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Review of chapter "Potions project" from Eureka
Review:
Another great chapter. Hope things settle down for you at least a bit.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [28 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Potions project" from ChaosLady
Review:
An interesting chapter.
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Familiar connection" from Eureka
Review:
So the ADOPTED parents threaten and he walks away? At least have him break down and let her know why he is cold-shouldering her.
Comments from author:
Yep. That's Remus, the suffer in the silent type. Unfortunately, Remus being Remus, breaking down and letting Elizabeth in on what's going on isn't really in his character.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [6 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dear Buffy" from (Past Donor)Skyefather
Review:
Oh...My...Goddess!
Supper chapter, I love the back and forth letters and the fact that the goldfish died of old age is great! (honestly, he really did die of old age!)
Comments from author:
Thank you very much! (Honestly, he didn't die of old age, but shhhh....we're not admitting that out loud)
Review By [(Past Donor)Skyefather] • Date [9 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dear Buffy" from vampygal
Review:
Glad to see an update! This is a very well thought out series and quite enjoyable.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [vampygal] • Date [7 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dear Buffy" from Eureka
Review:
So good to see a new chapter finally.
Comments from author:
It felt good to post one! Not just for your sake but for my sake as well - I hate feeling like I'm letting my readers down when it takes so long between my updates. Being an adult who are at work 9 hours day, + the two hours in total it takes to travel back and forth makes my spare time really limited, which unfortunately cuts down on the time I have to write, update and read fanfiction.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [7 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dear Buffy" from Willimer
Review:
I always seem to say that I love this series but these chapters are still as great as they were when you started

I normally like Draco seeking redemption and breaking free from his fathers influence, (not that you couldnt incorporate that into this fic, maybe with the help of Buffy or Sarah ;) ) but I also enjoyed his confrontation with Sarah cause shes faced much scarier things than Draco

loved Buffy's pov, you write her so well and in character
hope she appears more in the next chapter
Comments from author:
Thank you! I hope you continue to enjoy them, and as a writer, I personally hope my writing gets better and better for every installment so it's very nice to hear the quality isn't sinking! Sarah vs Draco was very much fun to write - Draco really has no idea who he's messing with!
Review By [Willimer] • Date [7 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dear Buffy" from mscecilyunderwood
Review:
Im just dropping by to say thank and how much i appreciate your stories. From book 1 youve written wonderful nd beautiful stories.i can only think of one other author comparable to you in scope: asha dreamweaver of the story first knight. I can only imagine the magnitude of research youve had to establish and wove seamlessly buffys character in the potterverse! You write in everyday language and you havent needed to use words i wouldve needed to fetch a dictionary for. It does not subtract anything, rather for me it enhances the realism, flow and emotions of your stories. I can truly picture them in my mind as clear as day. Aided with the fanart/banner art that were seamlessly constructed, youve shown how meticulous you are. I thank you for that bec for me it shows how you respect your readers. You dont want them disappointed with shoddy work. I would have like to recommend the whole series but theres no feature for that here i think, so instead i settled a long time ago to do so on book 1. i was thinking if people read the first book, theyll definitely read the subsequent ones. Thanks again and looking forward for more.
Comments from author:
Oh my God, thank you very much for the nice (and long) comment! I'm so happy you're enjoying the story, and as a fan of First Knight myself, I feel very honoured, and I hope the rest of the series lives up to the expectations the first three stories have established.
Review By [mscecilyunderwood] • Date [7 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dear Buffy" from ChaosLady
Review:
That was so sweet and funny! I loved Remus' comment about being the "good one" to McGonnagal. He's SO not that innocent.
Comments from author:
Thank you! And no, Remus is a wolf's in sheep's clothing... (see what I did there?!)
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [6 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Loyalty" from voidithard
Review:
I'm currently reading The Road to Carnage and I just want to tell you how amazing this series is.

The detail and writing is incredible and I'm so very happy that you continue to update it.

Thank you so very much.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much! I'm so happy you find this series worthy of a re-read!
Review By [voidithard] • Date [5 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First lessons" from Willimer
Review:
Another great chapter, I really enjoyed the idea of Slytherins playing paintball
also loving the relationship between Remus and Sarah especially her cheekiness
hope to see more Remus/Buffy love in the next chapter
Comments from author:
Thank you very much! I imagine Remus took great delight in broadening the snakes' horizons. And I love writing the relationship between Sarah and Remus! Their father-daughter dynamic is so interesting!
Review By [Willimer] • Date [1 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First lessons" from ChaosLady
Review:
That was highly amusing.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm glad I tickled your funny bone. ;)
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [29 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Slytherin welcome" from FireWolfe
Review:
Very well done this is a very enjoyable story. Lets Buffy leave the Scoobies behind in a way that no one is hurt.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [22 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Slytherin welcome" from (Past Donor)Skyefather
Review:
Once again I find myself mad...I know its not fair but at the end of each chapter I find myself wanting more. your writing is brilliant, and you put incredible detail into your characters. I pleased to see not everyone is a fan of Draco, I've read a few really good stories of Draco ending up a nice guy but most are just totally unbelievable. Keep up the good work and hope to see another update soon.

*hugs&kisses*
Comments from author:
Thank you so much! I am actually a fan of Draco, but one can be a fan of his character without necessarily liking him, or needing to make him a good guy: not that good guy Draco stories can't be fun (or realistic, if done the right way), but the ones were he isn't can be just as intersting, if not more. :)
Review By [(Past Donor)Skyefather] • Date [24 Jul 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Slytherin welcome" from ChaosLady
Review:
Sarah is devious... I guess she belongs in Slytherin. Great update!
Comments from author:
She does! Thanks!
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [23 Jul 13] • Not Rated
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