You write so very well. Try as I might, I can't come up with a way to word this next thought that doesn't sound whiny or unappreciative. So please take this with all respect & thanks. I hope your next story is more joyful.
Review By [Tjack] • Date [19 Mar 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from Mcspender
Review:
Thank you for such a moving chapter. I'm speechles. See ya.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [18 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from DesitaniaF
Review:
my grandmother and great grandmother both died from leukemia.
My grandmother procrastinated seeing a doctor about symptoms that led to it not being treated in time, my great grandmother figured she was old enough, had seen a great grandchild, and was ready to be reunited with her husband.
This really hits home. Very well written.
Review By [DesitaniaF] • Date [18 Mar 13] • Not Rated