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Review of chapter "Dear Buffy" from (Past Donor)Skyefather
Review:
Oh...My...Goddess!
Supper chapter, I love the back and forth letters and the fact that the goldfish died of old age is great! (honestly, he really did die of old age!)
Review By [(Past Donor)Skyefather] • Date [9 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dear Buffy" from vampygal
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Glad to see an update! This is a very well thought out series and quite enjoyable.
Review By [vampygal] • Date [7 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dear Buffy" from Eureka
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So good to see a new chapter finally.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [7 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dear Buffy" from Willimer
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I always seem to say that I love this series but these chapters are still as great as they were when you started

I normally like Draco seeking redemption and breaking free from his fathers influence, (not that you couldnt incorporate that into this fic, maybe with the help of Buffy or Sarah ;) ) but I also enjoyed his confrontation with Sarah cause shes faced much scarier things than Draco

loved Buffy's pov, you write her so well and in character
hope she appears more in the next chapter
Review By [Willimer] • Date [7 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dear Buffy" from mscecilyunderwood
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Im just dropping by to say thank and how much i appreciate your stories. From book 1 youve written wonderful nd beautiful stories.i can only think of one other author comparable to you in scope: asha dreamweaver of the story first knight. I can only imagine the magnitude of research youve had to establish and wove seamlessly buffys character in the potterverse! You write in everyday language and you havent needed to use words i wouldve needed to fetch a dictionary for. It does not subtract anything, rather for me it enhances the realism, flow and emotions of your stories. I can truly picture them in my mind as clear as day. Aided with the fanart/banner art that were seamlessly constructed, youve shown how meticulous you are. I thank you for that bec for me it shows how you respect your readers. You dont want them disappointed with shoddy work. I would have like to recommend the whole series but theres no feature for that here i think, so instead i settled a long time ago to do so on book 1. i was thinking if people read the first book, theyll definitely read the subsequent ones. Thanks again and looking forward for more.
Review By [mscecilyunderwood] • Date [7 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dear Buffy" from ChaosLady
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That was so sweet and funny! I loved Remus' comment about being the "good one" to McGonnagal. He's SO not that innocent.
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [6 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Loyalty" from voidithard
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I'm currently reading The Road to Carnage and I just want to tell you how amazing this series is.

The detail and writing is incredible and I'm so very happy that you continue to update it.

Thank you so very much.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much! I'm so happy you find this series worthy of a re-read!
Review By [voidithard] • Date [5 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First lessons" from Willimer
Review:
Another great chapter, I really enjoyed the idea of Slytherins playing paintball
also loving the relationship between Remus and Sarah especially her cheekiness
hope to see more Remus/Buffy love in the next chapter
Comments from author:
Thank you very much! I imagine Remus took great delight in broadening the snakes' horizons. And I love writing the relationship between Sarah and Remus! Their father-daughter dynamic is so interesting!
Review By [Willimer] • Date [1 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First lessons" from ChaosLady
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That was highly amusing.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm glad I tickled your funny bone. ;)
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [29 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Slytherin welcome" from FireWolfe
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Very well done this is a very enjoyable story. Lets Buffy leave the Scoobies behind in a way that no one is hurt.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [22 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Slytherin welcome" from (Past Donor)Skyefather
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Once again I find myself mad...I know its not fair but at the end of each chapter I find myself wanting more. your writing is brilliant, and you put incredible detail into your characters. I pleased to see not everyone is a fan of Draco, I've read a few really good stories of Draco ending up a nice guy but most are just totally unbelievable. Keep up the good work and hope to see another update soon.

*hugs&kisses*
Comments from author:
Thank you so much! I am actually a fan of Draco, but one can be a fan of his character without necessarily liking him, or needing to make him a good guy: not that good guy Draco stories can't be fun (or realistic, if done the right way), but the ones were he isn't can be just as intersting, if not more. :)
Review By [(Past Donor)Skyefather] • Date [24 Jul 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Slytherin welcome" from ChaosLady
Review:
Sarah is devious... I guess she belongs in Slytherin. Great update!
Comments from author:
She does! Thanks!
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [23 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Slytherin welcome" from Willimer
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As I have said before, I love this series
The reaction of Remus and Buffy to Sarah being in Slytherin was perfect, neither would mind what house shs was in as long as she was okay
Shes definitely going to cause some trouble lol
Im wondering whos going to have first contact with Sirius, is it going to be Remus or Buffy?
Can't wait to find out...another great chapter!
Comments from author:
Thank you very much! As for who Sirius is going to have first contact with...you'll see. But he'll definitely cause trouble, espescially since his head is not exactly on straight at the moment.
Review By [Willimer] • Date [23 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Slytherin welcome" from (Current Donor)mmooch
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Well, hopefully things will start changing for the better in the snake pit. Woe to the upperclassmen (Draco) that dares to attack Sarah to force her to his point of view. If he manages to survive Sarah, then he has Remus to contend with, and if he gets through that, there's Mama Buffy on the warpath... Actually, his idiocy might be a good thing; Buffy could end the Malfoy line forever, since I'm assuming Lucius would try to defend his son from her.
Comments from author:
Sarah will definitly stir things up a bit, by just being Sarah, that's for sure. Haha, your comment about Buffy ending the Malfoy line really cracked me up. Also, keep in mind that Malfoy Sr already has a vendetta against Buffy, and things should get twice as interesting...
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [22 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hogwarts Express" from mwinter
Review:
Awaiting more.
Comments from author:
More to come. :)
Review By [mwinter] • Date [22 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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