Review of chapter "A Walking Cure" from raxadian
This first chapter needs serious editing.
Review By [raxadian
] • Date [4 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Weird Town" from JediKnight
Very interesting job on this story so far, I hope you'll add more to this soon.
Review By [JediKnight
] • Date [6 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Weird Town" from FireWolfe
Love to see an update please
Review By [FireWolfe
] • Date [29 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Weird Town" from CageFire
Hmm, an okay chapter. Hard to tell whether it'll be good or not yet. I've seen a few where the scoobies are mutants and related to the x-men.
I notice something odd. In the marvel section a lot of the latest marvel stories are only 3 chapters long. It's a really odd coincidence.
Review By [CageFire
] • Date [8 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Weird Town" from texaswookie
Makes me wonder. I mean what if it wasn't Logan as the genetic donor but one of his female clones that they harvested from. I mean its possible one of his clones was used as a potential breeding device. Technically the equipment would still read as Logan though.
Review By [texaswookie
] • Date [20 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Weird Town" from bradsan
soooo Buffy has two dad's instead a mom and a dad. Well the one who changed everything is really a genius. On the other hand she was already a girl in the belly so she only needed to grow up. one thing I don't understand is how Joyce's gene disappeared that doesn't make sense or did the doctor made a mistake.
Well I read once a rapport where a mother cheated on her husband. She went to bed with her lover and her husband at the same day. The child had the genes of both man and her mom of course. Don't know if it was true but hey it was a great rapport and they let us guess if it was possible or not.
Think about it I never get the answer if it was true or not.
Oh man can't wait for Buffy's reaction about it and logans of course. Why didn't he smell it he still smelled Summers on her.
edit: In answer to JamesBrown who was so sweet to answer. It is possible for two seeds to reach the egg at the same time and penetrate. It all has to happen at the same time. The only problem is it won't survive. I forgot about the rapport with this story I remembered it again and curious as I was I wanted to know what would happen. So I looked it up on the internet. Penetrate at the same time is possible but that is all. It would never survive. Really thank you for taking your time to answer.
Still doesn't explain how Logan only smelled summers and not Steve and himself on Buffy. Joyce is not a Summers, Hank is.
Review By [bradsan
] • Date [19 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Weird Town" from JamesBrown
this is a comment on the review by: bradsan
sorry, but it's physically impossible short of
sophisticated gene therapy to have more than
two parents in any life form more sophisticated
then a virus.
DNA consists as pairs of 4 molecules designated
as: A-T-G and C, divided into subgroups called genes
consisting of 1000 to 1,000,000 base pairs per gene
making up about three billion bases in 20,000 genes
on 23 chromosomes in a human being;most species
having fewer, although some have a hell of a lot more.
(There are plants that have more genes than we do)
when egg or sperm is produced chromosomes are unzipped
into TWO sets and one OR the other of EACH set
ends up in the resulting cell.(thousands of possible combinations)
When fertilization occurs, each half chromosome links with The
corresponding set to produce a functional organism
the instant a sperm enters the egg it's cell wall alters to block
entry to any other intrusion as the introduction of
a third set without removing one of the other sets would produce
genetic gibberish.. And a dead organism.
it IS however possible to have twins or triplets etc.
each with a different male parent if the female produces
more than one egg at a time and sperm from multiple males is present
as each fertilization is a distinct event unaffected by any other fertilization.
P.S.-Gender of the fetus
in humans is determined entirely by the male gene set.
it is possible to produce a female from genes selected from 2 males
but genes from 2 females are only capable of producing another female
Review By [JamesBrown
] • Date [16 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Weird Town" from Tjack
I think you mean Lorna Dane. Lorna Dune is a cookie. If you meant that as a pun...You should be slapped... Hard. Very nice story otherwise.
Review edited for overreaction about the pun.
Comments from author:
Name also changed thanks for pointing that out.
Review By [Tjack
] • Date [15 Jan 14] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Weird Town" from tchizek
Great chapter, thanks!
Review By [tchizek
] • Date [15 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Metal Maiden" from bradsan
ahhh come on curious on this side
Review By [bradsan
] • Date [5 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Metal Maiden" from AtotheM
Huh. Interesting story. I hope there is more to come! :)
Review By [AtotheM
] • Date [24 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Metal Maiden" from Morgomir
Great chapter. Sorry for the late review. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir
] • Date [16 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Metal Maiden" from CastorandPollux
Review By [CastorandPollux
] • Date [9 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Metal Maiden" from RHatch
Review By [RHatch
] • Date [8 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Metal Maiden" from FireDragon
I noticed a few typos but aside from that it was good looking forward to more.
Review By [FireDragon
] • Date [7 Aug 13] • Not Rated