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Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Part Seven" from raxadian
Review:
And a bond was formed, maybe she can be her Watcher too?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [15 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Part Six" from raxadian
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Yes, being a Slayer sucks.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [10 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Part Seven" from Starfox
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Great chapter. I love the talk with Hermione, the inisights into Luna's family and history, all colored with her unique viewpoint. Well done.
Review By [Starfox] • Date [10 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Part Six" from Starfox
Review:
A very touching chapter. I love how Charlie Weasley, often an ignored character, has a central role in Luna's life - and vice versa. And good insights into the whole Dragon Task, and the consequences.
Comments from author:
I rather love Charlie - I think Charlie, Padma, Dean, Fleur and Seamus became some of these odd background characters that I fell in love with as I wrote them in my last long HP-crossover. So, don't be surprised if some - or all of them - show up in different ways. *laughs*

The Dragon Task just made me angry on many levels and I think that reflected in Luna. Poor girl is going to have a hard time with the next two as well.

Thanks for continuing to review, Starfox - I appreciate the feedback.
Review By [Starfox] • Date [8 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Part Six" from TroyGuffey
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Very nice chapter.

I do agree that the First Task was a horrible thing. Even if Dragons aren't endangered (but how could they not be if they can all be kept on Reserves) Krum and Harry task ended badly for the dragons.
Comments from author:
Thank you - I apologize for the lateness of my reply, I tend to grab reviews when I post new chapters. *grins*

Much of the book I am simply remembering from when I read it years and years ago - but I had wanted to catch up on the Task because I remembered it bothering me for some reason. When I did - wow, I got majorly upset at basically every part of it. I empathized - probably way more than the book meant me too - with the dragons. That's probably reflected in Luna. *snorts*

Thanks so much for continuing to review!
Review By [TroyGuffey] • Date [7 Sep 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Part Five" from raxadian
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Well, is nice indeed to have friends.
Comments from author:
That it is - and I really like having Luna not just accumulating these friends, but sometimes simply allies, unknowingly. Those sort of connections can be very valuable for a Slayer in a world at War.

Thanks so much for continuing to review - sorry all of these responses are a bit late, I found your reviews while I was posting another chapter. *grins*
Review By [raxadian] • Date [5 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Part Three & Part Four" from raxadian
Review:
Pegasi uh?
Comments from author:
I only remember them being refereed to as Flying Horses in the books - but I rather love thinking of them as Pegasi. It works. I'm using that. *laughs*

Thanks so much for continuing to review, raxadian!
Review By [raxadian] • Date [5 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Part Two" from raxadian
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And to think that only girl is like only 1/4 not human.
Comments from author:
Yup, but I think - especially with Veela in the books, even with the blood diluted that much they gave off many of the characteristics of their full-blooded ancestors. I like character/world building and since there isn't that much, in depth, done on Veela in the books I'm going to play with it a bit - as I have want to do. *grins*.

Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [raxadian] • Date [5 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Part Five" from Starfox
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Very good chapter. I loved the discussion, sprunkled with help from Luna's sisters, manifesting as eccentric manners, and her refreshingly pure views.
Comments from author:
*laughs* I very much like to keep Luna, -Luna- , as much as possible - even if sometimes now her oddities are triggered by a head full of Slayers. *grins*

Thanks for continuing to review, Starfox - I really appreciate the feedback.
Review By [Starfox] • Date [4 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Part Three & Part Four" from (Current Donor)vidicon
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A frightening and beautifully, hauntingly sad chapter. Maybe Fleur can help Luna too. She needs more friends.

Thanks for writing

I think Fleur as a big sister to Luna, and even Ginny (who lacks a female role model other than her sister) could work very well indeed. It might also make Fleur more 'human' to the Weasleys before she shows up with Bill.

I look forward to reading the visit to the Beauxbatons Barracks.
Comments from author:
She will continue to play a role (I hesitate with the word friend because that word is loaded with meaning within this story) - the more I write Fleur though, the more I like her being an almost big sister figure. I very much think that despite having so many "Sisters" in her brain, Luna misses having an older female around - who is physically there. And I think Fleur likes the chance to act maternal (she certainly acts that way towards her sister as well) when so much of the world treats her like something to lust after.

Sorry, if I wrote a bit much - I am in the middle of another chapter so I am figuring a few things out, I suppose, and once I started typing it rolled out a bit. *grins* I thank you for your kind words and for taking the time to review.
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [3 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Part Three & Part Four" from TroyGuffey
Review:
This is a great story. This is one of the best Lunas out there.
Comments from author:
Thank you - that is a wonderful compliment, makes me blush *laughs*. But truly, I love writing from Luna's POV and am glad you feel it is working. Thank you for taking the time to leave such lovely comments, TroyGuffey - I appreciate the feedback.
Review By [TroyGuffey] • Date [1 Sep 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Part Three & Part Four" from Starfox
Review:
Great chapter! A touching, moving scene with Fleur and Luna, yet typically Luna, down to her comment at the end. Well done!
Comments from author:
Thanks, Starfox. Their meeting was important to me, I was a bit anxious about it actually - their are a few key meetings for Luna like that, usually between a character who isn't quite human and her. Another previous one was when she first met Professor Lupin on the train after she had killed the Dementor. That was actually one of the first sections I wrote of this fics - quite some time before I actually posted it.

*snort* Wow, I'm tired and writing way to much again. I do apologize for my type-chattiness. And I shall just say thank you again for taking the time to review!
Review By [Starfox] • Date [1 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Part Two" from starwolf
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I have enjoyed this very much this morning. there was definitely room for someone else after Kendra died before Faith became active. did the council try something stupid, or did something happen like with Buffy? I look forward to further chapters. thanks
Comments from author:
Thank you for your kind words, starwolf. As for more information on the Slayer line - I hesitate because I know I will play with that and the Slayers in Luna's head more in future chapters. Thanks for taking the time to review.
Review By [starwolf] • Date [1 Sep 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Part Two" from (Current Donor)BaronScrewtape
Review:
I am glad I found this gem.
Hopefully you will continue it.
Comments from author:
Thank you for your kind words - and I just posted new chapters so you won't have to wait long for me to continue, BaronScrewtape. *grins* Thanks for taking the time to review!
Review By [(Current Donor)BaronScrewtape] • Date [1 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Part Two" from Starfox
Review:
Good chapter. Fleur recognizing Luna (or recognizing her as something dangerous) is a very nice touch. Loved the letter Exchange Scenes, and I am looking Forward to Luna and Fleur having a real meeting.
Comments from author:
Thank ya - I like the idea of Luna becoming this axis of many disparate people (both human and non-human). And I am fond of exploring other side aspects of Veela-ness weather it be their history or more minor powers. And I just posted the chapter with Luna and Fleur's actual meeting - so you won't have to wait too long! *grins*
Review By [Starfox] • Date [1 Sep 14] • Not Rated
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