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Review of chapter "Perfect Part 1" from RHatch
Review:
great update.... good job bringing up W&H like that
Review By [RHatch] • Date [19 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Transmaniacon MC" from crosie
Review:
I'm really enjoying this story. Xander being afraid Dean was interested in Buffy was funny. Are you going to have pairings in the story. Can't wait for you to bring Sam in to the story.
Review By [crosie] • Date [16 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Transmaniacon MC" from RHatch
Review:
great update
Review By [RHatch] • Date [14 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Transmaniacon MC" from AbigaelRose
Review:
Great chapter but not much plot development
Comments from author:
Alas! You have found one of my weaknesses!
Plot tends to take a backseat to character development in my stories. It's a problem. I know. On the bright side Sammy makes his official debut next chapter and I'm very excited for the plans I have laid out for him.
Thank you for your review!
Lots of love,
~Opal
Review By [AbigaelRose] • Date [14 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "No Room For A Stranger" from WomanofLetters
Review:
I'm enjoying this story. Nice angle, having Dean working on getting custody of Sam while he has to deal with being in foster care in Sunnydale. His and Giles' half-full comments were funny. It's nice to see how Dean is growing on the Scooby gang, that Buffy and Giles are not so eager for Dean to patrol the hellmouth, but then accept his help when it's needed. Also love the idea of Dean teaching Willow and Xander about monsters.

Can't wait for your next update!
Comments from author:
Thank you for your review!
I'm glad you found some parts funny and that you are enjoying my story. I also love the idea of Dean teaching Willow and Xander. I always found it frustrating on the show that they had to teach themselves and learn on the go when Buffy and Giles were RIGHT THERE!
Chapter three is well underway and will hopefully be up relatively soon.
Lots of love,
~Opal
Review By [WomanofLetters] • Date [6 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "No Room For A Stranger" from MarcusSLazarus
Review:
Interesting plot so far, I'll give you that (From what you've revealed, I take it John's been locked up for child endangerment at this point, but does that mean he won't be appearing later?)

Character dynamics seem promising, but there's one point I'd like to clarify; are you going to incorporate the 'Buffyverse' vampires AND the 'Supernatural' vampires- two difference species of vamp, you know-, are you only including one or the other, or will we get a mixture of both (Like this 'Supernatural'/'Twilight' crossover I read once, where the vampires were all 'Supernatural'-style vampires in terms of their physical abilities but with 'Twilight'-vamp eyes and social structure)?
Comments from author:
Thank you for your review!
Child endangerment is one of the charges against John. However Dean actually says his dad is in jail for murder in the first chapter, I'm sorry if that point wasn't clear.
As for the vampires, I've developed a pretty in depth mythology that will be revealed somewhere in the story. It's actually a major plot point.
Lots of love,
~Opal
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [26 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "No Room For A Stranger" from RHatch
Review:
Awesome update.... and I kinda like the idea of Buffy and Dean, and everyone loves Cordy
Comments from author:
Thank you for your review!
I woke up in the middle of the night and happened to check my email and found your wonderful review. It inspired me to stay up and write a little scene with Buffy and Dean that's been going through my head for awhile that unfortunately won't get published until the planned sequel. I wish I could put it in this story but it works a lot better for what I have planned later on.
Lots of love,
~Opal
Review By [RHatch] • Date [26 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "No Room For A Stranger" from Shaybo
Review:
Oh, I nearly forgot about this episode! Don't see how I could, with the killer mantis and all. I'm liking the switch of POV. It's nice to know the minds of others :) I can't wait till they get to the crucial plot developments! I know one person that won't be happy about Bangel! And I can't really see Dean taking a lot of crap that the Scoobies are sure to throw at 'em. It'll be funny to see some of them rebuffed :) Speaking of, do you know how much this story will be going through? What I mean is, how many seasons? Will it get to the end of season three, and then just have Dean and Sam randomly pop up? I understand if you don't want to tell (spoilers and all that), but it'd be nice to know. Also! Are you going to skip any episodes? Or are you aiming to include all? Questions, I know... Anyway, wonderful chapter. I love your attention to detail. It makes me happy :) Great job and good luck on writing! ~Shaybo
Comments from author:
Thank you for your review!
I currently plan on this story ending at Chosen and the sequel picking up sometime season one or two of Supernatural.
Some episodes will be skipped, truthfully, I only included the praying mantis episode to more fully establish character and set up some future plots. This chapter was very much a filler :D I'm glad you're enjoying my story, and once again, thank you for the review.
Lots of Love
~Opal
Review By [Shaybo] • Date [24 Apr 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Smells Like Teen Spirit" from RHatch
Review:
Good story so far...
Review By [RHatch] • Date [4 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Smells Like Teen Spirit" from Shaybo
Review:
Looks like awesomeness! Really though :) I love Buffy/Supernatural teenager stories. Sadly, there are but a few good ones. Thank goodness for writers like you! Question, if you can answer it. Will there be any pairings? All canon? Buffy/Dean? Etc? I'm just kinda wonderin how Angel will play out... Anyway ~ Good lookin story so far, I really like it :) Good luck writing!
Comments from author:
This story will not have a focus on relationships, but do expect teenage hormones to get in the way and add to the conflict. As for Angel, I believe I left some hints in the first chapter on who Buffy prefers at this point.
Thank you for your review, and you're right. There are too few teenage fics in this fandom, so I decided to take the matter into my own hands.
Lots of love,
Opal
Review By [Shaybo] • Date [30 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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