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Review of chapter "21" from Zyanadryn
Review:
Just got caught up! Love this story!
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying it. By all means, try the Reality War,
this story's sequel.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Zyanadryn] • Date [8 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "21" from DarthTenebrus
Review:
I forget how Angel lives again, as well as what he costumed as. Did he actually pop some adamantium claws, or were they Sabretooth's claws? And who shot the Jaffa with lightning?

Well, it was a good action sequence, one which punctuated the negotiations rather well. Keep writing and we'll keep reading. ..
Comments from author:
Angel's human now because he went as a mutant Wolverine, so like
Giles he has matching physiology to his race. Aura was Storm....

Thanks for the review.
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [4 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "21" from grd
Review:
Thank you for another exciting chapter. I love this series. The irony of the surprise attack's result was funny.
Comments from author:
The law of unintended consequences. :D

Thanks for the review.
Review By [grd] • Date [4 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "19" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [12 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "18" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapters. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [9 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "18" from grd
Review:
I really enjoy this saga. Happy to always see another chapter.
Comments from author:
Hopefully there's plenty to come.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [grd] • Date [9 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "17" from DarthTenebrus
Review:
I like how this is starting to tie in with the sequel; let's just be careful that the two don't begin to overlap.
Comments from author:
Heh. Different universes, I'll be really messing up to
make the two of them overlap.

Which given my limitations is certainly possible!

Thanks for the review.
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [30 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "17" from Bluesnowman
Review:
great work.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [29 May 14] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "16" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapters. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [19 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "16" from RedCalypso
Review:
I really like where you're going with this story. I look forward to the team finding Atlantis. There is one jarring note. They keep finding the same kind of tower again and again with no visible door, get inside and set off the self-destruct. At least the last chapter had a dome instead of a tower...
Comments from author:
I accept the flaw. To be honest I suck at
imagining and writing architecture\buildings. :D

Thanks for the review.
Review By [RedCalypso] • Date [7 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "16" from DarthTenebrus
Review:
Looks like Faith got a bum deal, but as long as it keeps the Earth safe then she understands and accepts it, because let's face it -- no brainwashed Council prawn (or is that pawn? In this instance I don't see the two as being entirely dissimilar...) would last more than six months on the Hellmouth.

Coming back to Time Lord Giles...the translation of the Alteran database has given the Sunnydalers the means to take humanity _back _ to the stars. It even suggests that the Milky Way Galaxy isn't even our home galaxy! But Earth now has the means to build a fully functional Stargate as well as a warning...

Beware the Ori.

This is also beginning to tie in to the second part of this where the Galactic Empire invades the Milky Way Galaxy. ..looking forward to another good one.
Comments from author:
Yeah, Slayers have a short lifespan in general. Worse on the Hellmouth.

Even without the various Marvel & DC heroes, and Jedi knights, a trio
of Time Lords would be more than enough to send the Goa'uld whimpering
away! :D

The next chapter it begins to tie in even more.
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [7 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "15" from DarthTenebrus
Review:
One step closer to another big tech boost; if they can bypass the security system next time, theoky stand a very good chance to pick up a lot of good stuff and data. Goa'uld beware the name of Sunnydale...

“Normally I’d be offended by your insinuation, but he did have several more centuries of experience than myself and of many differing cultures, but,” Giles wriggled his eyebrows suggestively, “let’s just say the Doctor is most definitely in the house.”Jenny’s grin widened. “And in the bedroom. The shower. The dining room. The kitchen….”

And as for that last part...

AAAAAAGH!! Couldn't Jenny the Jedi have fallen for Xander?! I mean, it's well known that Giles hooks up with Joyce Summers. But since there are no Summers family in this fic, maybe one of his fellow Watchers/Time Lords, like Ms Dormer?
Comments from author:
He did seem to be a thorn in the Goa'uld's side, far more than the Tok'Ra in fact.

What can I say? The Doctor's a lover man!

Thanks for the review.
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [17 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "14" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapters. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [24 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "14" from banner
Review:
It's nice that someone can take decisive action against Kinsey - the man is a supporating ulcer on the ass of Humanity.
Comments from author:
Yeah, he's a slimy, self-important hypocrite.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [banner] • Date [24 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "14" from DarthTenebrus
Review:
Ah, good. An alliance with the Tok'Ra will benefit the Sunnydale SGC, even with the former's predilection for bending the rules of ethics and their paranoia. I suppose for a bit some development of the relationship web should be in order, eespecially while we're watching the honorable Senator Kinsey get his comeuppance. This will definitely put the group in a positive light with the Air Force SGC and SAC/NORAD. All this, I expect, will pave the way for the lasting relationships between the worlds out there and the Status of Forces Agreement that will enable the proper response when the Galactic Empire comes calling.

This has potential to become something more than what it is now, but there are quite obviously some blanks to fill between now and "The Reality War". Keep it up.
Comments from author:
Yes, you're right in pointing out that the SG1 have a lot of different races to meet as yet.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [24 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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