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Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Gideon
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Typical that what you are most afraid of is also what is most afraid of you!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [2 May 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Mcspender
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On the funny side, I think Gwen won't forget this rookie initiation prank that Seo's pulled on her!!.
And on the serious side, at least Seo had the chance to pay his respects to her dad on his day, giving Gwen the chance to see her real self and just how much she misses her dad.
By the way I hope Seo remember to fix Gwen's Sig P226, those are not cheap xD!!.

Cool fic, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
I think I do, at some point, imply that Seo causes (in part) the financial collapse in mid-2008, trying to steal money to pay for stuff she destroyed. Maybe that's what she's trying to pay for!

And... uh... Buffy did manage to destroy the Torchwood van, earlier...
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [1 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Gideon
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Sneaky, sneaky Seo! She is making her own disaster as a birthday present to herself :) Or maybe she just wanted to check out the new Torchwood member by herself. After Suzue who wouldn't be cautious?

And shouldn't Seo have the same birthday as Dawn?
Comments from author:
You'll see why she doesn't in the Years that Never Were. Trust me, there's a reason her birthday is when it is.

And... no. It isn't the same as Dawn's.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [30 Apr 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Mcspender
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Rules about gun safety http://www.kuci.org/~dany/firearms/gunsafety.html

I think Gwen forgot Rule number 10 of gun safety: never hand a gun to anyone that doesn't understand and abide by these rules. Once they are holding the gun, it is their, not your, responsibility to handle it safely, but you have your conscience to live with.

Well, at least Gwen can say she had a birthday to remember. And If I remember correctly, Gwen used a SIG-Sauer P226 in Torchwood, and I think Buffy is gonna faint when she finds out just how expensive they are xD.

Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Oh, God, I didn't even think about the price of replacing the gun!

Yeah, Buffy's right when she calls Seo a massive "cash deficit." I'm not sure even the full-time-working-for-Torchwood salary would cover it all.

I kind of miss Seo's Glory-style-strength, here. I would have loved to see her break the gun in half across her knee, like she does in Happy Endings. That was such an awesome blend of Buffy-and-Doctor! But... alas... this was not to be.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [30 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Letomo
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Okay, back after a while away.

Loved the start! Of course, they overdid it, and just got Gwen prejudiced against Seo, but it was totally a Torchwood moment. Great to see!

And, the reveal that Seo pulled them away on purpose - also very Seo. Now, did she do the cell-escape, or was that the coincidence part?
Comments from author:
And, of course, the big question: what is Seo up to, and why did she want everyone out of the Hub?
Review By [Letomo] • Date [29 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Gideon
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Ianto is so awesome at listening! Even if he doesn't say very much :) I hope that he can calm Buffy down a little when Seo gets trapped in the hub!
Comments from author:
I always thought Ianto was kind of under appreciated. Every so often, he'll just pop up with something completely ingenious, out of the blue.

And he's also big on the "always-being-preparedness", as Buffy says.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [29 Apr 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Mcspender
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Yep, Ianto has the patience of a saint, oh yeah xD!.
And I really hope that Seo and Gwen can get along, I really do... oh, they will get along like a house and fire, oh yeah xD!.

Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
You'll see...
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [29 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Gideon
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Buffy's blood relative is having a birthday and Buffy is worrying about cake? I think someone needs to jog her memory so she can redirect her worry!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [28 Apr 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Mcspender
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Cake??. I like cake, specially chocolate cake!!.
Why do I think this is gonna be a very wiiild party xD???.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Oooh...

(Suddenly thinking of a Jack birthday party... and thinking it'd be a lot more naked than most other birthday parties...)

Didn't think about that one. I should write that story, too!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [28 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mcspender
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I think Owen forgot to tell Gwen about not letting Seo's getting close to dishwashers. They tend to do strange things when Seo is near them xD.

Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
I dunno how Seo did it. But in my first apartment with a dishwasher, I put hand-dish-detergent into the dishwasher, assuming it was the same.

Boy, did that ever make a mess!

I wonder if Glory can make dishwashers blow up? Maybe that's a hell goddess trick.

(By the way, before you read the next chapter -- no, I don't know if the Torchwood kitchens have a dishwasher. But if they did, they probably don't anymore!)

Thanks for the comment!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [27 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Runewolf
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I really like Owen's reasoning.
Comments from author:
Oh, you haven't even seen Seo launch herself full on into crazy hormone land, yet. She might be part-Time Lord, but the hormones are all human.
Review By [Runewolf] • Date [27 Apr 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
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That is awesome. Seo the dangerous teenager:) I love it!
Comments from author:
I always loved the idea that Torchwood would purposely UNLOCK all the doors, to keep Seo out of places. It's so counter-intuitive, but so something they'd do.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [27 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from wswords
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Did you mean to put this story as complete?

Because if you did than the description is a bunch of lies. The story isn't bad by any means (even by your standards which are much stricter than most others), just not what it says on the tin.

BTW, I think you should defiantly link the series page to the Adventures of a Line Hopper, because you are assuming your readers have read them but not mentioning they exist directly.
Comments from author:
Oops! Thank you for mentioning that. My internet connection screwed up and I had to input all the info about this story twice. Second time... looks like I forgot to switch the "complete" option to "no".

(Don't worry, the rest of the description is coming!)

Good idea. I'll do that.
Review By [wswords] • Date [27 Apr 13] • Not Rated
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