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Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from agnar
Review:
This was looking good, until you handed 'Jean' the stupid ball allowing for the threesome to take place.

Jean Grey, the PHOENIX! The most powerful freaking TK user on EARTH and a really strong telepath too, yelled to LOGAN to stop the witch, rather than oh, using her fucking MIND to shut Catherine off, or fling her away or ANYTHING, which would have surely been WAY faster than Logan running to the attacker.

Sorry but bullshit. A sneak attack from behind with the spell could've worked. But the way you did it just doesn't. It turns what is the most powerful woman on Earth into some helpless moronic damsel, like canon 'Lady Useless' that Buffy dressed as because she need Logan to stop the witch, when Jean can destroy a planet if she wished to.
Review By [agnar] • Date [12 Feb 14] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 16 - Book 2" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Great chapter!

Tom.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [26 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 16 - Book 2" from RHatch
Review:
good update
Review By [RHatch] • Date [25 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 16 - Book 2" from Harry
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Stephen Strange does not loose his composure very often., So, when he does, STAND UP AND LISTEN! I think that if and when the mayor makes his move for power, it may take the Sunnydale gang and the X-Men, along with whatever other allies that they can get together, to stop him. Blowing up the school is not a option now. And, when it comes to ADAM, SHIELD can help deal with him., Glory, THAT is going to take Magic users to deal with her!

As far as Xander and Cordellia are concerned, their powers are going to show up and cause problems in the future. For Xander, its going to be dealing with his father and his abuse of him and his mother. That Guy is going to either end up in jail or DEAD! As for Ms. Chase, the arguments are going to hide the fact that someone has been doctoring the books and Mr. Chase might be going to jail!
Review By [Harry] • Date [25 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from Bobboky
Review:
very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [21 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from Chikageko
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Y'know... If either Mags or Chuck were REALLY serious about the mutant freedom thing they'd have picked a homeland and started _discretely_ collecting the worlds mutants there. Mass emigration, Ethnic spread type of deal. Sunnyhell would be perfect place to start for a crossover verse because of the 'weird shit-o-meter blindness field' the Mayor's set up around the place. Xavier USED to do that with his psychic powers for the school and the tristate area in general but to increase drama and introduce a moral crutch he stopped and started saying that type of manipulation was bad.

Another way to go about it would be to take over a large company and hire mutants discretely and wholesale. This would give them jobs and cashflow removing the image of disgusting abarant beggar from their ethnic group, give them an easily accessible and organized defense structure and put mutant powers to productive big money uses to A) get the company buku bucks and B) eventually show the world that 'mutants good'.

Third and final genuinely workable way would be for chuck or mags to gather those omnipresent geneticists and nano-tech engineers that are always spamming crazy into the Marvel and specifically mutant verse and develop a method of playing with mutant genetics, offering normal people cool mutant abilities and those suffering for their 'Ass End Of Stupid' mutations a release form their personal hells. That last part would more often than not include physical dimorphic mutations, but not always; sometimes it's cool to be a monster and sometimes your mutation is just inconvenient like rogue and scot.
Review By [Chikageko] • Date [21 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
What no-one seems to remember and what should be explained to Scott is that Professor Charles Francis Xavier was a soldier and fought in the Korean War.

(I'm surprised there's not more X-men/M*A*S*H crossovers, as Charles and Cain were not only both there, but in the same unit!! This is how the big guy ran afoul of the Crimson Gem of Cyttorak.)

Logan and Fury respect each other--They are both therefore wary of each other, as well.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [21 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from Harry
Review:
Well, at least for no, there is no threat of a Dark Willow, thanks to Rack having been taken out by Logan. And I understand Scott's reluctance to kill. But, as Jean put it, sometimes, its better to strike now, than risk things getting out of hand in the future. And speaking of the future, now both the X-Men and the Sunnydale gang know about the Mayor. Knowing about him will put a crimp possibly in the plans to kill Kendra if she shows up, and in what might happen to Faith if she shows up! I'd rather keep Faith on the side of the Angels, as possibly Logan's daughter. Kill when necessary, but only if there is no other option.
Review By [Harry] • Date [21 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Oh now those last two developments are the most interesting, SHIELD and Dr. Strange knowing about the Hellmouth plus the Old Gods getting their mandate back.

Now the first is really going to mess up the Mayor's plans - or could really mess up the Mayors plans. Because if I recall correctly I don't think the Mayor ever actually ran for office, he faked it which SHIELD should be able to figure out fairly quickly. And Dr. Strange, well he is not going to be amused about an attempted assention on his turf, not amused at all.

The Old Gods getting their mandate back is longer term possibly more interesting and disruptive - magic may start working better? Since the gods will be more active and respond to requests more? They will be showing up more like Thor and Loki do in the Marvelverse - trying to impact their portfolios? Interesting, very interest...

Tom.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [21 Sep 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from CrystalBlaze
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I understand where Cordy's coming from,and Xander should figure this out seeing it in Jean--When your eyes are well and truly opened to something that has always been in the background, your entire take on what you thought you knew takes a turn into left field and you'll find suppressing that truth difficult if not impossible (and most likely futile in any event).
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [11 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Great chapter, I love it!

Tom.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [10 Sep 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from deathgeonous
Review:
You know, I've been wanting to read this for a while, but time, she is elusive. Anyways, great fic, I really am enjoying it, so, thanks for writing it, and goodbye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [10 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from cjcold
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Nice update.

I like the talk between Logan, Jean, and Betsy. I could see Logan being so focused on Jean that he didn't realize feelings for Betsy. I am kind of suprised that Logan didn't claw Scott to death for the cockblock.

Nice meeting with the Scoobies, Xander and ladies held it together well. Though Cordelia was definitely getting agitated at the end of school. Still things worked out well with the confrontation with Harmony. And Aura seems to be a possible friend for Cordy. Speaking of I liked Amy's thoughts on Xander and as long as she understands he is taken then they might be good friends. Given Xander seems to lean towards female friends. Not that Logan himself has loads of male friends he hangs out with much. Aside from war buddies.

Might want to have Jenny buy the pregnancy tests. As SunnyD is small enough for a bit of scandal with a highschool girl to buy a test kit. Not to mention being seen in a car with a boy after getting the kit makes him primary suspect for daddy.

More soon please.
Review By [cjcold] • Date [10 Sep 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from Bobboky
Review:
Good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [9 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from removedauthor
Review:
Fantastic chapter as ever. Have you thought of making this story not just a X-Men crossover but crossing it over with say Stargate or Star Wars perhaps. Say for example a mutant they encounter be it a friend or foe has the ability to open portals/gateways to other dementions/realities be it permanently or temporary or at the will of the mutant?
Review By [removedauthor] • Date [9 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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