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Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen: Mundane Mornings" from OtteryLexa
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I was expecting the victim in the cave to be Sam Carter, for some reason. And the new demon seems to be a Wraith. You think the demon's prophecy is of the "a great empire shall fall" type?
Review By [OtteryLexa] • Date [30 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen: Mundane Mornings" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
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It has been a while are you going to continue this? I do hope you will.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [13 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen: Mundane Mornings" from spk
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Really enjoying such a unique story. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [6 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve: Conversation in an Armory" from DieselDriver
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I am enjoying this story a LOT! I laughed out loud at this line though...

"bunny-like behavior"

The direction you've taken to get stargate involved is really cool! I am really looking forward to reading the rest of this story and any others you've posted as this seems really original and well written as well.

Thanks for posting
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [25 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen: Mundane Mornings" from CageFire
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Hmm, interesting story I guess. I've only seen some small hints of stargate though. The gates, and the wraith. Not sure if I saw anything else.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [22 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen: Mundane Mornings" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
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it seemed shorter than usual. but still good looking forward to more.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [16 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen: Mundane Mornings" from bradsan
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Good update. I only missed the girl they rescued, what happened to her, did Joyce read her mind

Still thinking that Joyce needs to know more about Buffy's abilities because protecting Joyce this way will only make her worry even more. When she sees what Buffy can do give will give her some relief knowing that Buffy is almost or maybe better at some parts than for example Frost is. But hey that's just me nagging, don't play attention to it. I can be like that.

Do you think you can write a scene where Buffy will be sparring with maybe Lancaster,Frost or Thorne. Could be fun to read.

Buffy didn't tell Thorne and Frost that prophecies are tricky things like the Master said. they don't tell you everything and can be best. Look at Buffy she was prophesied to die and still live.

great update.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [16 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen: Mundane Mornings" from SlowMercury
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This is a very interesting story! I am enjoying the way that Buffy is fitting in to the elven kingdoms. I wonder what the political ramifications of Thorne suddenly getting a full-grown, crazy-badass stepdaughter. The balance of power between the Courts looks pretty unstable.

As for the Frosty Prophecy, well, Buffy et co have had a lot of experience subverting prophecies. I wish them luck with this one.

Anyway, your story is a great mix of action and background detail. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Review By [SlowMercury] • Date [15 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen: Mundane Mornings" from RevDorothyL
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Heh-heh! The old, reliable 'grumpy old man' torture, eh? Works every time!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [14 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen: Mundane Mornings" from Genuka
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*cackle* Ah, the good ole days torture. Such a classic!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [14 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen: Mundane Mornings" from Misty
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Just found, I like, thank you
Review By [Misty] • Date [14 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen: Mundane Mornings" from AllenPitt
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A Wraith showing up...not a good sign. One wonders how much 'time' one could drain out of an elf before they were all used up. And soon Buffy will make a car!
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [14 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen: Damsel in Distress" from MarieKnight
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Very interesting...
Can't wait for SG-1 to be brought into this
Keep writing please!!!
Review By [MarieKnight] • Date [12 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen: Damsel in Distress" from Keshkreature
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Really enjoying this fic :)
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [1 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen: Damsel in Distress" from locard
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Pretty interesting story, different, with some great twists. Looking forward to see how SG1 is going to play in.
Review By [locard] • Date [15 May 13] • Not Rated
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