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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from storiescollector
Review:
Good potential. Xander should be larger and healthier that the average Roman due to better diet. Unless something was "added" to him, he won't understand spoken Latin (due to millennia of language shifts), but may well be able to understand the written form, he should at least be able to understand several words. Hope this is continued. Would the notes or coins have Roman words (sayings) or dates on them (I'm not American)?
Review By [storiescollector] • Date [25 Jan 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from docfeng
Review:
Should continue it? yes
Review By [docfeng] • Date [11 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BrianDReader
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I always like to come and check back on this story. I always hope that it has grown while I was away. I really like it and hope you will continue the story in the future!
Review By [BrianDReader] • Date [8 Jan 14] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
interesting start, I would like to see how Xander deals with this.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [14 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Studyofchaos
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Another great story starting? I hope so. I really enjoy your other stories and this has potential to rival them. We'll see though won't we.
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [10 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from PaxDraconix
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This looks like an interesting concept. Hope to see it developed further.
Review By [PaxDraconix] • Date [10 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Morgomir
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It's a great start. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [6 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Good start, but Xander should have a number of items he seems to be missing. Key chain, watch, cell phone, edged weapons, holy water.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [5 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Rhyssia
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Heh. Was totally thinking it'd be Conner. Destroyer, an' all. Haven't read the series, but interesting so far.
Review By [Rhyssia] • Date [5 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from yrfgd
Review:
OK, this is a rather new plot. Xander back in ancient Rome. Guess he's going to be adding the Roman slayer to the list of 'his girls'

Yes, please continue.
Review By [yrfgd] • Date [4 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written and intriguing scene-setter.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [4 Apr 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MarcusRowland
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I was expecting it to be Connor, since he was called the Destroyer and was portal-adjacent several times. Be interested to see where this goes.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [4 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from trongod
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Very interesting start - wondering how old Xander is at this point and how much Giles enforced knowledge he has; thinking he has anywhere from beginners Latin/Greek/etc. to some proficiency in the languages, which would help him. Dunno if his build means much, but there's evidence modern people are substantially bigger and healthier than those in your picked time, so he might appear older to the Romans than he really is.

Also thinking that the three Gods involved - so far - will have an eye on him, curious if nothing else, but Janus has a reason for what He did, sooooo...

May the Muses smite... /inspire/ you for more!!!
Review By [trongod] • Date [4 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TaraLi
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If you think you can handle it - PLEASE continue!!! There's a fair chance that Xander can understand at least a little Latin, despite a linguistic shift - though it's quite possible Janus stuffed the language into his head while in transit...

But Xander - let loose when the Roman Gods are at the peak of their powers? Oooh, this could get *INTERESTING*. Truthfully, just the day to day knowledge of science of a reasonably intelligent person could make huge shifts back then - even if they can't formally state the Scientific Method, which would create *INCREDIBLE* changes. (Maybe Xander had just had a test on that topic in his science class back in the 20th Century?)
Review By [TaraLi] • Date [4 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from jbjewel
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Absolutely. I can see many great possibilities with what you've got so far. History time travel fics can be romanticized or they can be brutally honest. I can see this going either way. Both have potential.
Review By [jbjewel] • Date [4 Apr 13] • Not Rated
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