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Review of chapter "A New Life" from fourmenandanelephant
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I like this, but I feel that the scenario your describing sounds like criminal conspiracy, negligence and incompetence on several levels, honestly if her father "Mr Irons" had been a lawyer of some 85 years he would have known this and I can see something like this becoming a case where Federal and State prosecution comes into play and Emma gets her child back and the people who basically stole the child get what's coming to them...
Review By [fourmenandanelephant] • Date [24 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A New Life" from Tripper
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I love this entire series. It's a unique idea and you've written it so well. Can't wait to see what's next.
Review By [Tripper] • Date [17 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A New Life" from raxadian
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I really hope this version of Emma has at least martial arts training.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [18 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A New Life" from MissLynn
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Loved the series and hoping for more soon!
Review By [MissLynn] • Date [27 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A New Life" from JessRS
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I just read through the whole series thus far. Nice job.
Working Willow's magic into helping them settle into the 'new' world was a nice touch. I loved the mother-son bonding moments you had with Buffy & Pinocchio early on.
I look forward to seeing where you go with this.
Personally, I'd like the series to jump into the start of Once Upon a Time: finding Henry, etc. And her first question for him would have to be 'how did you find me?!' since her family looked everywhere for a trace of him--I suppose their not finding him could've had something to do with the curse, since he would've been in Storybrook. Emma would, also, have to be more open to the idea of Henry's 'stories' being the truth right from the get-go, since it's the same thing her mother told her. Personally, I'd prefer her whole family going to Storybrook right from the start. I can't imagine Buffy (or Jack, etc.) would be all that willing to let Emma fight on her own, and it'd leave more room for improvisation. I know there's something about the curse supposedly keeping everyone else out of town, but you could bring back Willow's spell for that: or maybe the new, magical environment would trigger the re-Choosing of the Slayer again? Or it could just trigger the same battle inside Buffy's body that led to her fleeing her world in the first place--as long as you can think of a way for the OUaT characters to save her from it without banishing her from the magical town.
Anyway, I hope to see whatever you come up with sometime soon. Happy writing! :-)
Review By [JessRS] • Date [6 Jan 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A New Life" from Letomo
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Really hope there's a next chapter/story on this - the changes in the timeline from canon to here are significant enough to be important. Will Buffy come with her and Henry [who could stop her?], and how will that affect things? Hoping for more, and thanks for sharing this!
Review By [Letomo] • Date [9 Sep 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A New Life" from Letomo
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Really hope there's a next chapter/story on this - the changes in the timeline from canon to here are significant enough to be important. Will Buffy come with her and Henry [who could stop her?], and how will that affect things? Hoping for more, and thanks for sharing this!
Review By [Letomo] • Date [9 Sep 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A New Life" from Letomo
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Really hope there's a next chapter/story on this - the changes in the timeline from canon to here are significant enough to be important. Will Buffy come with her and Henry [who could stop her?], and how will that affect things? Hoping for more, and thanks for sharing this!
Review By [Letomo] • Date [9 Sep 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A New Life" from Letomo
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Really hope there's a next chapter/story on this - the changes in the timeline from canon to here are significant enough to be important. Will Buffy come with her and Henry [who could stop her?], and how will that affect things? Hoping for more, and thanks for sharing this!
Review By [Letomo] • Date [9 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A New Life" from Letomo
Review:
Really hope there's a next chapter/story on this - the changes in the timeline from canon to here are significant enough to be important. Will Buffy come with her and Henry [who could stop her?], and how will that affect things? Hoping for more, and thanks for sharing this!
Review By [Letomo] • Date [9 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A New Life" from Ember
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Once upon a time is so unappreciated, its a great show and I like how you combined it with Buffy and gave her happiness. I look forward to the continuation of Buffy and Emma in the fight with destiny.
Review By [Ember] • Date [20 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A New Life" from Cataclysmic
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awesome I vote emma henry meeting!
Review By [Cataclysmic] • Date [15 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A New Life" from yuiop
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Nice
Review By [yuiop] • Date [14 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A New Life" from GypsyDruid
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oh please tell me she at least talks to mom before haring of to Storybrooke
Review By [GypsyDruid] • Date [14 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A New Life" from ShyBob
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I liked this backstory to where the little prince comes from. It was darker than the others (because real life often is), but I know there's a happy ending down the road.
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [14 Apr 13] • Not Rated
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