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Review of chapter "Dawn of Life" from deathgeonous
Review:
Ah, I never thought that this would have a sequel. And I'm glad to be wrong. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Comments from author:
Yeah well.... like I said, the computers started a conspiracy against me.... it was a big rebellion... had to take my laptop to the shop three times in two months.... I wasnt sure if I wanted to kill my computer or the repairman :P.....
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [6 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dawn of Life" from cloudleonsgurl
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Very interesting, and very good. :D
Review By [cloudleonsgurl] • Date [4 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dawn of Life" from ebony
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I would love to see this continued, just to see how Buffy explains how she and Tony have a kid together when they have never been together.
Review By [ebony] • Date [29 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dawn of Life" from justapiranha
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Oh can you write a second chapter? Please????!!!!
Review By [justapiranha] • Date [10 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dawn of Life" from PheonixTears
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This is complete?! No way! You can't leave us hanging like that! I really hope you will continue to update this story. I'm looking forward to any future updates.
Review By [PheonixTears] • Date [5 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dawn of Life" from ShyBob
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Nice pacing and clear plot, although the story made me sad. It's like BtVS turned one notch darker, which is pretty dark. All the horrible stuff from the last three seasons, with a baby? Freakin' tragic. But you put a that little light at the end of the tunnel, and I'm hoping it gets better for everyone.
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [5 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dawn of Life" from bradsan
Review:
read it again and still wants a sequel.

edit: You are excited how do you think I feel. "LOL" Can't wait
Comments from author:
And it's gona come in a few days :P ... I should have it beta read this week and on the tth the day I get it ... :P ... can't wait.. I'm soooooo excited :P
Review By [bradsan] • Date [4 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dawn of Life" from Callista
Review:
Good story, but it would be even better with a sequel ;)
Review By [Callista] • Date [15 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dawn of Life" from Letomo
Review:
It's an interesting start. I'm sad that it's complete; it would make a good introduction to a larger story.
Review By [Letomo] • Date [13 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dawn of Life" from ebony
Review:
There's going to be more right, I mean Tony Stark just meet his daughter and I am assuming he and Pepper are still an item. That is going to be a very strange and awkward conversation being Buffy and Tony have a daughter and have never meet let alone had sex before.
Review By [ebony] • Date [26 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dawn of Life" from Stationary
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love to see the continuation of this
Review By [Stationary] • Date [21 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dawn of Life" from Genuka
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Fav part? Gotta be when Tony realizes that Dawn is his kid.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [20 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dawn of Life" from rhiowen
Review:
Why oh why is there not more to this story???
Review By [rhiowen] • Date [20 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dawn of Life" from Wise
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This story fills me with rage. Or I suppose, better to say that the mystical pregnancy trope in general annoys the hell out of me. Buffy was violated. The monks in your story took away her choice; they exploited her and took advantage of her for the simple fact that she's female. I am honestly shocked that she didn't abort the foetus, particularly considering her as a liberated, modern woman and native of Southern California for whom it would actually be incredibly irresponsible to have a baby. Buffy is the Slayer. She's the Chosen One who stands against the spread of darkness. That's before we even consider her college plans. But now all of that is derailed because a group of asshole monks decided that she made for a convenient incubator. How many innocent people die, I wonder, because Buffy can't do her duty on account of her pregnancy and then having an infant to take care of?

Actually, aborting the foetus would solve the problem with Glory as well. No Key, no potential world-ending threat. Hell, even the Knights of Byzantium would be happy: "The Key is the link; the link must be severe. Such is the will of God."

If you're going to have Buffy carry the foetus to term, at least have the decency to let her do some soul-searching. Make it a difficult decision. Buffy *isn't* a conservative Christian. She doesn't have that instictive opposition to abortion in any form that is the hallmark of the Evangelical tribe. If she's going to do this, when she has every reason not to, she needs a damn good reason if you're actually going to be true to her character. "It's innocent!" just doesn't cut it. At the time that she's speaking, it consists of a a handful of rapidly dividing cells. Knowing that it's going to completely derail her life, knowing that the zygote probably hasn't even implanted yet and therefore pregnancy hasn't begun (and therefore it would be really, really easy to prevent it from doing so - even drinking lots of coffee would increase the chances thereof) knowing that it was brought about by a sort of mystical rape, knowing that they violated her, and are exploiting her for being female, what is her reason for going along with it? What could possibly convince her to keep it?
Review By [Wise] • Date [19 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dawn of Life" from LtHovesh
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I loved it, but it feels incomplete, like it is the setup for a FAR longer story. So please go ahead and write it
Review By [LtHovesh] • Date [19 Apr 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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