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Review of chapter "Part 8" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
IInteresting story so far.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [24 May 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 8" from Zyanadryn
Review:
Good, good, good story!
Review By [Zyanadryn] • Date [30 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 8" from WCSII
Review:
Something short indeed. But yeah, I know what you mean about plot bunnies. I've lost track of how many I've lost, and only the most attention grabbing ones tend to stick around to annoy me for not writing them. I'm absolutely unable to write a story, and the few I've tried... well, I've often wondered how I could write so badly and recognize that I was writing as badly. Though, oddly enough one story has decided it'd had enough of being ignored and has been forcing me to add to it at least once a year. Same pen name on ff net, the only story there on my account for the Overlord game series. Good games... well not the DS one, but the other three were fairly decent.
Review By [WCSII] • Date [29 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 8" from Genuka
Review:
*snicker* This is a great fic. longer chapters would be greatly appreciated though.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I thought that that was a good place to stop, that and I'd been moving things all day so I was tired.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [29 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from WCSII
Review:
... You can't focus on any one story for long... can you?
Comments from author:
You try having 6 plot bunnies running around, I captured three of them but there are always more. No the truth is I started working on one story (part of Code Ragnarok) and someone encouraged a history for the Avalon Republic which I was already working on, then I found a story I hadn't worked on in a while and then I found another. These just snowballed on me and I work on them as I get inspired. None of them are very old (in terms of posting) and I've seen authors go years without posting then we get several chapters. So I don't complain, I know creating is both intensely frustrating and very very fun. But be patient Alex will show back up.
Review By [WCSII] • Date [28 Apr 13] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from ebony
Review:
Dare I say it, crossovers! You just made my day.
Review By [ebony] • Date [26 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from banditdoz
Review:
Fantastic update cant wait to see Xander, Giles and Willow Kick the arse of TPTB
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [25 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from DragonBard
Review:
So Xander's married to a female Lucifer.

How's Cordy going to fit in all this? I mean, she 'did' fall in lover with him in canon.

Also, is Anyanka going to play a part in this?
Comments from author:
I truly think that the only reason Cordy fell for Xander was the fact that he wouldn't suck up to her. That said it was the terakians that threw them together. She might come out of her shell maybe not we'll see where the story takes me. As for Anyanka? She may show up but if she actually grants a wish that would cause harm? A Guardian Angel would be able to eliminate her remember 'Hostile demons' what's Anyanka except one of the most hostile demons around? Of course she could target a non-innocent then one of the Host of The Restless Dead would have jurisdiction. So it might be smart of her to find a different line of work. As with Cordy we'll see where the story takes me. My complements on figuring out who Lucy is although as Warden of Hell Dimensions she overlords dozens of male and female Lucifers, Satans, Ba'als, Asmodeus's and so on. And even before she got that job she hated her full name so The Lord allowed her to shorten it.
Review By [DragonBard] • Date [25 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from gaulty
Review:
good chapter, byes
Review By [gaulty] • Date [24 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Pointer
Review:
They're not on an earth dimension anyways. I'm not sure the dying bit would apply.
Unrestricted warfare?
Enjoyed it.
Comments from author:
I don't know but She uses The Metatron when speaking to those not worthy as well as mortals that don't have Champion status. As for unrestricted warfare They have lease to eliminate any hostile demons (This includes ones that need human baby organs and other gross stuff to survive) so the Angels will wait until they commit to a hostile act (attacking a human or a peaceful demon) before eliminating them.
Review By [Pointer] • Date [24 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from egwolf
Review:
love it!!!!!!!!!!!!

great story!!!!!!!!!!

more please!
Review By [egwolf] • Date [24 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Genuka
Review:
*Bwahahahahahaha!* They're in trouble Now! Alex is loose! *snoopy dance*
Review By [Genuka] • Date [24 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I like how you are working out this g-d's champions thing. Since biblical people often had more than one wife, and considering the revelation of her past lives, I think you are heading towards allowing her to be a sister-wife to Lucy. Would Xander maybe have been someone who worked closely with Desi Arnaz in one of his most recent lives?
Comments from author:
Could be, it would explain the 'Lucy I'm Home'. Heh Heh Heh. I did say he's been using it for thousands of years. And that little phrase + a certain three headed dog running him over have been in my head since the very beginning.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [24 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [23 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Good tie in to the Buffy mythology. I'm not sure how possible it would be to be responsible for 11 young women's death (3 slayers and 8 potentials) in a typical mortal life so that the requirement to be in the high council seems rather high - but certainly depraved.
Comments from author:
In my particular branch, the watchers rotate the potentials, so unless you have money the potentials are moved around. This also increases the potential for them to be chosen as they are all sent near various hot-spots as they get to the ages of 14 -17. Kennedy has had four or more tutors simply because her father was too influential. Most field watchers aren't that ruthless, the ones like Sam Zabuto (Who really should have accompanied Kendra) are given chances to have more potentials that have a chance to become Slayers. And if a Slayer is too independent, they will assign her to a new watcher citing the fact that the old one is being reassigned as a reward or some other excuse. Also they will throw the Current Slayer at any situation even ones where she would be horribly outnumbered. So it's not impossible for a watcher in twenty five years to evaluate fifty potentials. Travers is on the high side of 70 has been a watcher for 45 years and has been on the council for fifteen years with ten of them being leader during his time as a field watcher he was responsible for 55 potentials, and five Slayers, he sent all of the slayers out night after night and personally administered the Crucuamentum twice. Of the potentials he down checked ten for not having enough fortitude to be the Slayer one he personally eliminated two got sick with the flu and the other seven he told they were ready or that it was a test they needed to pass. Oh and that way any too idealistic watchers are removed as well, Because can you see any good watcher not going out with his slayer on patrols?
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [23 Apr 13] • Not Rated
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