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Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from DarthTenebrus
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Read this once more; have you yet thought about doing a sequel to this?

Darth Willow takes over the Initiative and uses its resources to build her army of conquest whilst dealing with Adam and, later, Glorificus.

How's that for an idea?
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [26 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DieselDriver
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She had to have seen the movie. I have trouble believing in a Willow who would knowingly use the dark side.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [7 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from Metamorphmagus
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I rather enjoyed this little story.
It'd be interesting to see Glory.
Three sith at least,
Verses the beast.
Review By [Metamorphmagus] • Date [14 Mar 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from Spica
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Oooh, NEAT story. ^_^
Review By [Spica] • Date [3 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from DofEire
Review:
Daaangg! Not what I expected. Better!
Comments from author:
Thank you. Hard to get higher praise than that.
Review By [DofEire] • Date [4 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from michaelangelo
Review:
Huh, I was expecting Xander to exit the ship all Darth Vader-y, complete with the whoo-shhhh. You know if Willow could 'force' midichlorians into her own cells what's to stop her doing it in others?
Cylon Terminators? bad news.
Review By [michaelangelo] • Date [2 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from slmncpm
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this was amazing! thank you so much for it! *hands you scones*
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [2 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from removedauthor
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Interesting chapter and story so far I hope to read many more chapters to this story that are just as good as this one if not better. Have you thought of making this a crossover be it a major or minor one?
Review By [removedauthor] • Date [1 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from Harry
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Travers, you had your chance to play nice with Willow. But NO! You had to do it your way, get a Slayer that was Council raised and taught. Guess what Bub: YOU FAILED! You had your perfect Slayer with Kendra and Red removed her head. Faith, she let live because they rescued her sister, and wanted nothing more to do with Travers. Now, now the Council is ruined, and you, YOU Q.T., are about to become a . . . experiment, for Darth Willow. Make it long and painful Red. He deserves it!
Review By [Harry] • Date [1 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Sigh, she did have to kill Kendra didn't she...great ending!
Comments from author:
For the life of me I couldn't figure out what to do with Kendra. She's been holding things up for weeks. It hit me today, so I could finish this little tale. And thank you for reading.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [1 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from DarthTenebrus
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Well, at least she's not trying to burn the world to a cinder. Her systematic annihilation of the Council has placed hundreds of Potential Slayers in her unwitting care;they will soon all become Dark Jedi, Darth Wroth's personal army.

Horror of horrors, with Dark Jedi and Cylon battle droids at her command, all she needs now are several legions of clone troopers and the world shall belong to the Sith!

Goddess help us all...
Comments from author:
I hadn't thought about the Potentials. Hmm...
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [1 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
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Oh my bad news for the council, and probably the world.
Great chapter!

Tom.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [7 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from Difdi
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Way to go Travers! Nothing quite like snatching defeat from the jaws of victory, eh?

Murder and betrayal almost never produces anything good, but The Council is so corrupt that they disagree with reality on what is good and evil. So they abort the exorcism of a Sith possession by murder and betrayal and create the real thing -- this one won't be possible to get rid of with an exorcism.

Let's just hope the world isn't as screwed as The Council. Of course, given how many political ties, treaties and agreements The Council has, and how many favors they can likely call in, a fair chunk of the world might get in the way of justice without knowing (or in some cases, caring) what they are putting themselves in the way of, or which side of the Good/Evil line they end up on.

Sith are rageaholics, not necessarily evil. A Sith in complete self-control is no more evil than a Jedi, after all. The Dark Side is no more evil than the Light is good, and rage can be righteous while tranquility can ignore atrocities.
Review By [Difdi] • Date [6 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from djhardim
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Rather than kill Travers, use the Force to program him to take out the rest of the Council.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [6 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from Riniko
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Was hoping Willow would be able to help Xander and Joyce with Force healing. Traver's is going to find myself in the position of a turkey on Thanksgiving with those actions.
Review By [Riniko] • Date [6 Jul 13] • Not Rated
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