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Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from Lotusja
Great Story.
Review By [Lotusja] • Date [16 Oct 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from raxadian
With so many Slayers around, would that make Buffy the Queen of the Slayers?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [16 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from Nightscream
Doyle......I see what your doing here! :P

Adding another cross over huh? Nice.

Can't wait for the next chapter.
Review By [Nightscream] • Date [16 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from slmncpm
i am glad to see another chapter here!
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [26 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Eureka
Glad RL is smoothing out. They need to play black Willow and Claw Dyson to be seen.......Did they not get that the big bad was in PAST tense?
Review By [Eureka] • Date [21 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from CPTSkip
I love Kenzie. She and Xander would be great together since their senses of humor would mesh well.

I'm so glad to read more of your story. Good luck with the whole RL thing. But in your story can't your characters talk for more than five minutes without trying to kill each other? I keep thinking they really need some grownup supervision. Lol!

I look forward to reading more of your story but they all really need to just sit down and TALK to each other. BTW, are vampires considered Fae by the Fae?

PS I now am thinking Faith and Tamerin would make a great couple. Maybe Doctor Hotpants and Dawn? Two ubergeeks seeking same? Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [21 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from AllenPitt
I can see potentials/Slayers as fae; a reclusive species where most are not 'activated', they seem human until activated, etc. Since for millennia there was only 1 at a time, I can see the fae not knowing about them. They'd be the rarest type of fae on the planet.
More interesting question is Spike--what is he, to them? An 'underfae', maybe? That infects humans, that's how it reproduces?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [18 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from Cmiller
more please.
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [18 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from Shadowman
Good story, more soon please.
Review By [Shadowman] • Date [27 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from Tashio
I agree with the other review. I cannot see Buffy and the whole Slayers as fae and if they are fae then they are one of the oldest fae that exist on earth and many fae forgotten them and think of them as myth. The Slayer line may not predate the fae, unlike the Old One, The-Power-That-Be, who first existed during Primordium Era, the age of the Dinosaurs, and vampire -Illyria claimed that vampire aleardy exist when she/he still walked and ruled on earth, about millions years age- but their line is still very old. I mean the First Slayer exist more than 8000 BC and the First Slayer was also the one who defeated the last Old One that walked the earth using the Scythe. Old One was extremely powerful being, to quote Illyria, "they were the gods among the gods." I mean, when Illyria return to his/her true form all his/her power was release and have enough power to destroy time itself.

Anyway, I agree with one of the reviewer about the idea of both light and Dark fae having to deal with a powerful faction that is complete out of their control. Just as Jackaniny said it will prove balance and stop fae from enslaving and killing human without serious consequence. I got the feel that fae will have a first hand account as to why some demons fear the slayer and while other want to fight them for fame and glory. The slayer have almost legendary reputation in the underworld. They are extremely dangerous opponent, indeed.

Another wonderful chapter, by the way.

Till next time.
Review By [Tashio] • Date [21 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from Cmiller
more, more please... I've got to know what happens next.
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [19 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from LanceAvalon
The whole everyone is a Fae thing wasn't working for me then out of the blue you have Spike and Willow going at it... wow I don't have words for how much that breaks SOD.

Also you rushed this so hard I felt like I was reading a summary.
Comments from author:
Thanks for writing a review especially since you don't like it. One of the only ways a writer improves is through feedback. I'm sorry to hear that it feels rushed though. I will admit that whileI have an English degree that it was focused on business writing and business communcations. More than anything I started this for myself and decided to post to see if the idea for this crossover caught anyone else's attention. There is so little BtVS /Lost Girl stories out there.

Ok now that I've taken a look at your profile I see part of the problem. My story isn't focused on Xander and I'm leaving him human. I don't know what SOD means but Willow and Spike aren't together out of the blue; rewatch Lover's Walk and most of season 4. She was the first one to care if he lived or not after he was chipped. I still feel that my writing while not great style wise has value to myself at least. For that reason I will continue to work it, if it bothers you that much use the hide feature and don't worry about it again.
Review By [LanceAvalon] • Date [9 May 13] • Rating [2 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
Hmmm...if Buffy is a Fae, then I would think a species we did not hear off. One tat is more for balance or specific to protecting humans. Or maybe an anti-fae? If Buffy is fae, then that would mean the watchers council (and angel and spike) lied to everyone about vampires usually having a lack of a soul.
Review By [(Past Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [1 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from Cmiller
Will Faith flirt with Doctor Hotpants?
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [1 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from AllenPitt
There's still a chance to make Kenzi Fae--- one of those bone marrow injections. In fact, Dr. L took a sample from Dyson (then injected the billionaire bad guy with a different Fae, of course). Which would mean she might still have the Dyson sample lying around. Just a thought.
Willow as sidhe is really interesting. Apparently the sidhe had a plan to go into hiding or merge with humanity somehow?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [1 May 13] • Not Rated
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