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Review of chapter "Laying The Foundations" from MasterRahl
Review:
I'm afraid this story is just broken. You overpowered the good guys to a ridiculous extreme and the 3 sets of 9 is just too many; also having characters all over the U.S. and as far as Jamaica order costumes from a little unknown shop in a California town is just laughable. There are bits and pieces of this story that can be worked into something good but I recommend scrapping this one and starting over.
Comments from author:
I am sorry that you didn't actually understand what was happening but only four people outside of Sunnydale actually wore costumes from the shop. Kendra, who worn the costume of the Sage of the Six Paths, was killed as the spell started causing a change in the slayer line, one where there is nine called, each one containing a tailed beast. As far as being overpowered, what on earth are you talking about? I've unleashed ninjas from the Naruto universe on the world who have fought on equal footing against such creatures. For all you know I may even have them fighting against Old Ones, the Wolf, the Ram, the Hart, and many other very powerful beings from the Buffy universe directly. It took forces of nature to destroy the Old Ones, or people who have ascend to true demons. Clearly, you haven't understood where I was going with this story and telling some one to scrap their store is just rude. I may be a bit ambitious with the story but you have no idea where I'm going
Review By [MasterRahl] • Date [30 Oct 13] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Laying The Foundations" from Genuka
Review:
Wonderful update. I like how you arranged all of that.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [22 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Stirings of Greater Things" from Genuka
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Where did you get the idea for this insanity??? I LOVE IT!!!!!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [8 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Stirings of Greater Things" from Trickasmurph
Review:
From the old man's comment he was singing bud the spud?
Review By [Trickasmurph] • Date [7 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Stirings of Greater Things" from Trickasmurph
Review:
Tom Connor?

Very interesting story so far. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Trickasmurph] • Date [7 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Stirings of Greater Things" from AlphaBeta
Review:
You are seriouly underpowering the tailed beasts. If faith went as a ninja, she would not even have to go into any of the transformations. In fact, a chunin could take out that vampire, if not an experience genin. Over all, your story has promish, but still needs a little work, best way to discribe it, it dosn't seem to flow properly. I hope its some help.
Comments from author:
Faith wasn't part of Halloween so has no ninja training at all. She was reacting on instinct alone. I have a reason for doing the story the way I have, which will be revealed eventually.
Review By [AlphaBeta] • Date [6 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Stirings of Greater Things" from ThePureOne
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Great story, so Buffy,willow,and xander are gonna be the ones to guard the earth from legions of hell and yada yada but this seems like a good story
Review By [ThePureOne] • Date [6 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Stirings of Greater Things" from Zyanadryn
Review:
Oz sounds like the guy from Steven kings tower series...though I don't remember his name?
Comments from author:
Please refer to the end of the first chapter, where I stated it was a tribute to Canadian who recently died. I had Oz go as one of the many characters he sung about. Not many outside of Canada will recognize him or the references most likely but oh well.
Review By [Zyanadryn] • Date [6 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Stirings of Greater Things" from SamDragon
Review:
There was a series of books I read years ago with a Spellsinger in them called Jon-Tom by Alan Dean Foster. Am I right.
Comments from author:
Actually, I used a character from from a song slightly modified by a recently deceased Canadian singer, something that I mentioned after the first chapter. Good guess though
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [6 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unleash the Beasts" from Chargone
Review:
Well, this has all Sorts of fun potential. Mostly for chaos, admitedly, but still.
Review By [Chargone] • Date [31 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unleash the Beasts" from LFW
Review:
Great set up for more
Hoping for more
Thanks
Review By [LFW] • Date [11 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unleash the Beasts" from trongod
Review:
Excellent start - you fooled me as to the Mysterious Girl, and is there going to be an explanation as to why Kendra is in town at this point?

Format didn't bother me; enjoyed the story as is and wants more!!
Review By [trongod] • Date [9 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unleash the Beasts" from willboon
Review:
great start keep em coming
Review By [willboon] • Date [9 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unleash the Beasts" from Darksnider
Review:
Please tell me someone dressed as Fourth War Naruto because good lord him and Kurama are easily more dangerous than anyone in Shinobi history.

They broke out of megaton shield prison ran across a continent fought an army on multiple fronts in multiple areas against S-class opponents. Their still fighting possibly an entire day later non stop with no rest and their currently fighting 2 S-class Shinobi and the 10 tails.

They also fought 7 Bijuu at once and still no rest.

Just imagine what he could do if he only had time to take a nap.
Review By [Darksnider] • Date [9 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unleash the Beasts" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written scene-setter.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [9 Mar 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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