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Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Part One" from bookworm
Review:
Ooh, yay! Glad to see more of this, and this was a fun chapter. So, Slayers can kill Dementors... that could make some interesting changes. Will Luna ever let Remus know she knows? Or tell anyone else for that matter?
Comments from author:
I'm glad your liking it, bookworm. I had a bad spell but am trying to poke back at writing again and this story is calling. *laughs*

I don't really think I'm setting a president in this story for Slayers being able to kill Dementors - or rather be able to block out their effects. I think Luna is a rather odd case with her connection to all of her "Sisters" in her head and the only other Buffyverse cannon gal close to that, in terms of openness, would really be Dana. So, I think any of the Slayers could kill a Dementor with ranged weapons or if the horrible creatures didn't have their powers - without them I think it would be relatively easy for anyone to *grin*. But only someone like Luna or Dana who is incredibly open to the Slayer line and could be mentally boosted/protected by Sisters - and that is only in that oddly berserker state that can't really safely be maintained.

Does that make sense?

As for telling Remus, things on that front simmer a bit until the whole ending of this book plays out and then...well I don't want to give everything away! But Luna will be pulling more people into her circle of friends - not always exactly telling them, just as she didn't exactly -tell- Harry but he saw things. You don't -always- have to spell out the Slayer tale for people to get that your different after all. *laughs*

Thanks for reviewing, bookworm.
Review By [bookworm] • Date [11 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Part One" from yuiop
Review:
Nice
Comments from author:
*curtsies* Thank ya kindly, yuiop.
Review By [yuiop] • Date [7 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Part One" from RowanChick
Review:
love it :) great chapter, loved the Harry/Luna scene and the part with the dementor and Remus :) keep up the great work :) maybe Luna takes a midnight stroll and runs into the Headmaster while strolling the halls and gives him socks lol, can't wait to see more :)
Review By [RowanChick] • Date [3 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Part One" from Chan
Review:
Strange thy name is lovegood, but that very strangeness that people believe lovegoods have would maybe hide her very effectively, wondering what's the what for the remainder of the chapters
Review By [Chan] • Date [3 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Part One" from Jazzibear
Review:
Very good, this. A good notion for Luna to become a Slayer, for almost everyone (bar Ginny and Harry) expects Luna to be strange, so a little more strangeness is neither here nor there.

I look forward to more, very much.

By the way (no criticism intended), there are a couple of places where quiet has has been replaced by quite, which reads a bit oddly.
Comments from author:
Indeed, amongst the humans most just think Luna strange because she is a Lovegood and easily overlook any quirks because of that. But, I do admit, as I go year by year I will be expanding her friends and allies - like you, I look forward to this very much (and that is probably odd for me to say about my own fic.)

And I thank you for letting me know about the quite/quiet problem I have some bad grammar and spelling habits that I've been trying to break myself of over time but some like the one you pointed out and, the common, there/their/they're keep cropping up. *sigh* It is all a process, I suppose.

Thank you for your kind words and for taking the time to review, Jazzibear.
Review By [Jazzibear] • Date [3 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Part One" from Starfox
Review:
Good chapter! Loved the scene at the end. Luna definitely should meet the scoobies later.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked it - I had quite a bit of fun with both the dementor and her interaction with Professor Lupin. And Luna might meet the Scoobies eventually - but I do warn you, if that happens, it will be quite a ways down the line. I have plans for Luna having a Slay-ole-time independent of the Council (even Scooby run) through the entire run of the books.

Thank you for reviewing, Starfox!
Review By [Starfox] • Date [3 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Part One" from Martin
Review:
Why would Dobby be stealing Harry's mail after 2nd year? He did that after 1st.
Comments from author:
Hmm, am I getting my wire's crossed? I might be mixing up the whole Harry's (and the cannon) 1st and 2nd with Luna's which is always a year later. I'll look back into it - I didn't check on that bit while writing because I had a vague recollection of there being trouble with correspondence (but perhaps that was them keeping things from him - I know that happened at times as well). Huh. I'll look it up later and make tweeks if necessary.

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Martin.
Review By [Martin] • Date [3 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Part One" from lunalurker
Review:
Delightful. Looking forward to more. :)
Comments from author:
I am so glad you're liking it, lunalurker - and I am writing more in between Wishlist, Yuletide, and PinchHit prompts. *laughs* I may have made my brain over busy with fandom. Thanks for taking the time to review!
Review By [lunalurker] • Date [3 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue: Part 1" from JamesBrown
Review:
I also am liking this.
But if you DO decide you want to fit this into the Buffy timeline
the best place is probably the 'glory' story arc.
in story Canon any time of slayer dies -even for a few minutes-
another one is called.
...except when Buffy jumps off the tower to save Dawn.
the usual explanation is that the slayer line
now goes through only faith but if that's true,
how could Willow use Buffy to activate all the slayers?
but if Luna was being hidden by her father,
the Council would not be able to -find- a new slayer.
this give you at least several years before you have to deal
with the Scooby's looking very hard for lots of baby slayers
Comments from author:
Hmmm....I'm not entirely sure on your terminology - as in I don't really know what the "glory" arc is. But, I do like the idea you lay out of having Luna be called through Buffy from when she died jumping off the tower saving Dawn. It gives me a large amount of time to work in this HP universe before Willow/New Scooby Council would think to look for her (if she would want to be found then) and also plays with the idea of a possible dual line, while also having three living Slayers (not to mention all the baby Slayers).

I also find it funny that in my head Luna would get along easily with Post-series Faith but rather confound Buffy at first. Because Luna is a strange bird - she takes her Calling seriously but doesn't let it weigh her down emotionally, and is rather lackadaisical overall despite many hits.

I'm still not certain I will have Luna come into contact with the Scoobies, JamesBrown, but this is now ruminating in my brain and if I do decide to eventually have the groups and timelines sync up I think this will work rather well. I thank you very much for the idea and for reading my fic.
Review By [JamesBrown] • Date [2 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Part One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Spooky and verging on some AU-ey goodness. Thanks for continuing.
Comments from author:
Thank you, VillageOrchid. And although I will basically be following along with the story of the books, there will be parts where I diverge - and dance a bit in AU-ness. *laughs* Thanks for continuing to read and review - I really appreciate it.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [2 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Part Two & Three" from (Past Donor)zephyrRS
Review:
Love the insight and perspective!
Comments from author:
Thank you very much, zephyrRS. You know I adore, Luna - and making her a Slayer was something that just wouldn't leave me. (Still won't and I have Wishlist things that need work *shakes fist at muses*)

Thanks for taking the time to review!
Review By [(Past Donor)zephyrRS] • Date [27 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Part Two & Three" from Starfox
Review:
Very interesting and novel idea, and executed well. I like this Luna, and her thoughts fit her well.
Comments from author:
Thank ya, Starfox - I appreciate that. I very much wanted it to still be -Luna- even though she was now a Slayer (something that might seem a bit at odds with her cannon nature).

And thanks for taking the time to review.
Review By [Starfox] • Date [26 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Part Two & Three" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
Quite lovely!!
Comments from author:
*curtsies* Thank ya kindly, Luna-dear. I just posted another chapter as well. -hint hint- Oh, I am so very subtle. *laughs*
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [26 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Part Two & Three" from (Past Donor)BuffyFan
Review:
More please
Comments from author:
Thank ya for commenting, BuffyFan - I actually just posted another chapter just now (that's actually how I noticed this comment - sorry for the delay on answering BTW.)
Review By [(Past Donor)BuffyFan] • Date [25 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Part Two & Three" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Thanks for continuing this story.
Comments from author:
You're very welcome, VillageOrchid. I actually had quite a bit of this (and the next chapter) written back when I originally posted the prologue - it was just some of the connective parts that ended up being like pulling teeth.

Thanks for continuing to read and review my stories
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [25 Nov 13] • Not Rated
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