sorry for neglecting to comment on this fine read. thought it was going to be an interesting complicated plot. then "ripples" assured me that i did not understand complicated. very well done, thank you.
Comments from author:
Hey no worries life is busy we cannot always review I appreciate each and everyone. I try to keep it interesting but I get not every fic is to everyone's taste. I admit going a bit out of my comfort zone on this one but hey its worth trying to expand ones range at times. Thanks again glad you are having fun with this.
Review By [vladt] • Date [7 Apr 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Not bad, but the wall-of-text style paragraphs make it difficult to read. Also, when some character is thinking could you separate it from the paragraphs, it makes the story looks a bit neater.
Comments from author:
Sorry TTHM format drives me nuts, I have to work to make it fit. But hey its fun to try sorry its distracting I will try to do better.
Review By [AntonioCC] • Date [1 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 10 Murphy loves us" from AllenPitt
Review:
When Faith finds out about her family relationships in this case, things are going to get tense. So, we have a rogue (watcher?) out to 'restore' the slayer line, and a 300+ year old vampire with his own agenda. And this guy is no Angel..... I sure hope the various cops are understanding, taking a cop's gun away is kind of extremely illegal....
Comments from author:
Yep but at lest they are still breathing. I mean guns and willow are so not mixy as they say. I think it was a reasonable action with minimal violence. Which given the possible reactions of willow was the best that could be hoped for. Rouge watcher more like one who stepped away or was fired when he did not tow quientins lines. One who had the resourses not to care about the council's games. The vampire he kind of snuck up in there not sure what I am going to be doing with Luke.
Fire
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [1 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 10 Murphy loves us" from Cmiller
Review:
Ah... Murphy how you love us.
More please.
Comments from author:
yep he does lol. Only the Scooby gang lol
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [30 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 5 Calls for help" from AllenPitt
Review:
I think you meant "tenacious", not "tenuous" (minor quibble). Should be fun once Faith's parentage comes to light...
Comments from author:
Thanks I fixed it.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [13 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 5 Calls for help" from Cmiller
Review:
more please.
Comments from author:
three more chapters are poted
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [13 Mar 13] • Not Rated
I am working on it. Please be patient. I will do the best I can. I will also try to answer the reviews. If I miss one please forgive me. I will try to address them all in due time.
So Daddy Isles is a former Watcher? Faith knows of Paddy Doyle just not her possible connection to him? Still waiting for the clash of BPD, Slayers, and Doyle's crew.
SlayerandWereLeopard
vladt
