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Review of chapter "Six: Dead Bodhi" from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
Well, Gibbs is certainly right to be suspicious - a Simulacrum perhaps?
Comments from author:
No comment - but Bodhi leaving her gun and her knife so far out of reach, and fumbling her grab when she did reach the gun, does seem a little out of character, doesn't it? Let alone watching 'Shrek' instead of 'The Wild Bunch' or 'The Texas Chainsaw Massacre'.
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [17 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Six: Dead Bodhi" from Gladius
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Very nice. I do wonder about that amulet Gibbs grabbed ...

If they did manage to really gank Bodhi, its not the end, she's just barred from reentering the Prime Material for, what, 99 years?

Fantastic story, STC, I look forward to the continuation.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [Gladius] • Date [15 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Six: Dead Bodhi" from lunalurker
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Excellent update, full of little twists and such, and the NCIS people get enough explained to them that I can keep up, since I know next to nothing about Faerun stuff. Hope more comes soon.
And the chapter titles are very punny. >.>
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [lunalurker] • Date [15 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Six: Dead Bodhi" from (Current Donor)Sulien
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Sweet! Thank you for the update! This is definitely one of those stories that makes me grin and bounce a little in anticipation any time I see an email notification of a new chapter posted.

It was a lot of fun to read about Gibbs being so gobsmacked that he literally dropped his jaw. *snerk!* It's a good thing Gibbs' gut is nearly always right, that fact will stand him and the team in good stead when Bodhi crops up again. Also, it's nice to see Sam joining the mix and I hope she sticks around.

Thanks again for the new chapter and I hope you are well. :)
Comments from author:
Thank you! Yes, I'm well now.
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [15 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Six: Dead Bodhi" from Senko
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Well I don't think that was Bodhi can't see her enjoying Shrek and Doyle should know it so I'd say that's someone or something else from Faerun and I very much doubt they're dead, dead. If you don't have a body don't count anything out. Bit of shame if it was a duped innocent under mental domination or the like. I'd also be suspicious of that "translation" amulet taking magical objects off an enemies body is risky.

I agree with Cierre there's a lot of nice little cantrips and spells that exist for a wizard repairing, cleaning, lighting (admitedly a lot are less value in a modern world) and the fun thing about convincing a wizard/sorcerer/other arcane class to come over from Faerun (assuming they aren't just after trade, I know if I were an effectively immortal archmage without major responsibilities, Elminster I'm looking at you I'd enjoy going to visit this strange new world and learning about their magic [technology]). Of course once you've got a powerful mage (level 7+) to help you out all those minor things that are wonderful conveniences are easily made as a sideline.

Shame this is going to be delayed while you work on Tabular Avatar, on the other hand I get to read that instead. Of course there's all the OTHER parts of this series at different points in time as well.

Bit of a shame about Lee I was hoping this was before she murdered and framed that other NCIS agent but apparently not.
Comments from author:
Thank you!

Actually it is before Lee murdered and framed Brent Langer - in fact even before she killed Petty Officer Steve Vargo.
Review By [Senko] • Date [15 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Six: Dead Bodhi" from Macfeste
Review:
You honor me, Sir. Very well done.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [Macfeste] • Date [15 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Five: Admiral Ackbar" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thank you! Actually I'm putting this story on hold for a little while because of recent events in the Navy Yard.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [3 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "One: Sergeant Slaughter" from LaraBr
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The more i read of this series the more it strikes me that it could so easily form the basis of an epic BTVS/Angel rpg campaign (i simply can't see D20 covering it). The amount of care and attention to detail this series shows is in my opinion staggering. It has to be my favourite. I can only guess at the extensive notes you must have for it.

This story and the rest of the series is of a standard i wish a lot of professional writers would aspire to. I find myself rereading your stuff time and time again. Thank you for many hours of enjoyment. Can't wait for it to continue.
Comments from author:
Thank you very, very, much.

I'm putting this story on hold for a while because of the recent events in the Navy Yard. I'm picking up on 'Tabula Avatar' again instead and the next chapter of that story will be ready in a couple of days.
Review By [LaraBr] • Date [29 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "One: Sergeant Slaughter" from Gladius
Review:
Great to see another update, keep them coming!
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [Gladius] • Date [11 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Five: Admiral Ackbar" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
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Oh-eeer!

What a way to leave us.

Liked the idea about the hollow points filled with silver. Making silver bullets is way too difficult. Don't forget you can make silver buck shot easier still.

As usual, looking for to the next update.

D.
Comments from author:
They're not keen on the idea of using shotguns in luxury Washington hotels so they decided to stick to pistols for now.

Thank you!
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [11 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Five: Admiral Ackbar" from (Current Donor)Sulien
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A wonderful update! Thank you and I'm very much looking forward to the next one when you have an opportunity.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much!
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [10 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Five: Admiral Ackbar" from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
Another great chapter.

And you just love to torture us, don't you? :-)
Comments from author:
Well, yes. Thank you!
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [9 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Five: Admiral Ackbar" from Marcel
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Yay, new chapter! And it was so action-packed that I have no idea when it ended... just that it was too soon :P

(You're a great writer; I don't say it often enough. I regret that I'm too lazy to hop over to the Isle of Man to buy you a beer.)
Comments from author:
Thank you very much!
Review By [Marcel] • Date [9 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Five: Admiral Ackbar" from AndreaMaine
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Whoa! Wow! Tony! I hope that was a Goa'uld stun grenade and not an explosive one!
Comments from author:
It certainly looks like a Goa'uld stun grenade...
Review By [AndreaMaine] • Date [9 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Five: Admiral Ackbar" from Macfeste
Review:
Of course the mole is agent lee. Of course.

Ziva has managed to pick up so much information in five minutes.. Things would be easier if Cierre had remembered to remove the amulet..

Great Job.
Comments from author:
And the Weatherman is one of The Trust.

In Cierre's defence rather a lot had been happening to distract her.

Thank you!
Review By [Macfeste] • Date [9 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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