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Review of chapter "Conclusion" from SamDragon
Review:
Willow is found but where is Xander?
Comments from author:
Still waiting in the wings.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [25 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Conclusion" from Genuka
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Ah, the joys and follys of youth
Comments from author:
Eeyup.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [25 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Conclusion" from Pointer
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Still confused about how all these different elements are mixing together, but its all right, its a fun read.
So, the little guy talks. That should help his case a lot.
If I remember right, if you can have evil dragons, you should have good dragons, possibly neutral and other alignments. Assuming you're using a system.

Enjoyed it.
Comments from author:
I know, I just haven't quite figured out how to work the entire dragon angle yet, you know? And thanks for the review you, BTW.
Review By [Pointer] • Date [24 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Conclusion" from war
Review:
Talk about a fun filled first day of school. Interesting history lesson from the drow.

Good story looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review! More will come, but not for a while.
Review By [war] • Date [24 Apr 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Five" from AndreaMaine
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In this verse I could see a merger at some time between House Summers and Qu'ellar d' Do'Urden. I wonder if it will be Drizzt and Dawn or one of the older Jaluken (males) and Buffy. The Jaliln (females) don't have a Summers they could bond with. I wonder what Qu'ellar d' Do'Urden would think if Qu'ellar Rahn came to Sunnydale to establish their new Moon Shard (an Eilistraee followers' enclave). In the realms of the Neverwinter Nights 2 Persistent Worlds Qu'ellar Rahn was started by me and a few others as a house of Drow who follow Eilistraee instead of Lolth. On most of the PWs I played the Matron Mother, Ilharess Nedylene Rahn. I wonder how Malice and Nedylene would get along.
Comments from author:
Interesting. I confess I didn't have any shippings in mind when I began to write this, and still don't. As for NN2, I haven't really played it, so I honestly cannot say. That said, I do know that Eilistraee's and Lolth's followers didn't get along, so I wouldn't bet anything positive either.
Review By [AndreaMaine] • Date [24 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part One" from (Current Donor)Katrina
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Maybe the others missed the first story? I don't know. I'm enjoying it. Though I admit I've never - as in never - had pickled eggs for breakfast. *can't even contemplate...*

That said, one thing I would suggest is making sure to bind these two stories into a series. It'll make some of the previous comments moot.

*good thoughts*
Comments from author:
Ok, I will.
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [24 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Two" from dhampirkinfolk
Review:
Yeah...your dialogue is awkward and stilted. Your story seems to start in the middle of a scene. It feels like there are chapters missing at the front. Your chapters are so short, it takes longer for the page to load than it does to read them. I suggest dumping this one and starting over.
Comments from author:
I'll think about it, thanks.
Review By [dhampirkinfolk] • Date [24 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Two" from deathgeonous
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And more interesting stuff. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Comments from author:
You're welcome.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [24 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Two" from DragonBard
Review:
Buffy's characterization seems... off.

Especially with her eating pickled eggs.
Comments from author:
I was trying to bring a new side to her character, and there is nothing in canon that says that she doesn't like picked eggs either, you know?
Review By [DragonBard] • Date [23 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Two" from ellf
Review:
Okay. Series has potential, but your wording seems... awkward. No spelling errors, nor technically any grammar errors, but it feels like the speech isn't something people would really say.

Your descriptions feel off too. I'd suggest getting a prereader to help with some of these issues, and your story could be a much more fun read.
Comments from author:
I'll think about it, thanks.
Review By [ellf] • Date [23 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Two" from GraysonPaladin
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Cordy is not human? Things are getting a lot more interesting.
Comments from author:
They are, aren't they?
Review By [GraysonPaladin] • Date [23 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part One" from GraysonPaladin
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I do wonder how have the supernatural world being public knowledge will change everything, and is the Troll afraid of the local Drow family
Comments from author:
You're talking about Snyder, right? He won't be around for a while, yet.
Review By [GraysonPaladin] • Date [23 Apr 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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