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The Revenge of Bilis Manger

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Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from wswords
Review:
Pretty sure Amanda died in the final episode of BtVS. That said it could be a different Amanda so it doesn't even rise to the level of a plot hole, even if I am right.
Review By [wswords] • Date [22 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from Gideon
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Owen is grounded for three hundred years? Best line ever!
Comments from author:
I know!

The Torchwood team totally deserved to be chewed out by Buffy. Especially Owen.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [1 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Gideon
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Well that was a death filled chapter! Is there anyone left to save the day?
Review By [Gideon] • Date [1 Jun 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from Mcspender
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Wow, another intense chapter. I hope Seo one day can learn to forgive herself and understand it that, this was not her fault, I mean Bilis played with everyone feelings.
I like the way that Buffy took out the Torchwood team and make them think about their mistakes, and yeah, this was the best outcome of that mess.
Cool fic, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
Well... if there's one person who *really* understands the dangers of opening massive tears in the fabric of the universe, it's Buffy. As Jack said, earlier, Buffy's life has basically been one great big cautionary tale about what can happen if you screw with rifts and things.

Seo is a very sweet person, but she does have certain very in-built insecurities. Partially inherited from her parents (who both have pretty big guilt complexes), but certainly encouraged by Twilight, who spent her childhood trying to convince her to kill herself. She'll probably keep blaming herself for this until she actually gets to that point in her personal timeline, when she meets Bilis Manger in the past, and finds out the truth.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [1 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from Mcspender
Review:
Oh yeah, Bilis got what he deserved. He's quite the evil creep and it shows, and I really want to see what was the real chain of events that led him to become jailed in the Rift, not his woe is me, I'm a victim blaming you because you don't let me commit genocide that's it's so common in the Doctor Who universe.

Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [30 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Mcspender
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Holy Molly, this chapter, was reaally intense or what xD????.
I hope Seo and Buffy can stop the monster in time.
Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [29 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from Mcspender
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At least it's not Yellowstone and its volcanic caldera, that's gotta count for good luck xD!.
Good luck to Giles and his ancient cough, he's gonna need it.
Poor Buffy, she's basically reduced to the intelligence level of a Baby, I hope Alison can help her, and David, oh damn, I hope he gets better of this sudden case of caveman attack :S.

Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [28 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Mcspender
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Lies, damned lies and slander, seems like Bilis is an expert in those things. Meanwhile, I think that Alison and Buffy can put a little business as a wrecking crew, after all this mess is over xD!.
Sunnydale wrecking crew, we tear things down xD!!!.
Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [27 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Gideon
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What a terrible vision to show to Seo! I hope she realizes that Billis might be lying. That is what I am hoping:(

And from what I have seen so far the Earth is in safe hands with Alison at the wheel!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [27 May 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Mcspender
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And now it's Alison turn, I hope she can throw a big enough wrench in Bilis and Ethan plan.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Oh, you're gonna get to see a lot of Alison being awesome, soon enough. There is a reason that Bilis Manger happens to know Alison's name and who she is, you know.

You haven't seen the last of Ethan Rayne in this series, either.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [26 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Gideon
Review:
So now Seo is alone and in a coma? This sounds like it is part of Manger's plan all along!
Comments from author:
Oh, yes! Manger is certainly working to a different agenda to the others. And particularly in regards to Seo.

I always liked the idea that Seo is the one person Manger *doesn't* want to open the rift. Because he knows she'd do it sneakily, in such a way that would trap him. He wants her to do something else, while Torchwood opens the rift.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [26 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Gideon
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Ouch. That hits a bit close to home:( Still if Willow could heal Tara then there is still hope.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [25 May 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Mcspender
Review:
I hope you can fix your computer soon, it's usually the power source when that happens, so don't worry too much, it's gonna be easy to fix =).
Now unto the tale.
Oh hell, that was one absolutely nasty and cruel thing what Ethan and Bilis did to Buffy, now I know why Seo's is gonna chain him to the Rift in the future, because he deserves it.

Well, at least the slayers can say they got some pretty historical beasties to their kill record xD!.
Wonder what's gonna be Dawn's reaction when she finds out where is Seo.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [25 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Mcspender
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I like Alison grounding Seo's in the most urgent problem: finding Buffy. Instead of being goaded and taunted around by Bilis and his agenda.

Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [23 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Gideon
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Good thing Seo isn't there alone! If Alison keeps Seo on track then maybe they have a chance!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [23 May 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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