This story was very interesting. I've played all the games, and it could be very interesting to see Jack and Kakashi intermingle ((She's a semi rebellious badass, who likes to wear revealing clothing. Kakashi is a supposed pervert who is badass, and while good at his job admittedly a not very good teacher.)). Especially since they are both pretty similar in character in a way ((Both were expected to be the best from child hood, both are considered freaks, both have had tough pasts and both have lost friends in a war.))

Not to mention Sakura ((The girl whose major sills are focus will power and insane physical power)) as Jack's disciple.... Scary, especially since Jack would knock some sense upside her head. The idea of a pissed off Sakura pulling a vanguard Rush, Reave, or dark channel.... ((Shivers)) Especially since Sakura and biotics would be amazing from a support role....

I do hope you continue. I almost pity her and Jiriya when they cross paths. The big thing if you continue is to not have her be TOO strong. If she can take out enemies too easily it's not as fun.

Ooh nice. Very good job capturing Jack's character. I really want to see how she deals with the ninja world and how that world deals with her since her biotic gifts aren't a bloodline and don't use chakra... or do they in your universe? Anyways neat.

oh this is one story I'd love to see expanded..

That would be awesome if you could turn it into a decent story. nice to see you writing again.

Ok - I know it would end the story too damned fast, and I've never played Mass Effect, so I don't really understand the mechanics of the telekinesis effect but...

1) Englobe Orochimaru and crush him in the globe?

2) More effectively - englobe him, shrink it to a minimum size to just contain him, and then split the bubble in half?

3) Or just make a bubble that half-contains him, and separate the top of his body from the bottom?

I suppose I really should play the game one of these years to get these kinds of answers...

you don't get 'Hard' effects from the Biotics, you end up with 'Fields' that offer different effects, 'Push' 'Pull' 'Crush' 'Rend' being the most common, while she could pick him up and crush him, there would be no hard shield in place to keep him from escaping.

their power is actually closer to the force powers than anything else, and Jack was considered something special for the 'Amount' of power she could throw around, hell she even impressed people that had been using it for a thousand years, and while they were 'Better' at using it, she would just overpower them and beat them down.

Personally, I'd love to see Jack take over team Seven, even as she receives training from the Hokage. That way the kids get, you know, training on things they should have had LONG before; jack gets the attention and extra training she needs; and Kakashi can go to hell or chase that stupid cat, or /anything/ other than actually dealing with people - something he's proven he can't do worth a burp in a tornado.

...OK, maybe I do think the guy's a waste of time, space, and effort...

Would love to see Naruto adopt the newest Crazy Powerful Lady as his big sister; maybe Anko comes in because jack kicked the Snake's butt, which is somethind the Special Jounin wants to do and help with more on later...

if it happens it won't be soon, even as nice a guy as the third was i can't see him letting a stranger with untold powers and no link to the village just show up and take over training the descendants of his successor and the last member of a once prestigious clan.

most likely she will be having a nice long conversation with Ibiki and Anko, especially with the upcoming invasion...

Altough the thought of Team Jack is almost as amusing as Team Anko...