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Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Mcspender
Review:
Oh Suzie, pooor Suzie =(. Nice to see Jack as a father figure for Seo. I mean hes been a dad, who knows how many time in his looong life xD.
I like Allison, she seems quite cool =).

Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
See, the thing about Jack is that when you introduce him to someone female, attractive, who is a mix between Buffy, the Doctor, and who's been raised by someone with Rose's soul, the obvious place to go, as an author, is to turn it into some sexual attraction type of relationship.

That was too obvious. So I nixed it.

And went with a more interesting option. Having Jack honestly love her, but in a different way.

I'm glad you like Alison -- now I know I'll have at least one reader for my next story!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [19 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from JJDudeman
Review:
Ooooh, you DID go there with Lisa, I'd hoped you would. Good. Ah, the tragedy of being interrupted by Suzie. She really must have had some redeeming traits, but boy did "They keep killing Suzie" show her as pretty far gone...

Nice little fic! Considering I've read about half of your stories including all of the previous one and STILL haven't been able to work out what was up with the Ninth-Doctor-interfering presence who was Seo's "Dad," it was nice to have a one-off that didn't make my head hurt. ;-)

Ah, I did enjoy Ianto's character in Torchwood, even if his initial arc with Lisa did have him a bit disturbingly removed from his moral awareness...
Good fic!
Comments from author:
Don't worry. The days of Seo's "Dad" being a main character are basically over. We'll get more mentions of him, of course, from Seo, but Seo's stories are mostly going to be like this one. Straightforward, but interesting and tricky and full of action.

Well. Except when we get to Bilis Manger. That's going to be a whole complicated temporal knot.
Review By [JJDudeman] • Date [18 Apr 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Letomo
Review:
Interesting little preview. It made me think of the way that the Doctor arranged things so that if he needed someone to go undercover, the person already in that job won the lottery or the like. So, this is the other side of that?

Can't wait to read it!
Comments from author:
I think so, yes. Not going to say, definitively, because I often use little things like this to my advantage, later, to be all timey whimey. But the original thought is yes.
Review By [Letomo] • Date [18 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Mcspender
Review:
Oh yeah, nice way to take out the original smurf of death xD!!.
So, now that the glove is in the open, does that means that Jack is gonna confiscate it now?.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Well, unfortunately, since the glove features in the first episode of the Torchwood series, I can't have Jack just take it away. But it does come up in a few more stories.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [18 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Letomo
Review:
Oh, very nice! Not a weapon, but a tool of life. Excellent thinking!

And, I bet Seo doesn't tell anyone about the catch of what the glove does - taking over the spirit of the wearer, at a deep down level. And, I like that you are giving Suzie a personality.

I do keep wondering if Buffy will ever encounter an even older Doctor, one from before - 1-8 - who don't even get her name, so don't realize it's the same person when he encounters her as 10. After all, he didn't always worry about names when things were tight!

Well, good story, and I'm glad there's already more in the wings.
Comments from author:
Oh, that is such a good idea!

I've been trying to figure out the third part to my three-part story that takes place after the Years that Never Were, and I think you've just given me the third part!

Thank you!
Review By [Letomo] • Date [18 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Gen
Review:
Hi,
I like the beginning of this new serie. I really like Seo and Ianto's reaction to each other, you're very good at continuity. I read the Line hopper series and I liked it so much it made me want to watch the first four seasons of Doctor Who again. I actually went and bought them. Also, I really appreciate the attention to details you bring to your stories. As for this story, I think it's nice that you chose to bring back the judge. I haven't read a lot of stories where the judge is brought back. I can't wait to see what is gonna happen with him. I'm sorry I never reviewed your other stories before, I'm not very good at expressing myself (took me over half an hour to write this tiny paragraph).

Thank you for the beautiful stories you publish. I hope to keep reading them!
Comments from author:
Well, I appreciate the tiny paragraph a lot. I've had a really hard day at work, today, and this brought a smile to my face.

I'm glad you'll keep reading! Hopefully, I won't disappoint!
Review By [Gen] • Date [17 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Mcspender
Review:
Weell, seems like Suzie is kinda rude, but I wanna see how she's plays that rudeness against Seo's special skills.
And talking about Seo's special skills, I wanna see what does the Judge makes of her.
The original Smurf of Death vs Seo's... I think a biig boom is in the future xD!!.

Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Hahahaha... original Smurf of Death... tee hee...

Oh, trust me, Seo gets the Judge good. Very good.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [17 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Keshkreature
Review:
Sweet!
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [17 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Good combo of exposition and characterization.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Don't worry, we'll get to the action pretty soon.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [16 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mcspender
Review:
You know, I think little Seo's is reaaaally fond of explosions. She should work with the Mythbusters crew xD!.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
I've absolutely thought that, before! Except I have no idea what the Mythbusters guys would make of her.

It makes sense. The Doctor blows stuff up all the time. And Buffy does, too. Combine them?

Explosions central.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [16 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ellf
Review:
I suspect you didn't mean to mark this story as complete, as it leaves off at an area that suggests there is more.

Because I want more. I was a fan of Adventures of a Line Hopper, and I suspect I'll be a fan of this one.
Comments from author:
Oops! Thank you! Just fixed that.
Review By [ellf] • Date [16 Apr 13] • Not Rated
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