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A Scooby of Her Own

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from wswords
Review:
When will the story about Seo meeting the obscure retaliative be? Just noticed that while rereading the story.
Comments from author:
David Walter Korjensky III? It's about 11 stories from where I am, now.

Seo will continue to associate with him through at least 2 of her incarnations.

Good for you for picking that up!
Review By [wswords] • Date [29 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from (Past Donor)zephyrRS
Review:
Love!
Review By [(Past Donor)zephyrRS] • Date [29 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Mcspender
Review:
Blue dishes you say?. Details, details, the important thing is that the dishwasher is working at top form again xD!.
So lil' David family is very important? Cool!!. And my vote goes for Alison showing up again.

Cool story, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
I really do want to write a story, at some point, about David Walter Korjensky III. Showing what his life was actually like, and what his association was with the Slayers. But that's going to be a long while from now.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [24 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Letomo
Review:
Hey, as long as they're clean, who cares what color they turn?

Nice story!
Comments from author:
Thank you! I think Buffy probably has the same idea.
Review By [Letomo] • Date [24 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from kaekae
Review:
love the last line. perfect mini-epilogue for this story. More Seo stories please. (I like these shorter ones better than the long ones - too much waiting involved in long ones) :D
Comments from author:
Luckily, the majority of my stories for Seo look like they're going to be short. I keep coming up with these little snippet ideas. So hurray for that!

Unfortunately, it does take me a lot longer to write the short ones. Short stories are way harder than long stories, because it's so much harder to say everything you need to in such a short space.

Thanks for the read and the review!
Review By [kaekae] • Date [24 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from sean
Review:
I loved this. Seriously. I have no other words, because the awesomeness of this story ninja kicked them out of my brain.
Comments from author:
Oooh. I should have Seo meet ninjas, too! That would rock!
Review By [sean] • Date [24 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from JJDudeman
Review:
This story was FUN. Nice restraint on the angst at the end there, that coulda gone too far. And yes, Alison is a brilliant ... companion? Whatever.
Comments from author:
Thank you!

It didn't feel like a story that could take that much angst. It's so light and happy, for the most part.
Review By [JJDudeman] • Date [24 Apr 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from wswords
Review:
Damn, you have gotten really good at final lines between this and Happy Endings.
Comments from author:
Some stories have better last lines. Some have worse. I definitely think I'm improving!
Review By [wswords] • Date [23 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Mcspender
Review:
Well, lil' Seo did had a freak-out or what :S?????.

Good thing she had a friend like Alison to get her out of her funk... and remind her of the true mission: fix that poor dishwasher!! xD!!.
I mean, it's not like hacking into a wireless channel without special equipment xD.
Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [23 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Dmitri
Review:
One of the best stories I've read so far. Thanks for posting it.
Comments from author:
You're welcome. I loved writing it.
Review By [Dmitri] • Date [23 Apr 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Gideon
Review:
That was a close one! Someone really needs to get hold of Seo's self destructive streak though. Although if she really is Glory inside something does need to be done about it.
Comments from author:
Don't worry. You'll get more on this, later.

That is the big question, though. The Monks clearly made Seo not just out of Buffy and the Doctor, but also out of Glory -- at least a little. So... how much did they make Seo like Glory?

(The PTB did say that, at her foundation, Seo was a creature of evil. Then again, the PTB were also massive jerks.)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [23 Apr 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Letomo
Review:
One other difference, I think. Glory cared about the end-product, and considered the side-effects to be a nice bonus, nothing to worry about, or do anything about. Seo was using the side-effects, but also was aiming them, shaping them. The end product of removing the energy from the subject was the byproduct to her.

Which she might also learn how to control even more. Perhaps, to eventually move the energy from one person to another?
Comments from author:
(Shhhhh! Stop predicting the rest of my series!!!)
Review By [Letomo] • Date [23 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from poppie
Review:
Great story! Love the original characters!
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm so surprised at just how many people have liked this story, despite the fact that it centers around original characters. I assumed no one would read it.
Review By [poppie] • Date [22 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Gideon
Review:
Yep it is pretty brilliant. Fighting alien robots and winning is great. I don't think the bad guy is just going to sit there and let them win though!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [22 Apr 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Mcspender
Review:
Mhhh, maybe it's a very technical question, but It wouldn't be easier to reprogram all the robots at the same time using the radio channel the alien bad guy is using to control them??.

Nice to see Alison using her own skill-set to help Seo in the rescue. And I hope she knows someone who can repair dishwashers, because Seo is kinda.... Seo is perfectly capable to turn that poor dishwasher machine into a racing car, that can get all TV channels around the Galaxy, even the alien porn ones... Mhhh, methinks Jack will be veeery interested to get his hands in that dishwasher-racing car-TV set xD.

Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Uh... I'm sure there's a really good reason for your first question that doesn't involve the words, "I totally didn't think of that", but I have to get back to you on exactly what that reason is.

Maybe... oh, maybe it's because Seo isn't perfect, and she didn't think of that, and this is showing her character limitations!

That's a much better reason.

*phew. Covered my tracks on that one! Hope Mcspender didn't notice.*

By the way. For the majority of drafts, it was Seo dissecting a CD player and a TV and combining them with the dishwasher to create a holographic generator. Which would have given her a laser and a lot of projection equipment. But I changed it at the last minute... I think my rationale was, "Who has a CD player anymore?"

And forgot about the fact that it now made no sense.

But I'm sure that if there was anyone who could get a dishwasher to blow up... it'd be Seo.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [22 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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