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Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve." from kstewie
Review:
First off, great series. secondly, i'm kind of confused-ish. it seems like faith did not recognize those two kids' last name....as i was reading the story, i realized that Neidermyer is the same last name as that recruit/cultist/frat guy and his general gandfather from your previous college fic. so what i'm wondering is either: did faith really not recognize the name? or did willow's reset change more than i thought it would? i was just under the impression that it changed faith's history and whatever happened after she found out about the lies. i thought that the events in between were mostly untouched......either way, looking forward to the next story!
Comments from author:
Hmm, I didn't mean for it to come over like that, so maybe I should look out for that in future.

The next three Fita stories (the ones I've got written) One's a fantasy, ones mainly about Cordy but the third one I think I'm going to have to do some heavy editing because it clears up the Neidermyer connection once and for all!

The story I'm in the process of writing for this series will hopefully deal with the Willow reset fiasco.

I really should learn to plan this stuff out instead of thinking, that sounds like a good idea!

Thanks for the review,
D.
Review By [kstewie] • Date [30 May 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve." from WhippingDawn
Review:
Superb story as usual, and it was nice to see what the "reset" did to Cordy. A superb story, full of action. I was a bit scared for Cordy and her leg, but soon she will dance again. Nice to know.

"Miss Lehane" is indeed a great deal of trouble, but her adventures are a joy to read, especially the ones you tell. I really, really hope to see more.

Thank you again!
Comments from author:
You're too kind.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [WhippingDawn] • Date [19 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve." from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
thank you for a very enjoyable read.
Comments from author:
Thank-you for reading.

D.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [19 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve." from lunalurker
Review:
An excellent adventure story, and it was nice to see Cordy show up for the fun too.
Still worried about poor Willow, though.
Comments from author:
Yeah, what to do about Willow.

Glad you liked this story,

D.
Review By [lunalurker] • Date [18 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve." from Mcspender
Review:
Oh yeah, Queen C and Faithy were quite the good team, Rock & Roll indeed!!.
Nice to see that El Raisuli was able to escape of that mess, as well the Neidermyer kids did it too.
Any chance to see what happened to them later??.

Cool fic, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
Yep there's a story coming up called 'The Rogue's March' which will hopefully tie up any loose ends.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [18 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve." from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
This was a good story (back up your usual standard), but I was hoping for some resolution for the events at the ending of the last story (which, well, wasn't so good).

EDIT: BTW, we never really did see what happened to the Neidermyer kids - their dad did indirectly try to see them dead, after all. Faith *did* promise to try to look after them a bit and I can't imagine their homecoming was as pleasant an affair...
Comments from author:
Don't worry we've not seen the end of Neidermyer, El Raisuli and Yemalia yet! There's another Yemalia story 'The Rogue's March' still to come which hopefully will tie up any loose ends (once I edited it and added a couple of things).

Between you and me this series is likely to come to a close soon as I'm finding it harder and harder to write stuff. I've got one story which I've started that I'm thinking I'm going to make the last (so that'll be 4 more FitA still to go), we'll see but I'm not promising anything, plus I'm not a huge fan of the waking up in the shower and finding everything has changed scene.

We'll see.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [18 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve." from (Current Donor)Cordyfan
Review:
Two excellent action-packed chapters.

Thanks for writing this great story - I'm keeping my fingers crossed that you've another Faith and Cordy sequel in the pipeline.
Comments from author:
Yep I have...Faith and Cordy in Oz!? Probably out in April some time.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [(Current Donor)Cordyfan] • Date [18 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve." from Eureka
Review:
You gonna do another one? Was disappointed to find this was the last chapter and I have read everything you have wrote now.
Comments from author:
I think I have three more Faith in the Army stories written and ready to post, next story will be out April some time.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [18 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten." from Mcspender
Review:
Oh yeah, Faith and Cordy are really rocking the kashba!.
I hope El Raisuli can survive this ambush too, I kinda like the guy.
Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
Rock and roll!

D.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [16 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten." from (Current Donor)Cordyfan
Review:
Another excellent chapter. As a fighting pair, your Faith and Cordy are a perfect match.

Thanks for writing this - and I may just buy the original film on DVD now.
Comments from author:
The original film is well worth at least one viewing; great story, great acting.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [(Current Donor)Cordyfan] • Date [16 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten." from Cmiller
Review:
indeed.
Comments from author:
Of course,
D.
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [16 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from Mcspender
Review:
Yeah, El Raisuli does knows Faith really well xD!!.
Does this means that Faith will adopt the Neidermyer kids???. It could be interesting to see her trying to raise a family and being in the anti-monster unit.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
No, Faith and teenage kids...I think not.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [14 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from (Current Donor)Cordyfan
Review:
Another great chapter. I'm really beginning to warm to El Raisuli - and I'm hoping Faith goes mediaeval on Neidermeyer senior. No matter how odious his brat, refusing the ransom is unpardonable. I get the feeling that El Raisuli will actually be sorry to see the back of Faith when she finally leaves - they're a good match for each other.

Keep up the good work and looking forward to the next chapter.
Comments from author:
Thank-you.

D.
Review By [(Current Donor)Cordyfan] • Date [14 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from WhippingDawn
Review:
I'm stopping reading this story because I'm currently reading "Semper Fidelis". Stitch and Highway have just entered the stage and I don't want to know what happens to them in this story. Kind of kills some of the fun.

Right now I love "Semper Fidelis" but I'll make a separate review for it, probably tomorrow. And I'll read this story in order.

Thank you for the fun!
Comments from author:
No thank-you for all the nice reviews!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [WhippingDawn] • Date [13 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from Mcspender
Review:
The Marines showed why they're the best in the game, oh yeah.

So the President is veery interested in the old Initiative files??. I really hope, if she have plans to redo the whole thing, make it more like a law enforcement agency instead of a black ops thing.
I mean, the pacific demons clans got to know that the government is willing to do things right, and not let people like WR & H runs things.

Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
I don't think President Allen would restart the Initiative, but she probably increased funding for the Army's anti-monster unit.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [12 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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