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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)exiled
Review:
Good story concept, and writing. I hope you update soon!
Comments from author:
Thank You!, and the next chapter is over halfway done. Unfortunately, I'm a really slow writer :(
Review By [(Past Donor)exiled] • Date [10 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from spk
Review:
Definitely intrigued...can't wait to read more. :)
Comments from author:
Thank you for reading!
Review By [spk] • Date [28 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
Review:
Great premise! I love how you have made this start a little different from most crossovers. I hope Buffy is able to stabilise her abilities and make a useful contribution to the team. I do love to see a capable Buffy.
I wonder if she will make it out of the mountain? If there is anywhere on earth she would have trouble getting away from that would be it! (As long as she sticks to not hurting anyone that is, no-one could contain a Slayer who would stop at nothing.)
It would certainly be hard for SG1 to track her down once she mingles with the populace.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I loved the idea that came from the challenge so all the credit for that goes to Jovenena, which as I write this I realized that I forgot to add that part, its fixed now. Buffy learning to control the magic, and discovering the difference that have came up with the new dimension's effects on her magic, will be part of the story. It wont be where Buffy now has magic so Buffy now has perfect controll of magic, I think that would just cripple the story. Yeah, she out, but she still has much to deal with, in addition to magic, and no id or money. Alot of things will take her by surprise. And SCG will have alot to contend with, not only did the lose a possibly contaminated hostel alien, but there is also the NID, that they don't know about yet. O.O opps, a spoiler! lol
Review By [Gideon] • Date [28 Sep 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
so glad you came back to this. I am curious about what comes next and if she does get out how they will find her. of course the glowing eye thing and the voice thing might be hard to hide. She was acting a little animal-is-tic I guess the slayer was in the fore, will Buffy be able to get back to semi normal? lol looking forward to more
Comments from author:
Me too, after the request for more, I wanted to continue, but didn't want to do a same old type of plot. The voice and the eyes will be addressed, Buffy just hasn't realized it yet that they are there, the one time she saw her reflection she was already being effected by the virus. Buffy has already overcame the virus, it was after her encounter with Daniel that she took a nap, hours later she woke with a clear mind.
Thank you for taking the time to comment :)
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [27 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Zephal
Review:
Interesting. Perhaps next chapter we can see the SGC's take on her escape, picking up from where this chapter ended? And maybe some comments from Jack and/or Daniel about being used as a teddybear?;)

Here's for hoping next chapter comes quicker than this did!^^
Comments from author:
Thank for reading! You will have to read the next chapter, or the one after that, or the one after that.... to find out :P
Review By [Zephal] • Date [26 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TrevaRea
Review:
Good job so far!

I would make only one suggestion... slow down. Take a look at what you've written and read it out loud, word for word. You make some errors that would be easy to catch if you do this. Otherwise your writing is good.

Will be glad to see more.

Treva Rea
Comments from author:
Thank you for reading, and I am always will to listen to advice. I will add that.
Review By [TrevaRea] • Date [26 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from bradsan
Review:
Maybe not a super Buffy but certainly a Buffy with more abilities than she ever could dream off.

Lets see what knowledge each off them has.
Xander: smarter than he thinks he is, soldier, knows how to fix things, comics, knows languages and demons which he isn't aware he knows them just by researched.
Willow: really "book" smart, languages old and new, read a lot of spells and how to preform them, computerwiz(hacking etc), demon she ever read about.
Giles: smart, book knowledge, spells how to use and to preform them, languages old en new, art and the danger they can provide etc.
Buffy: smart, flexible, strong, can think on her feet, languages old, demons, strategy, tactical, magical etc.

The mind is a strange thing. You forget a lot of things. With the joining spell a lot of things even the ones you/they don't know they had are in Buffy's mind and will probably pop up when she needs them.

Maybe not super Buffy but she definitely has a lot more abilities and knowledge in her mind then she ever could dream off. For once I'm glad Giles was in it. Because his knowledge what could go wrong will help her how to preform certain spells/rituals properly so they won't go wonky like they did with Willow.

This is gone be so much fun.

keep going Love it so far.
Comments from author:
Ahhh, but that would be cheating if I used all the knowledge from each of them. I want this story to be about Buffy strugling with the magic that she suddenly has, (as well as there maybe being new rules since its a new universe), as well as some other things that wont be mentioned right now.

But what she has gain is alot, how she utilizes it or if it henders her remains yet to be seen.

I glad that you're enjoy it!
Review By [bradsan] • Date [26 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Starfox
Review:
Good story so far - quite funny entrance and antics in the SGC. Once she starts using Willow's magic, she should be home free.
Comments from author:
She slid right out without them being the wiser ;) I'm glad you like it so far.
Review By [(Current Donor)Starfox] • Date [26 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from tosca
Review:
Great start! Looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing. :-)
Comments from author:
And thank you for reading!
Review By [tosca] • Date [26 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from raxadian
Review:
Pretty shinnies? What is she? A ferret?

Ah right the virus, kinda forgot that episode.
Comments from author:
lol, my daughter used to call door nobs that when she was little, I thought that that was a phrase that I could see Buffy using, normally, when not talking about door nobs.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [26 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Jazzibear
Review:
Some tidying up needed, but very promising. I like. Want more!
Comments from author:
Yeah, I really need a beta for this and others. I am very glad that you like it!
Review By [Jazzibear] • Date [26 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TroyGuffey
Review:
I'm guessing that Daniel is going to get SUCH teasing for the Buffy-huggage. Also, Buffy isn't quite running on all cylinders.

I'm also guessing that's she's using a "notice-me-not" spell to get to the elevator.
Comments from author:
Yeah, that was the only spell that I thought that Buffy would be comfortable using.
Review By [TroyGuffey] • Date [26 Sep 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from raxadian
Review:
Well, when Super Buffy wakes up, it will be interesting.
Comments from author:
If I can ever figure out a halfway decent plot, her waking up will be interesting, but she won't exactly be 'Super Buffy', I've always hated when a character is made where they can do any and everything. Ive figured the...upgrades... that she received, could hinder her maybe, or make her really have to work on control, something like that on top of having to deal with the Stargate 'verse. Plus, I want her presence to make a difference, not just be something that was added and no changes made. Because, honestly, can you imagine Buffy being there and not changing anything?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [28 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from bradsan
Review:
I want to read more. Please update.

great first chapter
Review By [bradsan] • Date [21 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from randyzoopurple
Review:
update please
Review By [randyzoopurple] • Date [3 Feb 14] • Not Rated
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