Neal took it in spite of all that does seem perfectly in character -- he probably just didn't think of any of that.

Anyway, good story, and a thought provoking read.
Review By [SlowMercury] • Date [28 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from misdom
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Wow, This is really good. And I can totally believe it. Joyce was always taking in strays, starting with Willow and Xander, and it isn't a stretch that she would hold on to Neal too.

The only thing I thought it was missing was the aging and the using the right pigments of paints and stuff. Like if he just painted it without baking it in an oven then it wouldn't be dry and cracky like a real painting would.

Otherwise I thought it was very accurate to the characters, especially with Neal's struggle to become someone new, and leave his old personality behind.
Review By [misdom] • Date [28 Feb 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from FireWolfe
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I have ta say I love it.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [27 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from HarmMarie
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Liked this.
Review By [HarmMarie] • Date [27 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Martin
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My biggest problem is that anybody could tell the difference between new paint and 100 year old paint. It's not even close.
Review By [Martin] • Date [27 Feb 13] • Not Rated
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