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Review of chapter "Ripples in a Pond" from Oxnate
Review:
I thought of the movie "Dave" as well when I first read this challenge. Glad you wrote it. Very well done.
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [4 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ripples in a Pond" from (Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy
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hilarious!
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [27 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ripples in a Pond" from VillageOrchid
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Wasn't sure why you chose "Dave" as the president until the end. I like your little twist being random and not directly connected to the rest of the plot, "Because the Dentrassis was drunk, though, he mispronounced a word. Instead of a spell to prevent cheating, he removed all animosity of the players towards each other."
Xander is young enough that even if the spell was short in duration a little benefit of the doubt can go a long way. Thanks for sharing -- even if I don't quite see this fitting season 1 Xander's abilities.
Comments from author:
I chose Dave because that's what the prompt was. That was just how my brain worked getting to that point...

I said all I'd seen was the first season. I didn't say that's when it was set, though it had to be in the first 3 if they were in High School...
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ripples in a Pond" from DarthTenebrus
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Hey way to go Xander! So do he and Deadboy get Secret Service protection now? ROFL
Comments from author:
I don't know that they'd get ongoing protection, but they've at least got an in with Commander in Chief, and not just due to Council connections...
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [25 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ripples in a Pond" from slmncpm
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OMG this is fantastic!!! thank you. *hands you scones*
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed it!
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [25 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ripples in a Pond" from AlexanderMcpherson
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okay, the "president impersonator" rings the bell, I'm sure there was a film where the real president was greviously wounded and the impersonator was called in to, uh, take his place for a short while. biggest scene I almost remember is where he's guided about the table where the joint chiefs and the president meet.


oh, and, this is perfect... the only part it doesn't follow from my challenge, was the bit were dave is.. not exactly 'normal'. ;P

edit: found the film. Heh. 'Dave'. from 1993... so I saw it on VHS what, a year later?... wow, 18 years ago. fuck my mind stores information weirdly (films: yeap, we got space here!. actual memories like primary school: Sorry boss, we're all full up right now, we might have more space tonight after the clear-out at 4pm.)
Comments from author:
Yep, he was a "normal" guy that was hired to impersonate the president after a heart attack, if I remember correctly.

Glad you liked it!
Review By [AlexanderMcpherson] • Date [25 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ripples in a Pond" from Genuka
Review:
*Bwahahahaha!!!* Priceless!
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed it :-D
Review By [Genuka] • Date [25 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ripples in a Pond" from xon
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Funny stuff. Good for a laugh.
Comments from author:
Thanks! Glad you liked it.
Review By [xon] • Date [25 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ripples in a Pond" from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
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Cute and fluffy. I like it. :-)
Comments from author:
Thanks! I wasn't sure about even posting it, given my lack of familiarity with the actual show, but I felt it turned out well enough to see the light of day.

Glad you enjoyed it :-D
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [25 Mar 13] • Not Rated
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