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Review of chapter "4" from twlight
This is rather interesting so far. I do hope that you are inspired to update this again soon.
Review By [twlight] • Date [27 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "4" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Whoops! Sorry Angel!
Comments from author:
No whoops - I don't mind the stories where Angel and Buffy get together but I feel that if he isn't at least human then the only way for it to work is if the demon is the one cursed - not the soul. I think cursing the soul was the biggest mistake the Kalderash clan ever did. Torture the demon? hand over the popcorn and give me a seat.
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [11 Feb 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "4" from Eureka
Angel got dusted? LOL
You have a very good start of a story.

Yes, Liam had been a cad, a bounder and several other words I believe where used to describe his living self. I believe he would have been called a man whore or a major player by today's standards.
Comments from author:
Angel isn't the tragic figure that canon paints him in this fic, combining several comments I heard in the various first and second seasons, I decided that Angelus was 'Liam' simply without self-control. Several comments in BtVS lead me to think that most - not all - vampires are like their host bodies only without control. Obviously Spike and Dru are exceptions. I will expand on Angels past a bit in the fic - here I will say that the reason Liams father was so ticked at him on a regular basis was his having to pay dowries to the fathers of Liams 'conquests'. In the seventeen hundreds there was no way of charging a male with rape. The Courts would have levied a fine to the family involved - a hundred pounds or so - a steep fine which would be about 100K in gold nowadays.

Edit: Not to mention pedophile, rapist and candidate for multiple shotgun weddings *snicker* I mean think about it - In Tennessee he'd be married even if the father had to march him to the chapel with a shotgun, California, New York, Nevada and about 25 more of the 50 would throw him UNDER the jail, and depending on his financial status several of the other states would opt for options 1 or 2. In Nevada there's a saying '15 will get you 20' basically if you're not within 1 to 2 years of age of your partner IE she's 14 you can't be older then 16 or younger then 12 or you or she go to jail. So Angel even discounting 200+ years, at say 26 to 29 would be way to old for Buffy unless she was 18 or older.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [12 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "4" from Traveler
This is the start of a well written story. Please continue and if you do I will recommend it. Thanks for sharing with us.
Review By [Traveler] • Date [20 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "4" from removedauthor
Awesome story I hope you continue writing it.
Review By [removedauthor] • Date [20 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "4" from Bobboky
Very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [19 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "4" from CrystalBlaze
Not only did we wind up with Angel Dust, but the Powers That Be Dicks are dead! Hallelujah!
Comments from author:
I thought it would be ironic if Dawn (Morning Light) dusted Angel, and the Powers were the original Shadow men who "created" the Slayer from Sineya so long ago. So a bit of poetic justice there - they forgot that firing the power back at the person who you stole it from is a BAD idea.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [19 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "4" from Chan
Free Will lo and behold the power of choices watching the powers that S you get their just deserts for their actions is motivation enough for me
Review By [Chan] • Date [19 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from banditdoz
Wow, Dawns going to kick arse :D
Comments from author:
Yeah but combat engineers don't just kick butt, they get to make things go BOOM in so many pretty ways.
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [20 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Genuka
Awesome! Love the dream sequences!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [15 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from DarthTenebrus
A thousand year battle with the noted presence of at least two wedge-shaped space vessels? Wouldn't be talking about Star Destroyers, now would we? I'm glad that Dawn got chosen to play a critical role in the predicted upcoming conflict, aside fron fanfic, she so rarely gets a chance to prove her own worth in a fight.
Comments from author:
Thanx for your review, if you look at the Aurora class battlecruiser from Stargate Atlantis you will see a wedge shape and the Destiny from Stargate: Universe is the same shape. That said these vessels are roughly twice the size and were built specifically to fight in a war.... so maybe genetic memory caused the Empire to build in a wedge? Who knows but I don't think you will see Luke stalking Sunnydale looking for Darth Sidious... Hmm... They are still in the middle of the Halloween spell and that does sound like something both Warren and Andrew would do...

Edit: As for Dawn the recording could be in Buffy as well, they are both Summers... But yes she won't be hiding in a corner with her new abilities, she is the combat engineer of the group, Buffy and Xander are the frontline fighters while Willow is the spellcaster. Just remember that as I heard a Engineer say at Fort Knox -Liberal amounts of explosives cure a lot- Everyone has a job and this is one reason I put her age closer to theirs.

Edit 2: After rereading - this record is from the past not the future. Eos Aura is the mage that locked the hellmouths on Earth for 2 million years BTW the date for our purposes is +2,527,750 after sealing.
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [9 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
I like the idea that lots of costumes are to be assigned to students, meaning that the Mayor may have approved Ethan's shop and told the Troll to interact with him. I'm uncertain why you decided that Dawn was never the Key, when this entire "what if" could have been caused by her wishing to be close enough in age to the others that she would be allowed to hang out with them.

I very much like your idea of wicked-smart!Xander who somehow got his teachers to help him look more average to his father.
Comments from author:
I decided when I started this that I wanted to have Dawn as an addition from the start. However I decided that I wanted to avoid the 'Glory' mess completely. Therefore "the Key" is not in this universe at all and Glory was never exiled to this specific realm.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [9 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from trongod
Very different take of the whole Halloween Spell - excellent work!! Hope to see more soon, as the Muses and Real Life allow.

Wondering if Angel, noticing all the Chaos, came rushing up to his pedophilic obsession and got vaporized or not...
Review By [trongod] • Date [9 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Bobboky
Very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [9 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from DragonBard
How will this effect Willow's future with Tara, or Xander's with Cordy or Anya?
Comments from author:
Tara may or may not be more than a bit player, I have to read more about her as I missed most of the 5th, 6th, and 7th Seasons due to work. As for Cordy, maybe we'll see - and Anya I felt was a unfortunate circumstance although she could be used as a occasional assistant - maybe join up with Andrew or Jonathan.
Review By [DragonBard] • Date [9 Oct 13] • Not Rated
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