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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from ChikaraKatherine
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So Buffy is still the slayer. Now that certainly will liven things up. The Watchers will be looking for her. Tom's out for blood when it comes to anyone going near her. Don't blame him. Honestly I'm shocked the Buffy's rapists weren't killed at the first chance. Albus certainly isn't going to help anything. Somehow I think he's going to mess everything the hell up. Buffy should get shorted into no house. She's the slayer after all. It would make sense, but if you have to go with a house. I'd say go RavenClaw as she needs to learn as much as she can. As fast as she can. I get the feeling she won't be at Hogwarts very long. Tom certainly should go to his old house. That or you could do AU and put him in RavenClaw. After all Tom does like to learn things, which leads him to do crazy stuff. I really like this, but I think your making Buffy far to forgiving. Tom too less vengeful when he's got a right to be. I really feel that you might want to take out the rape part. At least when she's so young. Thats very touchy and while I know it happends. I really think it hinders the plot at present. Mostly since Buffy's rapists are alive, and while not possible well. I'm pretty sure there would be some investagation done. By someone other than that stupid bitch who blamed Buffy for it. Honestly the second she said that shit. Tom would have ended her misrable life flat out. I enjoy this, but it I feel like it needs a few plot fixs. I mean I know why you did the rape part that was implied or at least it was attempt at rape. I'm still unsure what happend as it was all done very fast. I mean Tom would have been back before a second one could take place at anyrate. But it really should be moved in my opinon. Done at Hogwarts in say sixth year. At a pivital point in Tom and Buffy's lives when they are more adult. Something that shapes Tom's views and makes him into the deranged wacko he becomes.
Review By [ChikaraKatherine] • Date [20 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Christy
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I can understand you wanting to keep the twins together, but I see Buffy being much better in Ravenclaw, for some reason...such as her excitement about the books she could read from Diagon Alley.
Review By [Christy] • Date [6 Jun 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from EllandrahSylver
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Hufflepuff or Ravenclaw, I think. Lizzie is too sweet for Slytherin, and really too studious for Gryffindor. Not being either a fighter or a schemer by nature, she'd be destroyed by both of those houses. Her patience, loyalty, and willingness to forgive even the most horrendous of acts has me leaning more toward Hufflepuff, actually.
Review By [EllandrahSylver] • Date [5 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from JeanClaudeslover
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I like this story. I think you should keep them together cause they seem to fit and depend on each other. if you do seperate them have her in Gryffindor i think it be the most dynamic
Review By [JeanClaudeslover] • Date [4 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from (Current Donor)romero
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I hope that the twins stay together in Slytherin. Thanks for the update.
Review By [(Current Donor)romero] • Date [4 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Inoeth
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My main concern is that you're making Tom too dark for the sake of staying with cannon, while 'Elizabeth' is being far too good. Buffy in the show was a woman who is capable of massive amounts of violence, of being very selfish and stupid- here, you're presenting us with someone who is just 'too' good, who has been a victim of rape and yet is showing no flaws for it or before it happened for that matter. Buffy typically liked to think things through before jumping into action but not afraid to get her hands dirty. She's no fan of learning for it's own sake tho she's quite capable of learning and applying what she's learned, so Slythern does work for her while ironically enough Faith would be the kind of woman who would end up in Gryffindor...
Review By [Inoeth] • Date [3 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Iceflame
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Yes :). Keep them together! I can see things going interesting directions, and a possible extra faction in the wars to come. I can also seeing Dumbledore, for all his talk of the Power of Love, misunderstanding Buffy's nature enough to alienate her as an ally.

I will note, I believe Buffy's likely going to be as intelligent in her power and her skill as both Tom and Dumbledore; both to guard herself, and to protect others.
Review By [Iceflame] • Date [3 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
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great update. :)

For houses it would be interesting to see slytherin, as she if the is still a slayer then she would need cunning and stuff like that. Though hopefully she would have friendships across the houses, as she does not seem like the stuck up sort.
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [3 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from ShalaDakiri
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Interesting impressions on Dumbledore's part, especially after what he was told by Mrs. Cole.

As for houses, I have to admit my first thought agrees with yours: Keep them together.
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [3 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from BotticellisMuse
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An exceptional beginning...id love to see more updates soon...any house will do since buffy has attributes valued in each house--loyal, brave, hardworking, smart, cunning bec her life depends on it starting from the time she was called. Although if she goes to griffyndor i think it would really turn albus on his head esp since he assumed too much without any factual basis at all...he listened to what those horrible matrons told him despite having met the twins and seen firsthand what theyre like...serves him right when decades later he would seek buffys help, the same girl he mistook for being evil....do post soon!
Review By [BotticellisMuse] • Date [3 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from bradsan
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Well I think that they should be in the same house. Why? I think they need to be together and even if the Slytherin are count as "evil", which I don't agree with, they are also ambitious, shrewd, cunning, strong leaders, and achievement-oriented. I think she can learn a lot from that house. Some things you can't learn like bravery, nerve. You are born with it and we already know she has it in her.

She also won't jump into things without knowing everything but when needed she will do it anyway. It would also explain why she will make a deal with the enemy to accomplice a cause and why Lizzie can think outside the box and that not everything is black and white but that there are also grey areas.

Lizzie character will prevent her to go to the dark side but she will need all those things for her future destiny. She will gone have it though and she needs all those abilities to be a good and strong warrior.

Not all Slytherin are evil so I think Slytherin, Gryffindor will be to soft.

very good update.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [3 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from randyzoopurple
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OMG...OMG !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Review By [randyzoopurple] • Date [3 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from CassiopeiaHastur
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I really enjoy reading your updates, especially as it is not predictable and you beautiful describe the different perspectives of the main characters
Review By [CassiopeiaHastur] • Date [3 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from bradsan
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so good nothing more to say. I got it on tracking so I won't miss a thing.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [28 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Fantasymania
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This sounds awesome!
Review By [Fantasymania] • Date [24 Apr 13] • Not Rated
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