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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from feynstrom
Review:
Determining the whole world is without Sparks from a single momentary look at some suburban street of a civilization that developed along very different lines to her own? Determining the continent she's on using the same method? Figuring out her longitude with a mere look at the stars in the sky?

You really didn't think that through.

Edit: If you want to add sparkiness, consider where you want to take it. Will it support or antagonise the protagonist? How much will she retain, and what will she build up from that? Warren&Co already produced super-sciency devices in his basement and without a Spark.
Comments from author:
I completely agree. Hopefully I can work around that, and make it better. One idea is that there actually *is* Sparkyness in the town, it just isn't very obvious. At all. Thus, allowing for not noticing the Sparkyness.
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Do you think it's a good idea?
Review By [feynstrom] • Date [7 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Morgomir
Review:
Great and interesting start. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Why, thank you! I'll try to get more out soon.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [6 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
I believe the perfect description of you little story is "wacky". But I liked it and can't wait for more adventures of Princess Buffalo. The universe needs more BtVS and GG crossovers.
Comments from author:
I completely agree. I hope that I get more out soon for your enjoyment!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [5 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Genuka
Review:
*snicker* Nice approach. I haven't seen this one in a while. Looking forward to the update.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Can't wait to get it finished for my readers!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [4 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from IAMZIPPY
Review:
interesting begging cant wait for more
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review!
Review By [IAMZIPPY] • Date [4 Apr 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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