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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from leonamasha
Review:
I'm definitely intrigued. Really like it when the author tries to stay somewhat true to canon and then shows us a completely new universe as the ripple affect happens. Goodness, here's to hoping you get the inspiration to keep this story going!
Thanks for posting.
Comments from author:
Thanks! The only problem with trying to stay true to cannon is it makes the writing process longer, especially when the original story is ongoing. I know roughly where I'm going from here so I hope to continue it soon.
Review By [leonamasha] • Date [13 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from gaulty
Review:
Interesting chapter, byes
Comments from author:
Thankies~
Review By [gaulty] • Date [3 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Skysaber
Review:
Not to be a downer, or anything, but is anything happy ever going to happen in this story?
Comments from author:
... I didn't even realize how dark the story is until you mentioned it. This is the darkest story I've ever written! I think this is mostly because everything involving the sharigan is kind of dark. I hope the future chapters will be happier as it moves away from Xander developing his sharigan.
Review By [Skysaber] • Date [1 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from AlphaBeta
Review:
This looks like it could be good. Hope the next chapter will be out soon! So we have Xanders mom, Joyce, Buffy, and Dawn with him, right? Were is Willow? Please have Willow be there!
Comments from author:
I first started on this story a year ago so I can't remember why Willow didn't go with them, so I might end up adding her to the story later (outside flashbacks).
Review By [AlphaBeta] • Date [1 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Bobboky
Review:
good
Comments from author:
^_^
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [1 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from eriktheviking
Review:
A cracking good set-up, well done.
Comments from author:
Thanks~
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [1 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Stationary
Review:
Tsubaki? Tomoe? not very original, i know.
Review By [Stationary] • Date [2 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from calikocat
Review:
Very interesting so far. Hope to see more from you soon, I'm eager to read the background connections of the others as well.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I still have lots of explanations to give don't I? I hope to update again soon.
Review By [calikocat] • Date [12 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Selias
Review:
Huh. I'll be keeping an eye on this.
Comments from author:
^_^
Review By [Selias] • Date [1 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good
Comments from author:
Thankies~
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [1 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Destrark
Review:
huh, good ideas... Wierd tho. Madara is either dead in the Gedo Statue's cave and Obito is impersonating him and possibly trying to get a Rinnegan user by having a child with an Uzumaki... or its non-canon and Madara's Eternal Mangekyo has made him immortal and he has Obito's Mangekyo techniques...
Comments from author:
Thankies~ I like to think I've got some unique ideas. There are other possibilities too though, because it's neither of those things.
Review By [Destrark] • Date [31 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from AlphaBeta
Review:
Wow, that last part is different. Good job! Update soon!
Comments from author:
Thankies!
Review By [AlphaBeta] • Date [31 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Genuka
Review:
You are very evil. I wonder when they are going to find out about Naruto and he them? Maybe Naruto will crash through the window or be dragged in by the ANBU?
Comments from author:
Evil... Yes... I probably am. You're the second person to suggest that as how Naruto meets them. ^_^ Makes me consider having them meet that way.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [31 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Comments from author:
*^_^*
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [29 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AlphaBeta
Review:
Not a bad beginning. Please update soon and with longer chapters please.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I'll try to update the story tomorrow. ^_^
Review By [AlphaBeta] • Date [29 Mar 13] • Not Rated
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